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Moonstar


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Forever Moon
Hello everybody! I have decided to write a warriors book about my character, Moonstar's, history. I don't know how sidetracked I may get, but I'll do my best to keep you well-informed about what happened to Moonstar without adding in things that wouldn't have actually happened in her life [which is going to be hard to do!]. Anyways, I hope you read and enjoy :]



-- Edited by Moonstar on Thursday 3rd of September 2009 12:32:19 AM

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RiverClan

Leader

Birchstar- Dark brown tabby tom.

Deputy

 Redleaf- Reddish-colored tom with a white belly, paws, muzzle, and stripes.

Medicine Cat

Goldenshadow- Golden she-cat with dainty white paws.

Apprentice, Hollowpaw

Warriors

 Shyheart- Ebony she-cat with a white tail-tip.

Apprentice, Littlepaw

Whitebird- Pretty white tortoiseshell she-cat.

Smokepelt- Solid dark gray tabby tom.

Snakestripe- Ginger-red tabby tom.

Dewcloud- Handsome white tom with silver splotches.

Shrewtail- Light brown tabby tom.

Apprentice, Thrushpaw

Pantherheart- Sleek black tom with unusual blue eyes.

Apprentice, Badgerpaw

Maplenose- Pale honey-colored she-cat.

Autumnleaf- Long-haired she-cat with a dappled pelt of many colors.

Apprentice, Moonpaw

Apprentices

Moonpaw- Silver she-cat with folded ears.

Littlepaw- Small dusky brown she-cat.

Thrushpaw- Long-haired golden-brown tabby tom.

Badgerpaw- White tom with black splotches.

Hollowpaw- Long-haired black she-cat with ice blue eyes.

Kits

Tinykit- Small-footed silver she-cat.

Sparrowkit- Brown tom with white belly and muzzle.

Queens

Gingerstorm- Pale ginger she-cat

Harefoot- Long-haired white she-cat. [Kits- Tinykit; Sparrowkit]

Ambereyes- White she-cat with red, brown, and black splotches and big, amber eyes.

Elders

Shallowheart- Big black tom with dark eyes.

Thinwhisker- Small ginger tom with very fragile whiskers.

Halfsight- Brown tabby tom with white stripes; blind in one eye.



-- Edited by Moonstar on Monday 31st of August 2009 03:37:41 AM

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Prologue

A long-haired tom slid through the dense undergrowth, his pelt glistening under the pale moonlight beaming down on his stripes. He hissed under his breath; his gleaming fur was quite noticeable, and now was not a time to be discovered. Quietly, he slipped beneath the remaining ferns that had curved into a small obstacle and exploded into the clearing.

                She was panting in the grass, her belly rising rapidly. Her fragile whiskers flicked with every painful movement, but her eyes flowed like a river, blue and dignified. As he crept up to her side, she relaxed slightly, lifting her nose, and he gently touched it with his own.

                "Icebreath," he murmured carefully, "How is the process coming along?"
                The white she-cats reply was a cool, tender wisp of air released from her mouth, drowning out her awkward Clan scent.

                The male sighed, nestling beside her for timid support. "Alas," he mumbled. "They have come. The chosen ones have come."



-- Edited by Moonstar on Monday 31st of August 2009 03:27:58 AM

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Hurray! I love it when you write stories! XD I cant wait for more!!! Twas reading the descriptions of the characters, Hollowpaw sounds like Ebonycloud in a different life XD I cant wait for more!!!

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Moonstar


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Why thank you so much bestie!! I am actually really excited writing this one!! :]
You know, I may've been thinking of Ebonycloud at the time... I dunno xDD I hope you don't mind if she's similar. Ha, I didn't even notice xDD

-- Edited by Moonstar on Sunday 30th of August 2009 07:01:57 AM

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AAHH!!! I've never seen you write anything but ahh-maising poems, Moony! I cannot WAIT to see what you can do with a story! *waits quite unpaitently*

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I dont mind at all if they are similar! I just happen to love the way that character looks ;D Hehehe, still i cant wait for more of this to come out! I love it when you write!!!

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*gasps* the chosen ones.. those words kinda freak me out. It like reminds me of Holly, Jay, and Lion. XD *shivvers*
anyways, this is an amazing little prolougue! I loved it; lots of detail in it's little paragraph! Can't wait to read more!

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