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Pearldust


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  This book takes place between sunset and the sight.

Prologue  A dark gray tomcat padded silently through a lightless black forest. A cold wind rushed through, rustling a few leaves. The tomcat approached a small clearing while a muscular, striped tabby walked up to greet him.  Come, mewed the tabby, while he flicked his tail towards a small den.  Tigerstar! I thought you were dead! cried the gray tom.  My spirit is still alive, brave warrior, replied Tigerstar coldly.  You killed my mother, you murderer! hissed the tom.  But the dogs killed her, retorted Tigerstar. Yes, I did bring the dogs to ThunderClan, but I didn't intend to kill anyone. I really thought that ThunderClan was strong enough to drive out the dogs, but now I know that I was wrong.  Well, I supposeIt could be true, muttered the tom.  You must trust me, mewed Tigerstar. If you want to protect your clan.  What do you mean? asked the tom. How am I to protect my clan?  You must kill Brambleclaw, replied Tigerstar.  What? shouted the tom. Hes not my favorite clanmate, but I wouldnt kill him!  Brambleclaw is a danger to the clan. He will persuade Firestar to destroy ThunderClan, mewed Tigerstar. Im only thinking of the clans safety.  How would I kill him? asked the gray cat.  I will tell you later, meowed Tigerstar. For now, you must return to your own dreams.  Tigerstar turned toward the cold forest, and walked forwards, leaving the gray tom to fade away.

 



-- Edited by Pearldust at 02:47, 2008-04-18

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please post. ill try to write more, but only if people like it.

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I love it! please write more! ... but you need to add quotes - ""

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   "Hello!" Bubbleshine mewed warmly.

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   Hello! Bubbleshine mewed warmly.

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Really good, but it needs quotes. Also, after speech ends, a new paragraph starts. ^-^

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Great job, and what everyone else said is true, too. :)

Who's the gray cat? Hmmm.... more please!

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is the gray cat ferncloud's brother? (don't want to say the name...)

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I think Greystripe. x3
It would be awesome.. X3

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its not graystripe!! lionpaws right. according to what the 'gray cat' and tigerstar said, its gotta be fernclouds brother. cuz their mother...remember? yeah. xD

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I don't remember! Put it in a SPOILER thingy. DX

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here, scarclaw:

Spoiler

remember? xD

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