Warrior Cats: The Four Clans

Really cool. Can't wait till you post the first!

What if Ravenpaw had never seen wat happened with Tigerstar (Claw at the time)??!?!?!?!?

Ravenpaw was on his way to yellowfang's den because his tummy hurt. "i knew i should of just had 1 mouse. Stupid stupid now I'm missing training." Thought Ravenpaw.He walked into the den and said "Yellowfang i've got a stomach ach . Can I have something for it." Yellowfang said"Yeah you can have something just hold on let me get it"she said in her raspy mew."Let me guess it was that extra mouse Firepaw warned you not to eat. huh!" At that ravenpaw blush under his dark fur he was shure he could see it."Yes i supose so. I had a feeling that he was right i just didn't listen." said Ravenpaw embarassed."And now your paying the price"She said."her take this watermint (u do use watermint 4 belly achs right) and then go lay down." "Yes Yellowfang"He meowed turning to go back to the warriors den."One more thing Ravenpaw isn't it about time for your warrior cerimony?" "yeah it is isn't it."

2 Months Later

Bluestar jumped up to High Rock and called the clan."Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey join under the High rock for a clan meeting."Ravenpaw padded out of the apprentice's den with his fur sleekand shiny. His mentor walked him up to High rock and sat down a few pawsteps back. Bluestar jumped down and said "Ravenpaw do you promise to protect and care for you clan even at the coast of your life?" "i promise" "Ravenpaw from this day on you will be known as Ravenstripe. may Starclan light you path." She rested her head on his and he licked her shoulder respectfuly. He turned and watched his whole clan yell "Ravenstripe! Ravenstripe! Ravenstripe!"

after the battle with Bloodclan.

firestar jumped up to high Rock and nnounced "i have some bad news In the battle with bloodclan we lost a Whitstorm He was a fierce warrior and a loving Father. Tonight we will sit vigle for him." Firestar changed the subject "We need a new deputy. I have been thinking and our new Deputy will be Ravenstripe" firestar jumped down from high rock and called Ravenstripe over to him "Ravenstripe order some patrol and see to it that the wounded get medical attentiction."

well, are you saying that hed die before his warrior ceremony? 0_o bcuz tigerclaw wouldnt be able to hold him back from it forever

it was pretty good. i just think you should of put more parts in it.