Warrior Cats: The Four Clans

Moonstar · RiverClan Leader

RE: *~Moonstar's Poetry~* -new poem, You'll Never See-

Moonstar · RiverClan Leader

Scars
The taste is bitter and lonely on my tongue
Having to experience such pain so young
And while my hearts throbbing
Sobbing, sobbing

Was it a lie, I doubt it
Either way I hope hes happy about it
I thought I was being clever and cunning
Running, running

Away from the hurt
Away from the sting
Away from every phrase, touch or thing
Aching, aching

Another scar on my punctured heart
Too many wounds from the start
But God is breathing down my neck
Healing, healing

And the marks of hurt begin to fade
This feeling Id never trade
I have a new heart with a new soul
Getting over you is my goal
And through it all
Through the piercing thorn
My living healers are there when I am torn
Comforting, consoling
My pain is rolling
Away
In replace is confidence
This scratch will not stay

Here's what I wrote about this poem on my dA the other night:
Tonight was very, very hard.
I needed to vent.
I'd rather not go into detail, but it was almost like getting rejected.

But what this poem is about is not about the pain.
It's not about the other scar I've gained (haha, I dind't mean for that to rhyme).
What it's about is not the effect it immediately had
Leaving the taste of a stinging hurt
What this poem's really REALLY about is that in my time of need
My friends were there to catch my fall and lower me safely to the ground.
And so was God.
And God healed my heart for the upteenth time from all the scars I've recieved over the years (in church, we do this alot) and it feels better. I actually don't feel as much pain and hurt.
This is one of my poems I hope you actually did/do read, because it is very important to me that no matter what you're going through, there are people around you who know you are worthy and who love you. They will help you rise back to your feet and continue a happy, healthy life.

Thank yous to my friends and God. <33
Ily.

So yeah. I've discovered it probably WAS a lie ( the thing i was upset about) so I'm happy now :D But I was upset enough to write a decent poem! x3

-- Edited by Moonstar at 18:18, 2008-11-15

Emberpaw · WindClan Apprentice

WHEE FOR BEING UPSET ENOUGH TO WRITE A DECENT POEM~

Moonstar · RiverClan Leader

RE: *~Moonstar's Poetry~* -New poem 11/15-

Amourapaw · ThunderClan Medicine Cat Apprentice

Wow mooney! i lubbs it. ur such a great poem writer..... XD

Moonstar · RiverClan Leader

Thanks sooo much Timbey ^^ It seriously means a lot! :p

Amourapaw · ThunderClan Medicine Cat Apprentice

hehe... timbey. like it XD

ur totally welcome! write more pLZ! =D

Moonstar · RiverClan Leader

Haha, I will soon prolly.

Amourapaw · ThunderClan Medicine Cat Apprentice

yayers! =D I can't wait =D

Moonstar · RiverClan Leader

Two new poems!

Confessions

I feel the burning stares against my face
Nervousness boiling from my cheeks from the taste
Hoping Im pretty enough to deserve your gaze
Lost in this impossible phase

Provide me directions to the pit of your stubborn heart
Sparingly cracking, shattering apart
I read your actions, you love me too
So why dont you do whats best for you?

I suppose I ought to vanish, just walk away
Youre not going to hurt me, not today
But its too late, I sob alone
Too many chances Ive already blown

I dont deserve you; youre the last thing I desire
But when it comes to necessities, you are the fire
The taunting flames licking me closer with ease
Then snapping me away, shoving me to my knees

But youll never drift past the immature side
Sacrificing popularity and taking me as your bride
Although well never go further, one fact will always remain
You are my fire, and I am your rain

(Read my note on dA to find out the meaning to some of these phrases: http://warriorzgal.deviantart.com/art/Confessions-104630663)

Comparisons

Slide that darn smile off your face
It may be meant for her,
but I'm the one noting your actions.

Let me admire the grin you flash her
She may enjoy it,
but I'm addicted to it.

Allow me to slip my hand in yours
Her eyes may be shiny,
but mine are glowing.

Force my lips against your own
She may like you,
but I love you.

A/N: Yes, the d-word was in the first sentence. I changed it for this forum.
(Read my note on dA to find out how I got my inspiration for writing this: http://warriorzgal.deviantart.com/art/Comparisons-104461778)

-- Edited by Moonstar at 20:02, 2008-11-26