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Moonstar


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This is the review topic for my story, Through Pain and Popularity. You read the chapters there and review/comment here. Please don't post in the other thread. Thank yoU! ^^

(This was the author's descision to make this)

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Okay since you let me know about the other post needing to be deleted i will repost it here XD

Hahahaha!!! I love it Moony!!! i noticed how you changed the words a bit but that makes it such a more likable scene!!! XD My gosh that was funny!! XD I like your character a lot!!! XD Hahahaha!! I want to read more but sadly again... i must wait... Jeez Moony you are a good writer!!! Fear the car wash!! XD
Just thought i would put the same thing up as encouragment!! XD

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Moonstar


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Yays thank you so much!!! XD -hugs-
Sorry about the confusion with this and all, I'm testing out what Wolf claims to be amazing. xDD It's kinda nice to have organized chapters though.

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Posting Night's comment here:

Ah, Ariel, so sassy, so pain-in-the-butt-like.
No offence, just what I think about all mean girls. xD

This chapter was more humorous, which I loved. x3 What with the underwear and the 'Wash a car' part, this made me laugh. Hope that you make most of the chapters in Ariel's view humorous (Didn't say all, just some.)

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Yay me! :D -has a very, very, very big ego- I go dormir now, but I can't wait fer 'ze next chapter, ma cherie!
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A moment to cry, a moment to laugh.
A moment to be held, a moment to be let go.
A moment to be sad for not having what we want,
and a moment to be happy with what we got.

Yeah, we all have those moments.
And I advise you not to put them to waste.
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XDD Okays Night! I have already started on it! I'm slipping in the humor you wanted becaus eit comes naturally to me and I like giving them some edge to their voices.

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Hurray!!! I cant wait to read it!! XD i love the sense of humor Moony!! Cracks me up every time!!! XD I just love your writing!!

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Good I'm glad! -huggles- I LOVE U GUYS! XD

Chapter Three up in a sec! Srsly!

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Oh my gosh!!! I love it so much!!!! XD I love what you have done to the characters!!! XD Tis so much fun to read!!! XD I wont psuh you to write anymore tonight... though i should like to read more XD

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Thank you sooo much!!!!
I probably won't right anymore tonight, Moony a little tored. Though I understand, more will be up soon. =D

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