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ThunderClan Deputy

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The eye ball and apple (Don't ask)


You might have thought that this story is about an apple and an eye ball! You are wrong! It's about a puppy and another puppy with the names eye ball and apple! Let me think a minute and I will get started!



 The puppies were perfect, just as the mother had imagined. There were 2 black puppies named Eye ball and Apple. Their mom loved them until the separation storm. They happened often to dogs who had puppies. They are taken away and the mother is supposed to foget about them but not her. She couldn't stop thinking about them. She would do anything to get them back but she had a feeling that she would never see them again.


Poor puppies! What will happen? Read more when I put up more.



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Okay here we go-

The puppies were put in a box marked "Free" and left there. "We have to find our mother." Eye ball said. He thought that he was so smart. "We might get hurt." Apple said. "Don't worry.I'll protect you." Suddenly a person walked over and saw the puppies. He grabbed Eye ball and looked him over. "Eye ball huh." The man walked away with Eye ball in his arms. Apple watched as his brother disappeared into a car and wenat away. Then, he figured that his brother was right. He would find him and they would find their mother together!

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its very good so far.
its so sad how that happens to puppies and thier mothers!!!
cant wait to read more!

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Apple stared in horror as the cars passed violently on the road. He had left the box that morning and found some food laying on the ground near a trash can. It was okay but he had eaten better. When the cars stopped coming for a while and Apple darted across. Then he trekked around town for a while looking into cars that looked like the one Eye ball had been taken away in. So far, no luck.He looked into a car that looked like the one and there was a man in it. And a dog! A dog that looked like his brother! "Eye ball!" he cried. The dog looked at him and smiled. "Apple!" he cried. Just like that the car zoomed off and Apple tried to follow it but it was too fast.

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Eye Ball felt terrible. He had lost his brother. Nothing could stop him from getting out of the car. He bit the man. He got thrown into the back seat. It hurt. He turned around and thought of a plan. It was perfect! H needed a little more time and he would have it ready.

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let me think for a while before anything else happens. I dunno what the idea is yet

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Aww, :[
I hope they get reunited soon! D:

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We all have our moments:
A moment to cry, a moment to laugh.
A moment to be held, a moment to be let go.
A moment to be sad for not having what we want,
and a moment to be happy with what we got.

Yeah, we all have those moments.
And I advise you not to put them to waste.
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Okay, thought Apple. If I just get that cars scent. Apple had an idea too. "I have to find him this way. There isn't another!" He was determined to find his brother. Just a little more searching and he knew he would get the cars scent. But they all smelled the same. He began to doubt his searching.

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ThunderClan Medicine Cat Apprentice

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lol. this is awesome. and funny. i feel sorry 4 the pups.



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you're hiding in the closet
once again, start smiling.
I know you're tryin', real hard
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pretty darling, face tomorrow
tomorrow's not yesterday. <3

 



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Wanna help me Timber? Or anyone else? Pm me and tell me your ideas.

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