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TOPIC: Applesause -Chapter Four up and Edited!-


RiverClan Warrior

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RE: Applesause -Chapter Three up!-


Wow. That's amazing! I like the song... A lot! Great job!

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07.08.13

okay, then.
unfortunately loving an idiot
who doesn't love me back.
but i'm not falling.
i just kind of...
am.



WindClan Apprentice

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Ooh, LOVE THE CHAPTER. :D
And, the song is lovely too. :3

@ Lilac and Bubbly: Actually, I rented it on DVD. xD LOL

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A moment to cry, a moment to laugh.
A moment to be held, a moment to be let go.
A moment to be sad for not having what we want,
and a moment to be happy with what we got.

Yeah, we all have those moments.
And I advise you not to put them to waste.
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*die*
*die*
*die*
*die a million times over*

Wow, this is amazing.

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RiverClan Warrior

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thanks sooo much, guys. I lub you all.

So how about that contest?! I want a name for the story by chapter four! xD

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RiverClan Medicine Cat

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OMG OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGMOGOMGOMGMOOMGOMGOMGOMGMOGOMOMGOMG.
amazing.
blows me off my feet.
this story is awesomeical!!
i still have ti think about the name but are you still taking powers??

Here are my favorite powers. In order. I looked up definitions and stuff.

The Ability to control the elements including
(it can be one power or 5 seperate)
Hydrokinesis (Ability to control, generate, and/or absorb water.),
Geokinesis (Ability to control the classic element of earth; sand, stone, rock, lava, and/or dirt.)
Chlorokinesis (Ability to control plant life.)
Pyrokinesis (Ability to control the kinetic energy of atoms to generate, contol and/or absorb fire.),
Aerokinesis(Ability to control, generate, and/or absorb)

Psychometry - Ability to relate details about the past and/or future condition of an object, person or location, usually by being in close contact with it.

Biokinesis - Ability to control biology. Biokinetics can heal, alter their body composition and other things relating to the living body.

Mind Control - Power to control the actions or reasoning of another.

Animation - Power to bring inanimate objects to life or to free a person from petrifaction.

Psychokinesis (a.k.a., Telekinesis) - Ability to manipulate and control objects with the mind.


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THANKS SOOOOO MUCH LILYY!


WindClan Apprentice

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Lol~
Lily, you forget to capitalize too, sometimes. xD

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We all have our moments:
A moment to cry, a moment to laugh.
A moment to be held, a moment to be let go.
A moment to be sad for not having what we want,
and a moment to be happy with what we got.

Yeah, we all have those moments.
And I advise you not to put them to waste.
:aww:


RiverClan Warrior

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@ nighters - i know. n.n

@ lilacers - pick one to enter, plz!

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RiverClan Warrior

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Tune of Heart

   Hearing a faint tune, I opened my eyes to the dawn light. I reached for my alarm clock, trying to find the time. Suprisingly, it wasn't there. I sat up with a start, and everything slowly drifted back to me. 
   'My name is Lili.' I thought, mind still a whir, 'No, I was Lili.' I looked next to me to see the little Alice I was so protective of. She hugged her brown bear close, unaware of my presence. I looked to my left to see... Nothing. Then the faint tune came to me again. 
   I stood and rushed out of the room, following my ears. No, not quite my ears, but something different. It was as if I felt the vibrations the soft tune sent through the ground under my feet. Like I was forcing the Earth to deepen that exact point. I went out the door and looked around. With a jolt, I realised I'd never been outside before.
   A small sparkling river was carrying the warm morning rays scattering across it's surface. The earth sucked in the heat, making the thick grass warm underfoot. Trees surrounded me, making the air seem fresh and alive. I took a deep breath and a brief morning gust hit me softly.
   I heard the tune again.
   Listening with my feet again, I headed across the river, realising then how deep it really was. It got wider and deeper as it headed farther into the dense forest on my right. Instead of following it, I headed away from it, towards the sun. The wonderful tune became recognisable as I came nearer. it was the instrumental to "Your Guardian Angel" it suddenly stopped and I heard somone swear. He started from the beginning, and I saw him sitting on a rock looking across the clearing oposite of me.
   Right on cue, I let the first note come out of my mouth. It was Jake. He looked up, suprised, then his expression became relaxed and amaised as he played on. He had an acoustic guitar that looked as if the strings were newer than itself.
   "Anneliese." He mouthed at me while his fingers strummed the guitar. I sat next to him and the words continued to flow evenly out of my mouth. It was only then that I realised I was in a night gown. It was a beautiful one, too. I didn't remember changing before I slept. It was made of a comfortable white fabric that sparkled when I moved. It had an incredible design on the bottom that looked like lace. Whe I held it closer, it was actually the weavings of flower stems in white ribbon. They curved into elagent flowers up onto the dress. Jake seemed to notice the beauty of the dress, too, for his eyes gleamed with some feeling.
   It was hard to pinpoint what as I was singing to the song, but I knew it wasn't one I'd seen before. Usually  it was easy for me to read the little sparkles in people's eyes, but i didn't recognise this at all. I let the last note come out strong and pure. Better than I usually sung in the morning. Silence followed after our lovely tune, but it was almost as beautiful as the musc.
   "What..." I whispered, my breath stuck in my throat. I wondered what he would think of my choice of words, but curiosity took hold. "What emotion are you feeling right now?" I looked deeper into his eyes with confusion.
   He tried to look away, but for somereason couldn't break my gaze. "Pa..." He started to whisper, "Lo..." But he blinked furiously and looked away. "Nothing." He said at last, standing and bolting off towards the house.
   "You're... You're mad at me?" I said quietly, not moving from where I sat. where he just sat suddenly filled with emptyness and cold. He turned back and in the blink of an eye, I was confused. In all of two seconds, he rushed back, pulled me up off of the rock to stand in front of him, and stood with his face two inches from mine.
   "Don't say that." He whispered fiercely, "Don't you ever say that I'm mad at you. Don't think it." His sweet words floated across my face, leaving me temporarily dazed.
   "I..." I felt my eyes water with emotion. Had I upset him? He said he wasn't mad... Was he sad? Frustrated? Why? "I'm sorry." I lowered my head at last.
   "Don't be." Jake's voice was suddenly sweet as honey. He lifted my chin so that I couldn't pull away from his eyes. "It's my fault, not yours."
   All at once, the moment ended. He pulled away and walked back towards the cottage, and I stood there, trying to take deep breaths to calm myself. I could hardly piece togeather what had happened. At that second, All I could comprehend was that he had gotten that close to me.
   I couldn't help my next thought, But I wanted him close again.



-- Edited by Lilypaw at 02:02, 2008-09-10

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RiverClan Medicine Cat

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alrightyy.
i ahve chosen the power i would like to enter.

Pyrokinesis (Ability to control the kinetic energy of atoms to generate, contol and/or absorb fire.),


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THANKS SOOOOO MUCH LILYY!


RiverClan Warrior

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RE: Applesause -Chapter Four up and Edited!-


posting to bring this up to the top of the board so i don't loose it!

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