Warrior Cats: The Four Clans

Lilyspirit · RiverClan Warrior

RE: Warriors: Temptation

Emberpaw · WindClan Apprentice

Sweet..... Wrtie moar!

Pearldust · RiverClan Warrior

Well, I'm kinda busy right now, but I think I can squeeze another chapter in tomorrow.

Emberpaw · WindClan Apprentice

Take your time! We're in no rush!

Sapphirepaw · ThunderClan Apprentice

I knew that the gray cat was Ashfur, when he said that Tigerstar killed his mother :P
By the way, keep writing, PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEAASE don't let Tawnypelt die!!
*puppy-face*

-- Edited by Sapphirepaw at 23:21, 2008-03-23

Emberpaw · WindClan Apprentice

I'm with Sapphirepaw,please,let her LIVE!!! *does puppy-face along with Sapphirepaw*

Pearldust · RiverClan Warrior

This is the first part of ch.5. The rest isn't quite edited yet.

Chapter 5 Birchpaw paced back and forth, his unsteady paws stumbling under his weight. Trying to remember everything his mentor had taught him, he let his mind race with thoughts. Okay, downwind. Hunt downwind. Left paw first when stalking, and...what else? Oh, yes. Make sure your tail doesn't touch your hind legs. Ashfur's voice darted throughout Birchpaw's mind, reminding him how to act like a true warrior. Suddenly, his mentor's mew sounded from across the clearing.
"Birchpaw," Ashfur called, interrupting Birchpaw's last minute reviewing. "It's time for your assessment now. Come on!" Birchpaw dashed after his mentor, as his mother, Ferncloud, wished him luck. He couldn't believe that he might actually become a warrior!
"Ashfur, do you...well, do you really think that I could become a warrior?" asked Birchpaw uncomfortably, although he already knew what Ashfur would say. Ashfur emitted an assuring purr.
   "Of course I think you could! You must remember Birchpaw; every apprentice has their time to become a warrior, and yours may be earlier than most. I think Firestar agrees that you'd make a fine warrior." By Ashfur's genuine tone, and wise words, Birchpaw knew that he would do fine, but he still didn't want to make any mistakes on this significant day. He padded on after his mentor, and started the assessment.
With all of his strength, Birchpaw hunted and tracked flawlessly throughout the forest, making sure that Ashfur saw his best. His mentor watched him closely, keeping his vast blue eyes fixed on Birchpaw' every move, but somehow, Birchpaw could tell that Ashfur had something else on his mind.

Pearldust · RiverClan Warrior

don't worry. i promise Tawnypelt won't die. i like her as much as the rest of you. anyways, this book is between sunset and the sight, and tawnypelt is still alive in the sight.

Lilyspirit · RiverClan Warrior

... But it's your Fan-Fic! You can kill off anyone, and add more kits! HAVE FUN WITH IT!!!!!

Pearldust · RiverClan Warrior

ok. on the other hand, maybe i will kill tawnypelt...Joking!!