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TOPIC: Warrior cats-The Animals Unlocked: CHAPTER TWELVE POSTED ON PAGE NINE!
What's your favorite chapter [12 vote(s)]

MAH KITTEH i told ya' I havn't read it yet! D<
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I LIKE EM ALL SO MEH KITTEH! :3
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RE: Warrior cats-The Animals Unlocked!FOUR GOOD KIT SPOTS LEFT! 1-7 up! Requesting help! Check page two for details!


Hey, check out that one chapter to the story! I edited it!

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Chapter 1.....

OH! THA ONE CHAPTER I GET IT NOW!


-- Edited by Jaggedpine on Friday 19th of March 2010 10:54:32 PM

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Yep! Trust meh, I iz definatly editing! CHECK OUT PAGE FOUR! XD

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Okay

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RE: Warrior cats-The Animals Unlocked!FOUR GOOD KIT SPOTS LEFT!! Check out page 2! New voting poll up!


I should have the rest up in a few. I just hope some more people sign up for it, that way at least hald of us are joining in the second series. Plus, I'd like to know what you would do if you could stop certain events from happening. I haven't read the power of three, so the way this story turns out will influence how we win or lose in the sequal. And the ending to this story depends on exactly who signs up for it. So far, it's a fifty fifty chance of our side winning or losing.

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(this part will be after the ceremonies!)

Chapter 10

I watched as the clans and heir new members dispersed, Shadowclan rallying up the kits chosen for them. I glanced back at Jaggedkit, and with that, we seaperated. All of the kits said their good byes. Shadowshot and Flystar both padded behind me, snickering. Bluestar had vanished, and many of the Shadowclan cats were talking about what had happened. Some didn't quite beleive it. Panther kit padded up to me, a smirk on her face. My black and red pelt gleamed with a bright lust, the eye popping colors transfixing some of the cats. Aurakit was also closly wached. "So, I guess we'll see eachother... next gathering?"I mewed sadly to them. "Well, I'm sure we might meet on a patrol."Aura kit exclaimed. We all felt bad about being seaperated, and after two days of being together. My tail drooped as I walked away with Shadowkit, Pantherkit, and Flykit sneering and Jeering behind. Gingerkit and Lionkit waved their tails in farewell. As I padded away on my stubby little legs, Blackstar came up to me. He had a confused and amused look on his face. "Scorchkit? There have been seveal cats with that name. Looks like your the third."he padded away, leading I and my fellow shadowclan cats to camp. I crossed paths with Twigkit, and she gave a small grin. "Nice to have met ou in person."se told me, and then she padded off next to Leopardsar, who was stillhaving trouble taking it all in.

Panther kit cornered me as we finaly crosse the border into Shadowclan, an evil sneer upon her face. "You happen to be Scorchpaw? Pathetic. Can't beleive that you were even meant to come here. In the near future, just as it had been told in that story, I will take over Thunderclan and Shadowclan to make them one. And you can't stop me!"she laughed, her high pitched voice catching Shadowkit's attention. He dragged us back with the rest of the group, and I trailed in the back. I saw Aurakit and Jaggedkit across te border, both talking to ingerkiy. Would they be just as they were on the forums? Another thought crossed into my mind. Wait! If Jaggedkit Becomes Jaggedpine, and the Thunderclan Deputy, Brambleclaw would either die or be taken from that position!

As I pondered on this thought, one Shadowclan cat stopped behing me. "Hi, I'm Tawnypelt. Your name is Scorchkit right?"she asked me. "Tawnypelt?! I know you!"I cried in surprise. She gave me a confused look. I came up to her and whispered in her ear. "Don't worry. I know a lot of the cats names." she looked shocked. "What else do you know?!"she asked in a silent and enviouse voice. "Well, I know Brambleclaw is your brother."I whispered to her. Before she could give a reply, Blackstar called out,"Hurry up. We're here."

As we walked into camp, a surprised and yet knowing grin spread across my face. Everything was half as I had immagined it. But it was perfect in just that way. I happily padded after Tawnypelt and ran alongside some kits. They were ones I didn't know. They all came up to me examining my pelt. "Wow! You look weird!"they all giggled. Shadowkit,Flykit, and Pantherkit padded up to me, my smile slightly vanishing. They all formed a type of group circle and started to talk about things that they hoped for in the future. Shadowkit gave me a wicked grin. Would it be as it had once been in the RP? I gave him a glare of suspicion. What would become of the four clans?

In Thunderclan, Aurakit, Jagged kit, and Ginger kit were all happily talking with Firestar. "I like Thunderclan!"Aura kit said. "If I was to choose a position, it'd be a med cat!"she happily added. "Medicen cat? I prefer to be a warrior." Ginger kit giggled. They watched as another group of kits came up with Cloudtail. One of them happened to be berry kit, who had lost his tail. The little stub waved back and forth as he came up to Jaggedkit. "Wow! I've heard of you! You and them were at the gathering!"he cried Jaggedkit and Aurakit gave him mischeiviouse grins. "Lets go and see if we can raid the fresh kill pile!" Berry kit laughed as he ran circles around them. Ginger kit hrugged. "Or mabe we can let you show us around the camp. Either way, I'm happy."she said. But a small frown came across her face. "I wish that we could be in Fireclan again, I Bonefoot, Ravenstar, Goldenflower..."she whispered to Jaggedkit and Aurakit. Aura kit came close to her. "Don't worry. I was the one who made Whitetail, and Jaggedpine-I mean kit, was the one who played Bonefoot."Gingerkit stared in disbeleif. "And what about Scorchpaw?"she asked. "Well.... She played herself before she became known as Scorchheart."Jaggedkit told her. "She became a warrior?"Gingerkit enviously asked. "Yeah... and she's in her origional clan, just like us."Aura kit sadly said. "Twigstorm was also travelling with us, and is now in Riverclan."she added. Suddenly, a thought crosed into all three of their minds. "wait... our ranks on the forums!"cried Aura kit. "I was Thunderclan Deputy... oh no! Brambleclaw! What will happen if our ranks are regained?!"Jaggedkit exclaimed. "Well, I'll be a medicine cat alongside Leafpool. But what happens if you become the Thunderclan deputy? I don't quite remember if Bramble claws still deputy in the next books!"she said. "We are altering the history that Erin Hunter wrote for these cats!"

As they discussed this, yet another horrifying thought came to mind. But only Jaggedkit seemed to realize it. "Pantherkit! If what we wrote in the RP happens, she will become pantherstar and will create Pantherclan by making Thunderclan and Shadowclan join together!" he cried. "But wait, she was deputy of Thunderclan before that! The deputy of Shadowclan could be killed!"Aura kit said. "I rea the story!"she added. Gingerkit gave them worried glances. "And what about Flystar? He could end up turning Shadowclan into Mudclan!"she cried. "There are a bunch of possible out comes, and most of them seem to include shadowclan." Jaggedkit said in a worried tone. "What will we do to save the future?"this was one question, that only Starclan could answer.With so many dark and unknown futures, who was to say that the ghosts of old cats, evil and unhonorable cats could come back, just as they were right then?

In Riverclan, Twigkit was also wary of the consequences of her future."and if I  become the Riverclan deputy, what happens to Mistyfoot? Would she die? Would she be exiled?"the fate that she had set out for herself in the forums could cause much more than she had expected. "If starclan does exist, where are they?"she asked herself. Just as this thought came to mind, the Riverclan medicine cat, Mothwing came up to her... and the cat that came up with her sent shock through Twigkit. It was Hawkfrost! How far into the second series were they?! "So, your Twig kit?" Hawkfrost asked her, a sneer appearing on his face. He left her there with Mothwing, who was shaking with fear. Twig kit padded up to her."Mothwing... was that Hawkfrost?"she asked. Mothwing gave her a nod of agreemen, her body shaking as small tears came out. "What doyou know? Please, I've got to get rid of him."shetold Twig kit.  "I know everthing about your relations to him, Brambleclaw, Tawnypelt, and Tigerstar."she replied with a comforting grin. Mothwing stayed close to her. "I'll stay by you and be your friend."she told Twigkit.


Back in Shadowclan, I was talking with the others. "Well, I'm six moons old now, and so are my friends."I told them. Blackstar seemed to know this, for he came to a sitting position on a large stump. "May all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here for a clan meeting."he called out. All of the cats, except for the kits and I, gathered at the stump to listen to him speak. "As you know, we have quite a few new members to the clan, Four of wich are old enough to become apprentices."he said, his booming voice reaching my ears. "We should have enough warriors to mentor them, and Our deputy shall also mentor one." I looked at him, my face shocked. He ave us a small grin, and then turned back to the cats. "Russetefur,step forwards.Pantherkit,please follow her." Blackstar commanded. "Pantherkit, do you accept the laws of the warrior code, to serve and protect your clan with loyalty, and to learnin the ways of our clan?"he asked her as she strutted after Russetefur, her chin held up in superiority. "I do."she said. "Then from this day forwards, untill you have earned your warrior name, you shall be known as Pantherpaw."he called out, the cats of Shadowclan cheering her to her new name. "PANTHERPAW!PANTHERPAW!PANTHERPAW!" He waved his tail dissmissively and both cats sat with the rest, Pantherpaw recieving many words of congradulations.

"Cederheart, step forwards. Scorchkit, follow in suite." he commanded yet again, his voice booming. Cederheart brought me forwardswith im, a happy and excited grin stretching across his face. "Ceder heart, you will train Scorchkit in our ways." he told him. "Scorchkit, do you accept the laws of the warrior code, to serve and protect your clan with loyalty, and to learnin the ways of our clan?" Blackstar asked yet again."I accept." I told him, my face turning beet red with embarrasment. "Then from this day forwards until you have earned your warrior name, you shall be known as Scorchpaw."he told me, his grin widening at the name.It had a good ring to it, mainly why I liked the name. The cats and Cederheart cheered,"SCORCHPAW!SCORCHPAW!SCORCHPAW!"much louder, getting used to the name very easily.After the last two in Shadowclan, Shadowpaw and Flypaw, had had their ceremonies, the same thing happened in Thunderclan, though with a few  differences.


Jaggedkit, Aurakit, Ravenkit, and Gingerkit were all talking, their voices only slightly raised.Firestar gave them a weary grin, and climbed ontop of the Highledge. "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here beneath the high ledge for a clan meeting!"he mewed out, every cat in Thunderclan snapping to attention. "We have several kits that are ready for apprentice ship.Squerrelflight, step forwards with Jaggedkit."he commanded. They did as they were told."Scorchkit, do you accept the laws of the warrior code, to serve and protect your clan with loyalty, and to learnin the ways of our clan?"he asked Jaggedkit, who was looking up to him with honest pride. "Yes Firestar, I will."he answered. "Then from this day forwards until  you have earned you have earned your warrior name, you shall be known as Jaggedpaw, apprentice of Squerrelflight of Thunderclan."he said in a proud voice. Now the Thunderclan cats cheered on to him, "JAGGEDPAW! JAGGEDPAW! JAGGEDPAW! JAGGEDPAW!" and they rose with smiles on their faces. As he came down with Squerrelflight, many cats said their congradulations. "Also, we have one kit that wishes to learn how to become a Medicine cat. Aurakit and Leafpool, please step forwards." Firestar called out yet again. They too did as he asked. "Aurakit, do accept to train in the way of healing in order to come to greater lengths, to someday be able to assist your clan in great times of need, with loyalty and respect?" he asked her, Leafpool giving him a respectfull nod. "Yes sir FIrestar, I do!" Aurakit happily said to him. "Then from this day forwards until you have earned your medicine cat name, you shall be known as Aurapaw , medicine cat apprentice of Leafpool of Thunderclan." and as he finished, the cats cheered out in loud voices,"AURAPAW!AURAPAW!AURAPAW! AURAPAW!"

Twigkit of Riverclan was also having her apprentice ceremony.  Leopardstar stepped forwards, now calling the cats of Riverclan to join her. "May all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here for a clan meeting."she called out to them. The cats of Riverclan did as was asked, though Twigkit and some others hesitated. "Just as was mentioned at our gathering this moon, we have several new members to the clan, and some of them are ready for apprenticeship."she told them, her voice sending an echo of reasurance. "Now, Mistyfoot, please step forwards, and bring Twigkit alongside you."she called out, Mistyfoot promptly stepping fowards. Twiggy nervously followed behing, her tail and ears twitching.As soon as they came up to Leopardstar, she gave her her ceremony."Do yu, Twigkit, promise to protect your clan with loyalty, strength, and compassion, defending its borders with tooth and claw when needed to be defended?"she asked Twigkit. "I do Leopardstar."she mewed certainly, her voice now calm. "Then let it be so. From this day forewards, until you have earned your warrior name  you shall be Twigpaw, apprentice of Mistyfoot, deputy of Riverclan."and as Leopardstar finished her sentence, many loud cheers rose with the word," TWIGPAW!TWIGPAW!TWIGPAW!"

-- Edited by Scorchheart on Monday 22nd of March 2010 10:20:01 PM

-- Edited by Scorchheart on Tuesday 23rd of March 2010 05:27:48 PM

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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love love love love love love love LOVE this story!

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Thankies!Thankies!Thankies!Thankies!Thankies!Thankies!Thankies!Thankies! I love it too! I iz still imagining the next part too!

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also i wonder what will happen if i become medicine cat?

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Well, one med kitteh in Thunderclan, and the only one in Thunderclan is Leafpool at the moment. You would probly become her apprentice, and then Thunderclan would have its much needed help. =3

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