Warrior Cats: The Four Clans

Dragonstar · ShadowClan Leader

Demon lord resurrection NEW CHAPTERS UP 7/5

Dragonstar · ShadowClan Leader

RE: B-claw fanfic: Demon lord resurrection

Wyvernclaw · WindClan Warrior

I think the reason no one replied before is because there was nothing to review.

Anyway, it's great! The only problem is that there are a couple of missing question marks, but even without them it's easy to tell when the characters are asking questions. The dialog is good; not too much of it, and not too little. Though I was wondering, what does Belphemon look like? It doesn't say anything about his looks, other then the fact that he has claws.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Dragonstar · ShadowClan Leader

ur right, bad job on my part here is the best pic i could find

he's got claws on his feet as well

here is chapter 2

Belphemon paused and looked straight ahead. A giant tree towered over many smaller plants. A rainbow seemed to come from behind the tree. Belphemon bared his fangs. I wonder how powerful the gaurdian is? Thought Belphemon. He was eager to kill someone.
Patience, Demon Lord. You will get your chance soon enough.
Belphemon snarled as the light creature spoke telepathically to him.
I'm tired off waiting! Let me destroy this area! Let me tear this area apart!
Belphemon glared at the tree. He looked down at his hands. Let me rip that tree out of the ground.
There was a long period of silence before the light creature answered back.
Go on ahead. This area does not mean much to me, niether does the gaurdian. Just make sure you bring those eggs back to me in one piece.
Belphemon smiled. Don't worry. I will.

Neon walked around a large vehicle. Feeling the smooth red metal with his large mechanical hands.
"Isn't it beautiful." He said, staring at it in wonder. "A perfect replica of the Juggernaught. Look at it. I've even added a few upgrades to it making it better than the original."
"That doesn't mean that it will help us." A large purple furred bear said.
"Shut up Grizz! Your just jealous that you can't make cool stuff like this. Besides, this thing will help repair the Digital World, not destroy it like it was originally designed to do."
Grizz sighed. He knew that the mehanical digimon was very stubborn and wasn't going to change his mind becuase of his opinion.
"What if someone stole this new juggernaught, and used it against us." Grizz asked. He was still worried about what the original Juggernaught had done, and he wondered if this one would cause more damage than the first one had caused.
Neon laughed. "You gotta put a special code in this one to get it going and only Crunch and I know this code."
Grizz bit his tongue to keep himself from laughing. "You let Crunch know the code? That has to be the dumbest thing you have ever done!"
Neon scowled "Crunch is really good at keeping secrets, you know."
At this point, a strange looking mutated fish entered the room.
"Vulcan. Vulcan. Vulcan." It repeated over and over again.
"Crunch! SHUT UP!" Neon shouted as Grizz burst out laughing.
"I told you that you couldn't trust him." Said Grizz.
Neon tackled Crunch, trying to get him to stay quiet.
"AAAHH!! HELP ME! EVIL ROBOT ATTACK! EVIL ROBOT ATTACK!" Crunch shouted as he struggled under Neon.
"Neon! Crunch! What are you two doing?"
Crunch finally freed himself from Neon's gripand slapped him a couple times in the face with his tail fin as he darted over towards a heavily armored, giant wolf.
"He's shouting the password for my Juggernaught!" Neon complained
"Well then maybe you shouldn't have let him find out" The wolf said. "Come on Crunch, lets go see Blazer."
Neon watched Crunch and the wolf walk out of the room. He then turned and looked as Grizz who was laughing so hard that tears were streaming down his face.
"Why don't you go and follow Guro and fish face to see your mighty general!" Spat Neon.
Grizz rose to his feet and followed Guro and Crunch down the hallway, still laughing to hard to answer.

Razor studied the hologrram of the Digital World. Watching it spin slowly. He had seen so many maps and watched the hologram rotate so many times, that he had memroized the every major area of the Digital World.
The Digital Ocean. File Island. Destroyed Belt. Razor named the areas in his head and pointed at them with his long orange claws.
He watched it spin over and over again.
Wait. What was that?
Razor hit a button and the hologram froze. He then wandered around it searching for what he thought he saw. Suddenly, he froze. Razor felt as if someone had thrown him into sea next to the Access Glacier area. His yellow hair that jutted out from behind his blue mask like head bristled as he raised a blue armored hand and pointed with a claw at a gaping hole that surrounded a giant tree.
The Tree of Beginnings! Someone is destroying it! He thought as he helplessly watched the hole enlarge at a quick pace. Quickly, he turned to a computer screen and rapidly started to type. The face of a black dragon wearing a silver helmet appeared on the screen.
"Hey Razor. What's wrong?" The dragon asked noticing the look of panic on Razor's face.
"Blazer! I don't have time to explain. Just gather a squad of strong Digimon and hurry to the Tree of Beginnings."
Blazer nodded. "Don't worry about a thing. We'll solve what ever the problem is." Blazer said, and then screen went blank.
Please hurry.

better pic

-- Edited by Blizzardclaw at 00:49, 2008-01-13

-- Edited by Blizzardstar at 22:44, 2008-01-26

Wyvernclaw · WindClan Warrior

Sweet. Again. Heh heh, Crunch is funny. XD "Vulcan, Vulcan, Vulcan..." XD XD

Now why do I reconize most of these names? :P Hmm... Yeah, I can't think of questions/comments right now. Oh wait, why did Belphemon want to dstroy the tree so much?

One thing: Spelling mistakes. Gotta watch out for 'em.

Keepeth upeth theeth goodeth worketh, anywayeth.

-- Edited by Levistorm at 02:15, 2008-01-13

Dragonstar · ShadowClan Leader

i either get lazy or just skip over them but i'll keep a lookout for those mispellings oh mighty Grammar King

Crunch is hilarios isn't he. I wanted to have a complete idiot in my story and i thought a Coelamon would be perfect for it cuz they knina look funny

belphemon wants to destroy the tree cuz if he takes that down, then the whole area would be destroyed. i rmember from the 4th season that certain areas have keys, and if the key is destroyed, then so is the area the key belongs to. at last i think that's it, that was quite awhile ago.

-- Edited by Blizzardclaw at 20:24, 2008-01-13

Dragonstar · ShadowClan Leader

New chapter!! YAY!!!

Blazer nearly collided with Guro, who was just turning around the corner.
"Hey Blazer! Crunch and I were just looking for you. Think you could do some training with us?" Guro asked.
"Not now, but would you guys mind joining me on a mission?"
"Uh...sure, I guess so. What do you think Crunch?"
Guro looked over at Crunch who was spinning in circles.
"Evil doggie! Evil doggie!" The mutated fish shouted over and over again.
"I'll take that as a yes. We'll wait for you at the entrance." Guro said.
"Thanks. I'm gonna try to gather more people up."

"C'mon Falco! I know you can do better than that!" Shouted the fiery lynx.
"Stop moving!" The blue dinosaur shouted back, his huge fangs gleaming in the light.
The lynx chuckled. "Make me!"
"Falco! Hawk! Would you guys like to join me on a mission?"
Falco and Hawk stopped fighting and looked over at Blazer who was standing in the doorway. They looked at each other, exchanging glances.
"You bet!" Falco said, the feathers on his head began to move slightly.
"You can count me in too!" Hawk said excitedly.
"Good! Now head out to the entrance where Guro and Crunch are waiting."

Guro looked at the squad that Blazer had gathered. Falco, Hawk, Crunch, him, me, and Gonedos. This mission must be pretty serious if he gathered all of us up. Thought Guro.
"We better get moving now. I'll explain things along the way." Blazer said as he launched himself into the sky.
"No fair! You can fly and we can't!" Bellowed Falco.
"Stop complaining cry baby. We gotta move!" Hawk charged ahead, he was followed by Falco, then Guro and Crunch. Gonedos brought up the rear.
"So where, exactly, are we going and for what reason?" Asked Gonedos, the sun shined off of the dark metal that made his body.
"Someone attacked the Tree of Begginnings. Razor wants us to investigate." Blazer answered.
Gonedos grunted and the two cannons that were resting on his back were brought into their attacking positions. The cannon that was his right hand rotated as if i were loading itself. The sun glinted off of the claws on his left hand making them seem sharper then they really were.
"We'd better hurry than." He said.

The area was a mess by the time the group arrived. Small chunks of land floated around the giant tree.
"Looks like were a little late." Hawk said as he surveyed the area.
Crunch rushed over to the tree. "Bad doggie! Bad doggie!" He shouted.
Guro looked at the fish. "Your not talking about me, are you?" He asked.
Crunch ignored him and hugged the tree. "Sad tree. Tree hurt." Crunch said.
"What is he talking about?" Hawk gave Blazer a puzzled look.
"I'll go check." The blakc armored dragon said.
Blazer flew over to where Crunch was. "Hey little guy. What's wrong?" He asked.
Crunch looked at him with huge sad eyes. "Tree hurt. Bad doggie hurt it."
Blazer moved in closer to look at the tree. Huge claw marks could be seen. Fiv on each side. One farther away from the other. Someone tried to rip the tree out of the ground. He thought. And whatver it was has five claws and thumb.
He looked over at Guro. "Can you come over here and tell me if it was possible that a Weregarurumon did this?" Blazer asked.
Guro hopped from one small chunk of land, to the next until he was at the tree. He looked at the marks and shook his head.
"If it was a Weregarurumon that did this, it would have to have huge claws and be pretty big itself." He looked up at Blazer. "Sorry, but there is no way Weregarurumon could've done this."
Blazer sighed. "Crunch, are you sure that a dog did this?"
Crunch put his hands on top of his head like they were horns. "Bad doggie! Bad doggie!"
Blazer looked over at Gonedos and saw that he was looking away from he tree, towards the sky.
He looked back at Blazer, the red lights that served as his eyes were gleaming brightly. "We need to get out o here, fast!" He roared.

Rustfur · RiverClan Warrior

I like it blizzadclaw(star).

Dragonstar · ShadowClan Leader

thx rustpaw

chapter 4
Blazer heard something fly by him at an icredibly fast speed. Then there was a thud as it crashed into the tree. BLazer looked back at the tree and saw that half of a large icicle spear was buried in the tree. He looked back at the direction the spear had come from and saw three large digimon rushing towards them. Two were flying, the third was crawling on the ground.
"Crunch! What are you doing!" Blazer looked ove at Guro who was looking up at the top of the tree. The sound of rustiling branches told Blazer that Crunch was in the tree. "Crunch, get down from there now!" Blazer demanded.
"No! Me found something. Bad doggy can't have it!" Crunch shouted back.
"Get him out of the tree. I'll try to slow them down." Gonedos said as he turned towards the approaching digimon.
"Me gots it!" Crunch exclaimed triumphantly.
"Get down now!" Guro roared.
"Okay."
Crunch dropped from the tree, clutching something green. Blazer dove to catch him. As he caught the Coelamon, Blazer saw that the object Crunch had grabbed was an egg. A green egg with black and red markings. How did that get up there? Blazer thought.
"I'm gonna kill you!"
Blazer was interuppted from his thoughts by deep bellowing roar. He looked up and saw a giant blck furred dog with giant claws leaping at him. Red eyes gleaming with rage. Blazer rolled out of the way. As the half insane digimon slammed into the ground. As the digimon got back on its feet, Blazer recognized it. Belphemon, the leader of the Demon Lords.
Belphemon pointed his nose to the sky and gave a strnge roar, howl mix. Belphemon prepared to pounce again, but never got the chance to. Guro had rushed in and slammed into Belphemon, knocking him over the edge. If Belphemon didn't have wings, he would've fallen to his death. But he spread all six of his wings and flew over to another chunk of land. He turned and glared at Guro.

Gonedos wa keeping his distance from the other digimon. He had never seen the Demon lords, but he had so many stories about them from the ones who fought them, the he identified the remaining two digimon as Demon Lords. The red scaled, green finned, crocodile like monster was Leviamon. And the purple horned monster with fur legs was Daemon.
Leviamon was the biggest Demon Lord, and probably one of the biggest digimon. He was so big, that none of the floating platfroms of land were big enough for him stand on. He had to stay close to groupings of land that could hold him.
Daemon was the weakest of the Demon Lords. Gonedos remembered everyone talking about how Daemon could never take control of anything.
"A rookie level digimon could take him out!" Gonedos remebered that those were the words Letox had said when he returned with the other digimon that had succesfully taken out the Demon Lords.
Gonedos felt pain shoot thruogh his right arm as Leviamon grabbed it with his mouth.
"Bad move." Gonedos said as he pumped several energy grenades down Leviamon's throat.
Leviamon's eyes went wide as the grenades began to explode in his stomach. HE released Gonedos' arm and thrashed around. Smoke was pouring from his mouth as he roared in pain. Daemon tried to fly away from the flailing monster, but Leviamon's tail caught him in the stomache and knocked him away.
Gonedos saw Belphemon turn towards Leviamon. Gonedos quickly aimed the two large cannons on his back at belphemon and rapidly began to fire.
Belphemon cried out in rage as he was pelted by the powerful blasts of energy.
"Let's go now!" Gonedos roared.
Everyone in his squad rose to thier feet and began to flee back the way they came.

that took awhile to type
btw, new pic of belphemon is up

-- Edited by Blizzardstar at 17:09, 2008-01-28

Shadowstorm · ShadowClan Deputy

Awesomeness!!!