Umm, I decided to make a new story, since the other one..... got boreing. :)
This is after Firestar dies. :(
I know, the profecy sucks! :P
I make up the names of Hollyleaf, Lionclaw, and Jaybird. :D
Main Charecter:
Starleaf - healer : a silver tabby with starry blue eyes Rosepad - warrior : a fluffy ginger tabby with pale blue eyes, sister of Starleaf
Prolouge
Blazing stars flashed through the sky. "What have you got for me now?" a silver tabby dipped her head politley. The voices choursed together, almost like one, thick, strong voice. A orange tabby stepped up, closer to the tabby then the rest of the starry cats. "Find your destiny, through the mists. When the chosen one comes, you'll find white fire." "What?" the beautiful tabby asked. "Find white fire, Starleaf!" answered the chourus. Then slowly, one by one, they dissapeared.
lol. i don't know etheir how 2 solve da profecy. XD all well........
Chapter 1 Starleaf padded out of the medicine cat den. Her mentor, Jaybird sent her to find juniper berries. The dream she had last night was confusing. "How can I out of all the great cats find white fire?" Starleaf asked herself. She tried to push the profecy to the back of her mind. Right now, what she had to concentrate on was juniper berries. The cold frost the nights before had killed almost every one of those berries, and the clan needed that the most. Suddenly, something caught her sight. JUNIPER BERRIES!!!!! Starleaf thought gratefully. ALL RIGHT! Quickly gathering all that she could find, which was not that much, she raced back to her camp. "Great job!" Jaybird said, licking her ear. Starleaf's heart leaped to joy. Jaybird never said a praise that easily, and now she's managed to find juniper berries, get a praise from her mentor, AND get a LICK from him. Starleaf figured that it'd be best if she told him about the profecy. "Jaybird?" she asked softly to the blind cat. "Yes?" he answered quickly. "Umm.... I have a profecy to tell you about." "All right," he shifted to get in a comfortable position. "Begin." "Last night, I saw StarClan. What they told me, well, I have to say, it isn't the most usual. They told me that well-" she got cut off. "WINDCLAN IS INVADING OUR LAND!" Thunderfoot, the best fighter yowled to his clan.
Nice! :D Keep it up, hun! But may I suggest that you don't necessarily have to right in capital letters when someone is yelling. x3
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We all have our moments: A moment to cry, a moment to laugh. A moment to be held, a moment to be let go. A moment to be sad for not having what we want, and a moment to be happy with what we got.
Yeah, we all have those moments. And I advise you not to put them to waste.
" Embertail, Patchpelt, Rainfur, Stormpelt, you go with Thunderfoot," Bramblestar, the ThunderClan leader yowled. " Kits, elders, and queens! Hide in my den. Frostpaw, Cloudtail, Clusterpelt, Pathpaw, Rosepaw! Come with me." With a swish of his tail, everybody left, and the remaining of the warriors guarded the camp.
"Why did you invade our border?" Bramblestar demanded the WindClan cats. The two patrols met, and both agreed that WindClan crossed the border line. every cat's tail was held high, and when they hear the signal from their leader, they would attack instanly. "We didn't cross the border," snickered Puddlefur. " We accidently stepped over it." With one sharp yowl, the cats hurdled into battle.
We all have our moments: A moment to cry, a moment to laugh. A moment to be held, a moment to be let go. A moment to be sad for not having what we want, and a moment to be happy with what we got.
Yeah, we all have those moments. And I advise you not to put them to waste.
