Warrior Cats: The Four Clans

Pearldust · RiverClan Warrior

RE: Shadow's story ***Chapter 11 up***

Twigstorm · RiverClan Deputy

I'm almost done. Plus are you saying it's a good thing my brother made me die on my game and now I'll never save the world..

Twigstorm · RiverClan Deputy

Chapter 12:

Ruststar sat with the other mentors as they gave there apprentices something to do. Freenight had Blazepaw go hunting, Whitepaw asked his mentor if he could go with her, so he did, Blazepaw liked having him around, but he always scared the mouse she was stalking away, she did'nt mind him, but he was always acting weird. Turboflight told his apprentice, Silverpaw, to go and hunt also, all the apprentice were out hunting, all the mentors, everyone, but Freenight, Ruststar was watching all the other apprentices, but her own, she was mad at Shadowpaw, so she payed him no mind. Shadowpaw saw that everyone was gone, he looked at where the training hollow was to see who was there, Freenight was the only one there, an evil grin appreared on his face, the evil spirirt told him 'Do it now!' Shadowpaw listened to the evil spirit and he jumped out of the bushes and onto Freenight, Freenight was caught by surprise. Shadowpaw lashed his claws on Freenight, Freenight let out a scared wail, none of the apprentices or mentors heard his wail, Shadowpaw had to slience him, he bit down on Freenight's neck and it was over.

Pearldust · RiverClan Warrior

RE: Shadow's story ***Chapter 12 up***

Twigstorm · RiverClan Deputy

Hey now I wanna write more!!! Shadowpaw is SOOOOOO evil!!! Me likey.

Pearldust · RiverClan Warrior

Is Shadowpaw naturally evil, or is there something telling him what to do inside him?

Twigstorm · RiverClan Deputy

Well you can say it's the spirit. But he likes the evil feeling, so you could say he's both.

Twigstorm · RiverClan Deputy

Chapter 13:

Shadowpaw looked down at Freenight's limp body, he laughed evily. Ruststar herad the evil laughing and ran back to the training hollow, there was Shadowpaw, laughing up an evil storm, Ruststar gasp and yowled "All apprentices and mentors, join at the training hollow!" Turboflight ran to Ruststar and gasp "My brother!" Blazepaw, with Whitepaw behind her ran into the training hollow, Silverpaw ran after them. "Freenight!" Blazepaw yowled looking at her dead mentor. Ruststar looked at Shadowpaw and mewed "Shadowpaw, you have chose the wrong path of a warrior, so now." Turboflight hissed at Shadowpaw, Ruststar hissed too, Blazepaw and Whitepaw joined in the hissing "You will be know as a rouge, so GET OUT!" Ruststar hissed and gave Shadowpaw a quick bite. Shadowpaw yowled and ran out into the forest. Blazepaw felt bad for her brother, but he killed her mentor, Silverpaw padded over to Ruststar and mewed "Are you sure your doing the right thing?" Silverpaw had been Shadowpaw's friend as they were kits. Ruststar looked at Silverpaw and hissed "Do you wish to join him?" Silverpaw looked deep into her eyes and mewed "I do." and with that he bounded off to where Shadowpaw was.

Pearldust · RiverClan Warrior

RE: Shadow's story ***Chapter 13 up***

Twigstorm · RiverClan Deputy

Silverpaw is a boy, he is good, he understands Shadowpaw is evil, and he is loyal to Shadowpaw, so he can't leave him.