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TOPIC: Applesause -Chapter Four up and Edited!-


RiverClan Warrior

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RE: Applesause -Name contest! Check first post-


oh! The Avatar thingy where Katara does Blood-Bending! n.n

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Avatar wha? I never watched that show. What's that?
o.o' Sorry. I never felt the urge to watch a show about a 113 y.o. I saw the 1st episode. I didn't enjoy it. XP I like more action-y things.
And tehn I was forced to watch the last. That one was okey. But still. I'd rather watch Independance Day. I LOVE that movie.
In a good movie/show, someone MUST die whether tehy're good or bad.

-- Edited by Kestreleye at 17:26, 2008-08-31

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07.08.13

okay, then.
unfortunately loving an idiot
who doesn't love me back.
but i'm not falling.
i just kind of...
am.



WindClan Apprentice

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Oh, Independence Day IS awesome! n_n

Ah! Yes, from Avatar! I don't normally watch that, same as Kessy. But, one night I was bored and they were showing that episode on T.V. xD

Lol, I WATCHED ACROSS THE UNIVERSE LAST NIIIIIIIIIIIIGHT!!!! :DDD
I have the sudden urge to write story... :3

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And I advise you not to put them to waste.
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Really? Cool? I was watching... Something. Oh! Wait, I was texting. XD Anyways, yeah. I'm writing anotehr story. Unsure if I should post it. It's wher eI do blood weaving and all of that, and more. It's like, I'm the leader, and there's others, and we can each do something... It's with me and my friends. That's why. I mgith just change names.

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07.08.13

okay, then.
unfortunately loving an idiot
who doesn't love me back.
but i'm not falling.
i just kind of...
am.



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Ooh, sounds interesting. -eyebrow thingy- xD
Across the Universe is awesome, and it's completely based off of songs by The Beatles. ^_^

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We all have our moments:
A moment to cry, a moment to laugh.
A moment to be held, a moment to be let go.
A moment to be sad for not having what we want,
and a moment to be happy with what we got.

Yeah, we all have those moments.
And I advise you not to put them to waste.
:aww:


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My favorite album by them is The Revolver. :D It's beautiful! I liek the song Michele, though. Oops. Probably spelt that wrong. We're getting off topic. XP
Anyways, Wow, Lily. Wow. WHERE'S CHAPTER THREE?! I'M DYING!
XDDDDDD LOL.

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07.08.13

okay, then.
unfortunately loving an idiot
who doesn't love me back.
but i'm not falling.
i just kind of...
am.



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Yes, pretty off-topic, but whatev. xDDD
Ooh, The Revolver is nice. :D
But, my favorite songs are Dear Prudence, Hey Jude, I am the walrus, and Yellow Submarine. ;)

GIVE ME CHAPPIE THREEEEE!!! D:

Oh, dang, I gotta go... >_>
See ya later, alligator! n_n

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We all have our moments:
A moment to cry, a moment to laugh.
A moment to be held, a moment to be let go.
A moment to be sad for not having what we want,
and a moment to be happy with what we got.

Yeah, we all have those moments.
And I advise you not to put them to waste.
:aww:


RiverClan Medicine Cat

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woah!!!
WHERE WERE YOU WHEN U WATCHED ACROSS THE UNIVERSE?!!!?!?!?!
thats weird
cause
i watched it last night to!!
i love like every single song pretty much.
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may I ask if it will be on again, soon!? I've really wanted to watch it!!!

I'll write chapter Three now. Sry it took so long. x3

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Beautiful Dreamer

   Jake stood and smiled.
   "We need to show you the world in which you really belong. It's a world within this world. The people of the
Musterion Kosmos live with the humans. I almost never use the real word for our world. I just call it our world, and theirs." He sighed and shook his head softly.
   "Do... Do I have a choice weather I stay or go?" I asked, my hands trembling. He looked up at me, suprise flashing in his eyes.
   "Of course," He said softly, smiling at me, "You always have a choice." I stood there, contimplating. So much had changed in the past hour. Was it really an hour? It felt like the whole day. I sighed inwardly. Why had everything happened so fast? 
   Taking the silence as an answer, Jake moved Alice closer to them. Alice held my hand, and his.
   "You odn't have to answer now. Take as long as you want." Jake smiled at me. The air thinned again, and I looked at Alice. A silver glow formed around her pupils, making them look dialated. I gasped as the classroom around us disinagrated. I watched as the objects around us sizzled and broke apart, becoming grains, then floating away. Alice, her eyes still glowing, looked around.
   "Let's go back to Amara." Jake said. I looked to him, suprised. How could he talk? The air seemed to have vanished. I couldn't breath. I ried to take a deep breath, but the oxygen didn't come easily. I started hyperventalating.
   "Got her." Alice said, and we were suddenly surounded by grains again. They sizzled, then formed back togeather in a hurry. The oxygen hit me suddenly, a relief from the nothing that I had to breath. 
   Jake laughed. He laughed at me.
   "It's okay, Anneliese," he hit me on the back, "It gets easier." He took my hand, pullingme to our new surroundings.
   We were heading into a cottage surrounded by trees. It looked as if it had been here for centuries. Jake pulled the old wooden door open to reveil a cozy little home. It reminded me vaguely of my great-grandma's house. It had many candles around, giving off a sweet, vanila smell. Jake led me to a couch, and Alice ran to what resembled a kitchen. The Kitchen and sitting room wern't seperated, but in the same room. There were three doors to the right of the house, and one of them was open, revealing a modern bathroom. It was like looking into a different house.
   "Amara!" Alice laughed, her feet leaving the floor. I looked to see an old woman swinging her in circles, a smile cracked on her face.
   "Hello, my nobel little Alice." The old lady's laughter filled the room. Jake waved to her.
   "Cyril!" She nodded with a smile, "My lordly young man." Then her eyes met mine.
   "Oh," She moved closer, sitting in front of me in a rocking chair, "My Consecrated and Gracious Anneliese. Oh, how many centuries I've waited for you." She closed her eyes, youth brimming her face for a moment.
   "Did you say centuries?" I asked, staring at her in wonder.
   "My Dunamis is Eternal life. I live forever. The name Amara means eternal. The only way death can wrap his arms around me, is if something is stabbed directly through my heart." She opened her eyes and smiled at me.
   "She came very close once, when teaching me to use my powers." Jake said, his eyes crincled s if remembering the funniest joke. 
   "Ah, yes," Amara smiled then gave a short chuckle, "If Cyril hasn't told you, he can harness the energy in the air around him and send it out in a single strike."
   "She told me to practice on her," Jake continued, "And so my first strike was supposed to hit a brick she was holding. I was supposed to control the ammount of power I used, and so I hit it too hard, sending the energy straight to her chest. Luckily, it just touched the side of her heart, and not through it." He laughed, "I have never been able to strike as hard as I did then."
   I shuddered at the thought.
   "You've had a long day, my Anneliese." Amara smiled, gesturing to Jake. "You can stay in Cyril snd Alice's room."
   Jake took my hand and led me to one of the doors on the right of the house. He opened it to reveal two beds. Alice burst in behind him and hopped on the one to the left of the room. It had a little brown bear on it. She hugged it tight and slipped under the covers. Jake took the blanket off of his bed and the pillow. He handed them to me.
   "I thought you'd have a bed by now, but you can have my pillow and blanket while you wait." He smiled at me.
   "But what will you use?" I asked him, concerned.
   "I'll be fine." He told me, laying on his bed.
   "If you're sure." I said, laying out on the floor. I slipped the pillow under my head, and threw on the blanket.
   "What about my song?" Alice whispered from her bed.
   "You sing to Alice?" I asked, staring at the flickering light a candel threw on the cieling.
   "I'm not that good." He said to me, holding back laughter.
   "But I can't sleep without a song." Alice hugged her bear close.
   "Well, why dosn't Lili sing to you?" Jake suggested, then I gasped.
   "I've never sung to anyone before!" I whisper-yelled.
   "Try please, Anneliese?" Alice whined. I sighed, trying to remember a good song.
   "I remember the one my mom sung to me when I was little." I whispered, remembering the Irish tune in my head.
   I took a deep breath then let the words fall out of my mouth, the tune hitting the air purely. 

   "Beautiful dreamer, wake unto me.
   Starlight and Dewdrops are waiting for thee.
   Sounds of the rude world, heard in the day.
   Lull'd by the moonlight have all pass'd away.
   Beautiful dreamer, queen of my song.
   List while I woo the with soft melody.
   Gone are the cares of, Life's busy throng.
   Beautiful dreamer, awake unto me.
   Beautiful dreamer awake unto me."

   I smiled as I hit the last note and looked to Alice. She had fallen asleep.
   "Wow." Jake whispered, "Your voice is amaising." He told me.
   "My singing is the only thing that's ever comforted me until now." I smiled, closing my eyes.


-- Edited by Lilypaw at 00:17, 2008-09-01

-- Edited by Lilypaw at 00:17, 2008-09-01

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