Hey everyone, I needed to get my feelings out, so here it goes....
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Poems: Us
I was cold and hurting lost out in the night wandering and searching for heaven's light
I saw the night sky clearing when you spread your rainbow wings But little did I know what joy you would bring
From that moment on a friendship did start you kissed away my tears and sheltered my heart
I bless the day God sent him from above But then I grew fearful for I had fallen in love
I told you this feeling and what did you say? You said you liked our friendship and that's how it would stay
I cried for a friendship I thought I lost But then felt your warm, gentle hand You then whispered in my ear that by my side you'll forever stand
I just wanted to say.... You don't know how I'm feeling. I have yet to vocalize Desire deep inside me. Can you see it in my eyes?
I tremble when I'm near you Heat travels up my thighs and I want you with an urgency That I just can't describe.
Dare I reach out to touch you? Do you think you'd realize How much I want and need you? Can you see it in my eyes?
I long to say, "I love you," But am scared of your reply. Terrified like a child I've become paralyzed.
The camouflaged emotions Lead to pain and silent cries. And yet I just can't tell you. Don't you see it in my eyes?
Confessing through this poem My dilemma summarized. The feeling's quite cathartic, But will lead to my demise.
Breakup
When you love someone so deep inside, It seems like it's so easy to hide. You've loved him for so very long, You would think he could do no wrong.
Every day you would hope and pray, That he would always stay this way. He treated you like you should be treated, You thought your life was finally completed.
You thought your love was growing true, And then one day it was all so blue. He started putting you down and it hurt, You thought all you were to him was dirt.
He started ignoring you and you wondered why, All you wanted to do was curl up and die. You thought your relationship would never end, But that was all so fake and pretend.
One night he was so sweet to you, You thought all those things were maybe untrue, Two days later he was back the same, You thought you were the one to blame.
He thought the relationship was getting too serious And that you had become a little too curious. By this time you knew it wouldn't last, All the nice things he said were in the past.
You thought that you would marry him some day, But this time God wanted to get his way. You wanted things back how they were before, But you knew this couldn't happen anymore.
It was a Saturday night about ten o'clock, You heard the news and it wasn't a shock. You knew this was going to happen soon, As you laid there and cried in the pale lit moon.
I miss you
So confused Not knowing what to do I love you so much But I love him too
Most of the time all we ever do is fight I really don't have a clue on how to make it right
I want to be with you But he is never off my mind I'm sorry that I am hurting you I'm sorry I'm that kind
Why do I still love my ex I ask myself everyday I have you now But I just want to hold him and say
I miss you so much You are the love of my life I want to be with you forever I want to be your wife
He would never hurt me Curse at me or lie So that is why I have to say I'm sorry and good-bye.
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He looks around the room Innocently overlooks the truth Shouldn't a light go on? Doesn't he know I've had him memorized for so long?
He sees everything black and white Never let nobody see him cry I don't let nobody see me wishing he was mine
DAWN Dance to the drumbeat at dawn pounding in your veins As the cats rise to their last sunrise Every heartbeat can be their last Ground beneath your paws shifting Hunters the hunted As the dawn, darker than any eclipse, rises cruelly It is to be a new day. Marching off to a battle that cannot be won Singing a victory chant that cannot be sung Half of your number will not return On this cold, cruel dawn.
STARCLAN They are there when the sun rises They are there when it sets They are there and they know every word you utter Every thought you think Every breath you breathe . . They know who you are They know your story And they are blazing above you in Silverpelt For ev er more Someday you'll fly up to the stars But today both paws are on the ground Don't you hear the stars calling? Go there now Go to the place of starshine and the wild places of the night.
LOVE LIFE by warriorstar Sun, moon, day, night Peace by peace, fight by fight Defend your clan and grow up strong Be a warrior-know right from wrong. Elder, warrior, apprentice, kit Every cat does their bit. Love your clan and hate your foes Until you're called to the stars where everycat goes. Fighting or hunting, peace or war The warrior cat life is never a bore! And whether you're suffering from hunger or strife Think of this poem and remember: LOVE LIFE!
WARRIOR CATS by doodoo1
ThunderClan, RiverClan, Shadow and Star Don't forget WindClan and Blood Firestar, Leopardstar, Tigerstar, Brokenstar, naming these warriors are fun! Us warriors know, what us warriors should do, helping our friends through the flood, Or fire or storm, We shelter them all Living warrior life is the ONE! We prowl in the day, We run in the night, We do unto others too And if we ever get into a fight My efforts are all for you.
IN MEMORIAM Lived her clan with every torn claw and drop of blood Served it with every blow She loved it until the day she died And she loves it now, walking in the stars. She was a loyal warrior once, though some would say she betrayed her clan when she took a mate from across the river but she gave up her very own kits to make sure her clan did not fall into the wrong paws. She saw a cat whose pelt was as bright as flame Brought him in her clan It would never be the same. But she trusted a cat whose heart was as dark as night And nearly paid with her life. Her mind began to fracture as she doubed her own judgement Doubed her own warriors' loyalty Declared war on StarClan But made peace with them as she died. She had saved her deputy from the dog pack and sent the pack leader over the gorge But this time she paid with her life. She still watches over her clan now Watching it with a new sense of peace not found in life And sometimes we smell her scent wreathing us, as if to say hello But we still miss you, Bluestar.
FIRE! Smoke singes the nostrils of the cat whose pelt is as fiery as the flames Leaping and twirling like dancers beyond him Fire! Yowling a warning to his clan, they inhaling the toxins of the air Fire! Where's my kit? Stay in front of it! Fire! Get to the river We'll be safe there Fire! Swimming across frantically not sure where it will be pebbles or a current sweeping you away Fire! Clanmates dead Two missing-a world of agony Fire! Get to safety at the island shore One is dead already. Fire! The leader sits hunched, her eyes lacking their defiant glow She believes her clan is no more Fire! And still she watches the forest being burned up A fire still burning behind her eyes
cats of the clans surive when they can defend the border shoulder to shoulder hunt the mice even share a slice Starclan we thank you never will spank you cats of the clans surive when they can
-Mosshead702
FORBIDDEN LOVE She was from NightClan He was from Day The Clans were rivals,anyway They fought and battled But they never fought eachother for fear they would find out about their 'love' It was as pure as snow and as deep as the ocean the love for eachother really did show, They kept it hidden from the others for fear they would find out one day,though Night attacked Day making them run away every night now,she looks at the stars and he wishing they weren't that they far -Rainfire701
IN LOVING MEMORY OF SILVERSNOW Only the good die young- that is what they always say, and I have found proof of that today. I found out that Silversnow, dear Silversnow, has died I saw that and I prayed and I cried. I felt like the ground had dropped out beneath me It was so sudden, so cruel, so unfair! It was in a snap of a finger An hour A birdsong- I will read you Eclipse and hope you hear me Your site mourns for you- 'Receive her with honor . . . and protect her site." STARS ARE SHINING by warriorstar
Stars are Shining......
Stars are shining Clouds are few The waxing moon Is gold on blue.
Do you believe in love at first sight? I do. The stars are gleaming for us tonight.
Fur a-brushing Tails entwined Eyes filled with moonlight Captivating my mind
Do you see the sky? The midnight sky above? It's eternity and endlessness Represents my love.
And yet while my heart rejoices It also cries out and greives As we wander aimlessly Through the dried-out leaves.
Alas - the dawn! A new day, warm and sun-kissed My love and I, we stroll along Through the morning mist.
This is daybreak, and I know That you must soon fade For you are a StarClan cat And of moonbeams made.
We shall meet in Silverpelt There, my broken heart will mend Being together forevermore True love knows no end.
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He looks around the room Innocently overlooks the truth Shouldn't a light go on? Doesn't he know I've had him memorized for so long?
He sees everything black and white Never let nobody see him cry I don't let nobody see me wishing he was mine
