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Ebonycloud


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Hurray!!! The next one will be up really soon i am almost done with it =D

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wow!! that's cool!

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Thank you Pearlpaw!!! XD

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I will be waiting!

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Part 4

             As they were getting closer to wherever they were going, Aden grew tense. Ilari and Hunter dropped back so they were on either side. Aden felt like a prisoner being taken to his death. A deep anger boiled inside of him but he his it behind a smile. Hunter merely growled at him. When Hunter slowed down so did Aden. They had arrived at the base camp of their pack. It was the most beautiful place his eyes had gazed upon. Their home was nestled in to a small hill. A slowly flowing stream that could relax even the most wary of beasts traveled right beside the grassy dune. Lounging about near the stream was a gray male wolf. He was light gray from his head to his back. On his back was a dark brown patch. Across this wolf face spread a large grin that would tell anyone that he enjoyed his life. Aden almost glared at the wolf. That happy go lucky life style would change entirely if he had been with the white coats too.

            Bounding down the hill came a cream colored she wolf. She had a scowl on her face as she reached the bottom. Her green eye met Adens deep blue gaze. Spreading across her face came seductive smile and she stared at him like he was a piece of meat that had the most flavor in the world. Adens gaze became instantly cold. His blue eyes looked like chips of ice as she neared the three wolves.

            "Well, well, well," She giggled as she stared Aden down, "What do we have here?" Aden merely glared at her but her hungry like gaze never left his luxurious white pelt. "No need to be so distant my friend," she replied to his cold stare.

            Hunter stepped in front of Aden and growled, "Enough Athena! He is to go straight to Leon, not your den!" his yellow eyes glared at the she wolf. She merely shrugged off his angry stare and turned to the hill again. She slowly turned her face back to Aden.

            "If are ever in need of anything, just come to my den." With that she bounded back to the hill. Adens cold eyes watched her go and felt a tail flick him in the side. His cold stare turned to Ilari and he saw her visibly flinch at it. He sighed and turned away.

            Hunter turned back to them and growled, Come with me. He took a slow pace toward the hill. Aden was beginning to dislike this place. The Wolf who had been lounging by the river stood up and came trotting over to them. He cackled at them, "Well Hunter! You cant give anyone a break can you?" Hunter fixed him with his yellow eyes.

            I dont need to be lectured by you Noah! he snapped at the gray wolf.

            "Have some respect for your future father in law!" retorted Noah. Noahs eyes turned to Ilari, "Keep your future mate's temper under control." Noahs eyes brightened as Ilari smiled at him. Aden sighed. He felt so out of place among these wolfs. Suddenly he heard a deep strong voice come from the crest of the hill.

            "Hunter! Why is there a strange wolf on my hill?" Adens eyes turned to a large golden wolf. The sun beat down upon his fur making it shine brilliantly. A smaller black wolf with and air of elegance around her stood beside the golden wolf.

            Hunter bowed his head as he muttered, "I found him attacking Ilari by the lake. I stopped him before he could do anything to her."Hunters voice was full of respect and something else that Aden recognized, ambition. "I brought him here to have your judgment thrust upon him." Hunter lifted his eyes, "I was hoping you would be proud, father."





 



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Hurray!!! Part five!!

Chapter 5

 

            Aden watched Leon closely, observing the emotions he held toward his son. To the contrary Leon had no expressions on his face. Instead he had a controlled calm about him. There was no doubt that Leon and Hunter didnt have a very close relationship. Aden shrugged his shoulders. He didnt want to get in to deep by thinking too much about any others beside the target he was after. His eyes slowly shifted to where Ilari stood. She a look of awe in her eyes, she defiantly respectly Leon greatly.

            Leon slowly walked down the green slope with the elegant black wolf matching him step for step. Her eyes never wavered from Adens face. Aden tilted his head in mock innocence. He heard Leon make a rough grunt toward Hunter. Hunters eyes narrowed and focused on Leons face. Something passed between the two. Aden thought no more about it. He had to focus on finding a way to kill the target. His eyes inched back to Ilari. She was watching a butterfly flutter past her nose. Aden rolled his eyes; she was so naive and young. This was going to be too easy. As long as he could keep her away from Hunter this was going to be a very quick assignment.

            Leon turned his deep green eyes toward Aden and scoffed, "Just what did you think you were doing coming on to this territory?" His voice held nothing in it. It was loud but Aden could detect no emotions. It made him wary. Using emotions against others was one of his specialties but Leons presences felt like a void in a sea of life. Adens pelt stood on end but he managed to reply evenly, "Well I know what I was doing All that matters is what you think I was doing." His sly gaze turned to the furious face of Hunter. Aden gave him a cold smile.

            "Ilari!" came the voice of another young wolf. Aden whipped his head around to see a wolf that looked very similar to Hunter bounding toward them. The only differences between this wolf and Hunter were that he was younger, about Ilaris age, and had a pleasant smile on his face. He heard Hunter give a low-pitched growl and the young look-alikes face became confused.

            "Yukon!" came Ilaris young musical voice. The young wolfs confused face brightened and he grinned widely at the young red brown wolf. Aden sighed. This was the last thing he needed, another liability to get in the way. His window of opportunity was getting smaller by the moment. He had to come up with a plan before the sun set. His eyes turned to the sky and saw the first star of the night. He growled silently.

            Leons blank stare had never left Aden. "What is your name?" The large golden wolf commanded. Adens gaze returned to the leaders face. He gave a large innocent smile and stated evenly, "What does it matter? If you are going to pass a sentence on me, does it really matter what my name is? Go ahead and command your warriors to strike me down without a fair trail, I wont hold it against you." Adens cold blue eyes were focused on Leons blank green ones. A feeling of unease passed through the group of wolves. They had never felt such tension, not even when Leon talked to Hunter. They all sensed a great feeling of power rush between the large silent wolves.

            Leon said with no emotion, "What is your name?"

            Aden smirked. This wolf obliviously expected him to follow his order. He chuckled, "Well if you simply must know," he paused and a spark of an emotion that Leon didnt recognize, raced past his blue eyes, "It is Aden." Aden gave the larger wolf a sly grin. The window of opportunity was closing to a slit.



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Applepaw


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I love it! new chaters soon? :)

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Keep writing!!!!!! my fav things to do r read fan-fics, and rp!!!

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hehehe!!! Dont worry guys!! The new chapter will be up soon =D

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I am posting chapter 6 here and in the first post for those of you who like to read the story from start to finish =D

Chapter 6 

            Aden felt the gaze of the many wolves focused on him. He held no expression on his face as he waited for Leons judgment. Two more wolves had joined in and Aden began to grow even more desperate. He heard the two new comers whisper, "What is going on?" Noah answered them.

            "Fable, Domino where have you been? You missed the whole thing!" Aden studied the newcomers. The male of the two was a scrawny little gray wolf that looked like he couldnt even hurt a fly. The other was a brown and black speckled female. She held her self in a modest almost self-conscious position. Her eye never met the other wolves except Noahs. He felt a wave of love pass between Domino and Noah. Aden turned away. He was gathering information he didnt need.

            He turned back to Leon and lifted an eyebrow. Leons eyes were blank but they were focused on Aden. Finally Leon spoke, "I have made up my mind." He turned to the black she wolf beside him, "Freya I hope you support my decision." The black she wolf lifted her eyebrows.

            "Of course I would agree my love." Here was something Aden did pay attention to. Freya and Leon were Hunters parents and his targets future in-laws. He might be able to make a plan out of this, and on the other hand it could end up a disaster. He would have to make some careful maneuvers to set a plot in motion.

            "Then I decree," his voice echoed across the hill, "That since Aden has been caught in the act of attempt at murder," that word chilled Adens blood. Attempt at murder? Was that really how Leon saw it? Adens eyes narrowed as a gasp rose in the wolf ranks. They had obviously seen the attack as a mistake. Leons blank stare had seen through the charade. "Aden must serve the pack of the icy river. He has attempted to take a life and there for we have the right to claim his. He has spilled no blood thanks to my son. Adens life is now at the mercy of his attempted victim." His eyes turned to Aden. Aden flinched in side at the fire in Leons eyes. He had never seen such a fierce wolf. "Aden, you are to serve Ilari until you have lost your life. When that happens the life dept will be paid."

            Aden growled threateningly, "And what if she dies before I do?" his voice was like ice.

            Leon battled Adens icy voice with his own fiery one, "Then you must serve her mate until you have died." Aden didnt like that idea. Apparently there was going to be a long list of whom he must serve. At that rate Aden would have to kill the whole pack. He didnt like that idea.

            Adens voice was filled with a poisonous sting, "Then so be it." He turned his gaze to Ilari. Her eyes were full of doubt and fear. Hunter stepped up beside her.

            "Hey, flea pelt, if you come so close as to nip her by accident," he paused, "I will rip your throat myself." Adens eyes watched him. Hunter was all talk.

            Though he didnt want to get in to a fight with the large wolf. Aden could win but he didnt want to risk it. Adens blue gaze was mocking as he replied to Hunter, "You really think I would let anything happen to the one I must protect?" He stalked forward and bent down at Ilaris feet, "My life before yours." He vowed with a poison dripping in his words. He lifted his eyes to Ilaris and gave her a cold smile.



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