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TOPIC: Fight or Flight Fan Fic xD .:Chapter SEVEN PART 2 is Up =]:. March 23rd Sorry for delay!


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Fight or Flight Fan Fic xD .:Chapter SEVEN PART 2 is Up =]:. March 23rd Sorry for delay!


So I hated seeing this RP die. DX So I asked permission from Ebbs and she said that I could make it a fan fic =] What I'll be doing is using the same concept, just fixing some of the lines, and probably using a great deal out of the actual Role play itself. But there will be changes... So I'll be posting the chapters and such here when I finish them! I will be changing a few things, making it more...normal I guess? And not all over the place. ;D I hope you guys enjoy. =D The chapters will be in Kit and Blaike's point of view. Chapter One will be in Kit's and then Two in Blaike's and then Three in Kit's and so on and so forth =D

Prologue

Ever wondered what it'd be like to fly? How about have enhanced human strength? Or maybe super fast healing abilities? Bet you wouldn't want all of these if they were thrust upon you, or if that's all you knew. These kids your about to read about have been put through endless amounts of torture, but they still survived. The world sees them as freaks, and all they have is their distrust of the world...and each other.

Chapter 1

Kit sat in a room, the dark completely consuming him. Looking to the right and left, he saw the other cages, the cages that held the ones like him. They were all just a sick experiment that scientists decided to cook up one day. There were six of them, three girls, three guys. They were stuck in these cages, day in and day out. The only time they were allowed out of the cages were when the scientists decided to perform experiments on them.
All of them were huddled in their cages looking with wide eyes at the man in white in the other corner. The room was extremely dark, but with his own raptor vision, he could see easily. The man in white had goggles over his eyes with a green tinge to them, letting them all know he could see easily in the dark. The man held up a needle and flicked the tip of it as a few drops of liquid shot out of it. He then made his way over to Kit's cage reaching in the the syringe. Kit tried his hardest to back away from the needle, but couldn't, the cages were barely big enough for him, let alone him having free will to move anywhere.
The needle punctured his skin and the liquid coursed, and burned through his veins like wildfire. He didn't scream or make any sounds or movements. He wasn't about to give the scientist that satisfaction. The man smiled a wicked smile and began mumbling as he exited the room. "Is everyone else alright?" He grumbled. He looked down where the needle had went into his skin. Small scars were all over his arms from previous needles. Even the one that had recently punctured himself, we all had amazing regenerating abilities.
He heard Theo's grunt from the cage on the opposite side of the room. Theo was mainly the 'tough guy' of the group. He was the oldest in fact. He heard 'Yea's' and 'I'm okay's' from the other cages as well. Except one. He turned to his left to find an empty cage. Where had Blaike gone? When had they taken her? During the night? His palms got sweaty as thoughts of what they could be doing to her raced through his mind. She was the 'leader' of the group so to speak. She was the one to always keep everyone together no matter what, and they'd been with each other ever since they had hatched out of the DNA viles'.
"Did anyone see them take Blaike?" He called out.
"No, I didn't" He heard a quiet voice from the dark room, that was Saturn, the youngest of the group. She'd been there last experiment. Lucky for her she hasn't gone through much, yet. He hear other no's from Zemmie's and Scott's cages, and he sighed. Where had she gone? He heard the door open and his back collapsed against the back of his cage. But he sighed with relief as he saw who it was that entered. Amelia, the only 'real' human he trusted. She was the only one who actually cared for the bird kids, and she'd been in charge of Blaike and Kit. Because they were the seventeen year old group. She walked over to Kit's cage and knelt in front of it taking his hand.
"How are you feeling?" She asked her bright eyes light with laughter and care, he couldn't help but smile.
"They just injected some sort of stuff in my arm. But I have no idea what it was." Her face fell. "What is it?" Kit asked his eyes filling with worry.
"Oh no, nothing, I just didn't know that was supposed to be done today.." She shook her head. "Never mind that now, I have a way to get you out of here." Her eyes returned to their brightness and Kit's heart flew up to his throat.
"Really?" His voice gave way to his excitement and she quieted him. She handed him a key quietly.
"I know you won't, but if you get caught, say you pick pocketed it." She smiled, her sweet face lighting up. "I'll shut down as many security systems as possible. I don't know what room Blaike is in, but if you can't find her, I'll get her out I promise. Unlock the cages in about ten minutes." She squeezed his hand and left quickly. The others were now alert, knowing they were going to get out. But the real thing they were all alert about was, where was Blaike? No way they could leave without her, plus, the entire group would feel lost without her.
He waited patiently and counted each minute in his head. When he figured that it was okay, he unlocked his own cage and then the others. He turned to Theo, "Get the others out, I'm going for Blaike." He noticed the look in the older boy's eyes that Theo thought this was a completely pointless idea. But Theo responded,
"Sure, fine, whatever. Go find your girlfriend. I'll take them to the forest." With that he and the others ran out of the room and down the white halls of the school. Kit growled under his breath, but raced out anyway. He ran through corridors and down the halls. Theo must have tripped some alarms because they were going off everywhere, and the dumb scientists looked so confused as to what was happening. Kit heard horrendous screams coming from a long hallway and his heart sunk to his feet. He ran in the direction and was relieved to find it wasn't Blaike. He kept running through rooms and hallways looking in every window he lay eyes on looking for her. At last, he found her. She was strapped down to some weird looking machine behind a looking glass, unconscious. He burst through it, the glass shattering into a million pieces. He worked with the leather straps, and finally he got them. He threw Blaike over his shoulders and bolted out of the room and back through all the hallways. There were hundreds of Flyboys on his tail now, but he was certainly faster on foot. He burst through the entry doors and saw the others way off in the distance. His wings burst out of his jacket and he leaped into the air.
He could hear the buzzing of flyboys on his tail and knew they were all catching up. He pumped harder and harder, going as fast as he could to get out of there. He looked over his shoulders and saw the Flyboys were getting extremely close. He felt a nudge from Blaike and knew she was alright. She then heard a slight whisper in his ear. "Drop me." His heart sunk into his chest. What? Was she serious? He looked down and saw all the trees. She couldn't be strong enough to fly..."Drop me!" She said louder. His mind coursed through what the heck her plan could be. But, her weight with his was slowing him down and bringing the Flyboys closer. And he did trust her...So he let go, and she slid from his shoulder and plummet to the world below. He watched her for a moment, and saw her large black wings span out. And she went into the cover of the trees. Two Flyboys followed her and three stayed on him. He turned quickly and kicked the nearest one straight to its, uhm, face? The Flyboy then crashed into the other two and they all went plummeting down together. He closed his wings and flew down to where Blaike was. Taking the two out as he went.
"I can take care of myself ya know!" He heard the familiar voice call out. He landed on the tree branch and she stared at him with an annoyed look on her face.
He shrugged. "You don't think I know that?" He laughed softly then his eyes filled with concern. "You okay?" Her eyes clouded and she rubbed her wrists where the straps had been. He knew how much she hated being tied up, and he hated how much she hated it. It only made him worry about her more.
"I'm fine." She murmured  and turned to him and put on a smile. "Let's go to the others." She jumped up and he saw her stumble a bit in the air. She ran his fingers through his ginger colored hair and jumped up after her.



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RE: Fight or Flight Fan Fic xD .:Chapter One is Up =]:.


Amazing!! XD I love what you did with it! X3 Its a heck of a lot more consistant that way ;D
Also having Amelia show up at the beginning of the story with the key was brilliant. Makes much more sense ^^
Great job buddy! I love it and i cant wait to see what you do with the rest of it! I want to see how Kit and Blaike's relationship develop! X3

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I like it! I'm glad you brought it back as a story.=3

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Ebbsies: Thank you!! Gahh, that makes my heart smile! xD I figured that if Amelia was to show up, then it would help establish her charrie for later in the story =] It means a lot, thank you Ebbs!

Scorchie: Thanks! I'm glad too =]

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Thank you to! I wanna see the rest! This story is so interesting! MUST FEED IMAGINATION!XD

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RE: Fight or Flight Fan Fic xD .:Chapter TWO is Up =]:. Feb. 12th


Chapter Two

Blaike rose higher up into the sky, feeling her strength flowing back into her veins. She shuddered at the memory of the machine. It was certainly a horrific experience, what had the scientists been trying to prove to themselves? Honestly. She sighed and saw Kit floating beside her. He looked over at her and smiled. "Good to have you back commander." She smiled. He'd always called her commander, the only time he ever used her real name was if he was worried or he found it more personal.
"Good to be back Captain." She said smiling as she turned forward to face the east again. Her smile quickly faded as she saw a group of Flyboys headed straight for where he group had gone. She saw Theo burst through the trees, his glorious wings revealing where they were, she say Saturn, Scott, and Zemmie fly up after him. She and Kit pumped their wings as hard as they could.
Once they reached the other's Theo had already knocked a few to the ground and Kit and Blaike joined them. Using their super strength to easily knock the stupid robots right out of the sky. She saw Scott and Saturn fighting side by side, and Zemmie and Theo also. Kit had knocked the last one out of the sky and he and Blaike locked eyes. His eyes said, "That was all too easy." Her and Kit had always been able to speak through their eyes. More than through verbal talking. She guessed it was simply the bond they had. They'd been friends since forever.
"Let's go." She called out to the group and they all turned and faced the Northeast. They flew on for a bit, when Zemmie broke the silence.
"We're finally free from that prison!" She said, giggling. And that's when it hit Blaike, they were free weren't they! She knew she'd been tense, and she got to let up a bit now. Release some of her tension, and it felt good.
"Yea, no more idiotic scientists sticking needles in my arms." Grunted Theo. Blaike looked back flashing a smile at him and she continued to look down. There was an empty field and she tilted her wings just right so that they all knew to go down.
When they landed, the first thing on their mind was food.
"I'll go." Theo offered.
"Maybe we should send someone with you?" Blaike asked. She didn't really like the idea of Theo going by himself, but of course he replied,
"Do I look like I'm five to you?" He said and turned and walked away.
She heard Kit growl to himself, she knew exactly what he was thinking. Of course Theo would want to go off by himself. Of course.
The flock sat in a field waiting for Theo to return. None of them really felt right. They had grown so used to staying inside the school that none of them really knew how to act. Saturn came over and sat beside Blaike.
"Blaike? Are we really free?" The girls large hazel eyes stared up at her.
Blaike put her arm around the girl in sort of a half hug and smiled, "Yes Saturn, I think we are." Of course Blaike wasn't going to tell the girl that the school would probably send people after them, that would only frighten her, and make every one a little skiddish. Not that they weren't already.
Blaike sat on the grass over looking the town, and watching for Theo. Her head was aching. Perhaps the flight? Or probably just all the excitement. She was zoning out but she could still here the conversation going on behind her.
"So everyone alright?" Kit had asked.
"Sure Kit, I'm fine." Zemmie started. "The only el-problemo is that I'm el tired-o." She giggled at her own joke, and Kit laughed.
"Yea, no kidding." He poked her playfully in the arm. "What about you guys?" He asked Saturn and Scott.
"Yea, I'm good. Tired." Mumbled Scott.
"Same here." Replied Saturn.
Kit nodded and asked, "Commander?"
But she was too far off in thought.
Blaike noticed Theo coming up and signaled to the others that he was here. He sat down all of the food he'd stolen. "Did it go well?" Kit asked him.
"That depends on what you mean by 'well.' Theo answered. "Well as in I got away without a hitch then yes, it went great. Or if you mean 'well' as in I got the food in a legit way then no, it went terrible."
Kit let out a soft chuckle and picked up his own portion of the food. As did the others. Saturn picked up extra and sat some with Blaike. "Where do we go from here Blaike?" She asked as she stood back up.
Ignoring her food she simply replied, "As far away from that place as possible."
Blaike's eyes stared out over the town and the empty nights sky, where only a few stars were out. Everything looked peaceful, everything looked perfect. But she wasn't foolish. No one could ever live in a world that was perfect. Never. Her eyes glazed over as she stared out into space. Could being free be too good to be true?
She heard the others talking, saying they were all going to bed. She stayed awake for a moment. Watching the others sleep.
Scott lay a little ways away from the group, and Saturn was next to Zemmie. Theo was propped up against a tree and Kit was laying on the open ground. His ginger hair was hanging in his eyes. She looked back out over the town. What was going to happen? Were they going to be okay? She'd heard that there were other bird people like themselves. Max was her name. She had her own flock and had been living free for quite sometime now. If they could do it, then Blaike and her group should be able too to. She lay down on her back, staring up at the sky. Her headache was still there, and rather painful. But she ignored it and fell into a tense, restless nights sleep



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Once again, this is amazingly awsome! XD I have to say this story is so much easier to read from one or two people perspective ^^"
I love the interactions with the characters. very very very well done! I cant wait to read more because now it gets interesting!! Mwahahaha! XD

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xD Thank you Ebony! Gah, I'm having so much fun writing this! I'd have to agree that its super much easier to read this way! And I'm already working on the next chapter! And it'll have even MORE excitement =] Haha thank you again! It means a whole lot!

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amazing. i recognize my line (= lOlOl write moore, hunny *heart*

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Cool! I can't wait to see the rest!

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