I liked every ones stories soooooo.......................Well, I only have four chapters in the story, and the plot is weird, but I wanted to put part of the book that I'm writing out here for people to veiw.=3 Please enjoy!
The World of Furries!
Chapter1; THIS is a normal day?!
" Oh man............ sooooooooooooooooo bored.................... " I muttered as I sat in my gloomy,boring, and creepy class room. My name is Scorchpaw.... er, ...that's my nick-name.It was Friday 8th, 2010. That day seemed like one weird and abnormal one.............. but I had no idea exactly HOW weird it was going to get...................... untill now that is. 'BEEP!' "Students, your computer assignment is due on Monday evening." said my computer teacher, Mrs. Valencia as the bell rang.Apparently, right after Christmas break the teachers gave us all home-work. It was the last day of the week too. Today all the students were more, energetic than they usually were. I could feel it. I could sense the tense energy coursing through their bodies as we all rushed out of room four.That day, I had had my first lunch detention ever, finished like 20 class assighnements, and I had five tests for homework. I was shoved out into the hall-way with many others as students poured out of the class rooms to go and wait for their buses. I had been in my seventh hour computer class, the last class of the day. Also, Mrs. Valancia is a nice teacher, but she is strict with her students to keep them in line. She's not too mean or too nice. " Now to go home before the bus comes!" I exclaimed as I ran out of the building. You see , I REEEEALLY don't like catching the bus.... so I walk home to get more strength in my legs. That's why I have stronger legs than the other kids. The trek to my house is exactly one mile. I normaly have to walk through thickets, brambles, the highway, streets, you know, the usual stuff.It was a blurr as I got home . I was exhousted as my mucles were releived of the bagage I had been carrying, mainly consisting of a Bright red and black back-pack, and a dark red lunch-box radio. I fell on my soft bed , not bothering to take my glasses off.The pillos and blankets seeming to be so soft you could sink into them and be indulged in a world of dreams, never to wake up again. But, the next time I woke up... I was so not in Kansas anymore....Not that I ever haz been! :P
Chapter 2; "I'm one of them.............."
" cold......................... want my blanketzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz............................................." I mumbled sheepishly as I slept. " Okay..... maby I can get on the ..................X-Box....................... Why's my bed so freakn' hard?!" As I woke I found myself in a flushed state. My head seemed to spin with exhoustion. But when I looked around , A flurry of colors rushed at me. I blurrily stumbled on the hard , mud sodden earth. " Where am I?" I said rather shakily.But as I looked around, I seemed to be surrounded with coniferouse and deciduouse trees in late fall. It was, as I saw, bright in the night sky .As I was about to explore, I cought a glimps of moonlight reflecting on something blue." A puddle?" I said as I staggered towards the mysteriouse pool of water.............................................. but what I saw chilled me to the bone. " Wha...... what the hell is t-that thing?! Oh my god! Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!" as I looked into the pool, I saw a creature that looked like me, but it wasn't human. " I'm a Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurry!" I screamed as I realized exactly what I was staring at. Furries are creatures that are part human part animal, things like where wolves or ....well, you know the rest."But if that's me................. I must be in the furry world." I muttered. I figured that I was also in a forest some where in this weird world, so, since I got bored, I explored the part of the forest that I was in. The forest also had some veryeasily aggitated squerrels who thought they owned the place, and they had their silly little squerrel brigade chasing me for two hours before they got bored and called it a night.I was walking in the rather swampy part of the forest when I heard a twig snap and a disembodied voice saying,"Wha' are ye' doin' in here runt, or will I ha' ta' beat the answer out o' ya'?" I spun around to where I Heard the voice. Just behind me, a tall musculer, silvery-grey wolf furry loomed in the trees just above where I was standing.His pelt was covered withe rank stench of blood, mud, and frog spawn. In other words, he looked like one of those strong guys that had no brains. "Big mistake pig mouth!"I retorted. and, since he had insisted on being such a brat, "I'll show you who's beating the crap out of who!" I cried as I kicked him squarley in the chest, which sent him into a bramble bush. When he came out, his face looked like a rather irritated dog had tried to maul him and had been killed by this nutty dude. He growled and let out a ferocious roar that seemed to deafen the whole forest. " Die you freak!" he screeched as he drove his claws into my shoulder. Then,(he,he,he,he,he.....), I accidentally bit his fluffy tail because he had me in a head-lock. " Wha' the hell!" he screamed as he tried to fling me into a tree. " Iaintlettin'gojerk-face!"I shouted through tufts of Silver-Grey fur. And I wasn't joking either. He flung me into a tree 17 times and I wouldn't budge,but that was only because my fangs were stuck in his fur. I finally came loose when he decided to untangle my sharp, bloody-white colored teeth out of the wet patches of Silver-Grey fur on his tail. Then I escaped another "flinging into the trees" by running as fast as I could to get away from the nutty furry. But that was only the beginning of my many battles to come.
Chapter 3: The prince and the Patheticley Poor girl.
ic: Scorchpaw had been in the forest for hours before she finally managed to get out. "God that took forever!"scorchpaw laughed as she came to a town. No one was awake and all was silent. She could only hear the beating of her heart. "Is anyone here?"scorchpaw called out.There was no reply.She felt alone in this strange town.She saw a tree and climbed into a hollow hole and hid there.As she(I) fell asleep, the town woke up. every one was bustling around and buissying themselves. Furry knights surrounded the area as a carrage came by. The person inside was the dark furry prince, at the age of 18. He did his daily strole around town. People avoided him and bowed deeply. As the people and knights buissied themselves, he saw a foot sticking out of the tree I was in. As I slept, I could hear the stomping of hoofs. I woke up and looked out side the tree to find every thing and every body staring up at me.And just looking at me right next to my sleeping place was the prince. We looked at each other and did the classical thing-we both screamed at each other at the same exact time! I immediatly bolted out of the tree and ran in my skinny green jeans and skinny brown t-shirt. Every body was shocked to see me react like that. The knights scrambled into action and started chasing me like mad clanging in the junk pile of armor that they wore. The prince hopped onto one of the royal gaurd horses and I was on the run like some crazy banshee. I didn't see a wall in front of me- wich was really stupid- an crashed into it! I fell on the ground knocked out as the royal gaurd and the prince along with the towns people watched me be dragged be over to the prince. I quickly woke up and did the one thing possible, I shouted"WHOA!Dude,chill out!"and everbody stared at me like I was not even human.Didn't they speak plain english? "What is your name?"The dark furry prince asked me as I was hauled off to the castle with him and we were carried by hoarses.(WOOT!LIMO!) and then we entered the castle. I wasn't really suprised, considering I've seen this type of stuff since I was two years old."Anyways,my name is Scorchpaw,but Scorchie will do just fine."I said, merly looking at the gaurds. The weirdo prince kept eyeing me. "Do I look funny? Or is it that you wanna send me to da' dungeon? Trust me dude, I know how to fight lots better than those fony ballony knights of yours."I said. He kept eyeing me and said."No not at all...... will you be my first lady?"he said with those weird and crazy lovy-dovy eyes."WHOA!What?!"I said with a lot more shock. He was a wolf furry-that was for sure-but I was only 13 years old!"Will you be my first lady?"he asked again, this time spreading...WINGS?! I looked at him with more shock.This guy was a DRAGON WOLF FURRY?!"Uhhhh...................."I said, my cheeks getting red. What was I supposed to do?! I mean,come on, you don't just walk up to somebody you've never met who's younger than you and ask to get married! I decided he was a weirdo, so I asked to leave. He thought I only did that cause' I wanted to think about it. Yeah right! I would SO not get married!The next day, after I had slept comfortabley in an inn, I woke up to find the news-paper on my bed. I looked it over.Boy was I shocked."GIRL TO BE MARRIED TO THE PRINCE?! BETROTHED AND ENGAGED?! OH NO HE DIDN"T! HE DID NOT!"I cried as I read the artical.The other people in the town were too buissy looking for'the mysteriouse bride-to-be'. I went out of the old musty inn wearing a beautifully woven silky purple and green cloak that the inn keeper had so kindly loaned me. People marvled at the picture of me in the news-paper. They talked to me and asked if I'd seen'miss-run-away' and didn't look under my hood to find out who I was. I went to the entrance gate of the town and the gaurds let me out, having no idea that the bride to be was escaping from the prince.I trecked throught the forest, knowing he could easily have spotted me. I was glad to be rid of him. He had a chill of ambition as well as Dakrke magic, but I thought that was just greed. I trecked through the thick pines and came to an old village with many people. It was the after noon, and I had had enough of walking for hours on end with out stopping. When I walked into the village, people stared at my beautifull silk clothing as it shimmers in the rays that immited from the sun. I had never felt so alone. I explored the town and the shops, carefully looking into each persons eyes. As sunset drew near a golden wolf furry cupped his hand over my mouth and dragged me into an alley way."Hi there. Gimme yer' money and you won't get hurt."He said with a smirk.
Hope that wasn't too dramatic! I IZ A DRAMAQUEEN! ^.^"
chapter 4: Escaping into another trap
I had made it out of the town or village, whatever that place was, and was free of the whimpy and really weird prince. The good news was I wasn't getting married. The bad news was that every body noticed that I had left the town. They searched for me and found no trace. Neither did the prince, who was in a bad mood. He had let his bride to be escape-his one chance of becoming the ruler of this wreched town.
Dark clouds were over the kingdom as he stared out his window. He,Silas, had let the face he'd been hoping to look at forever when he ruled this wreched place escape his clutches! He went over to the gate keeper as rain drizzled out of the thickley dark clouds that surrounded them."Did you or the last gate-keeper on duty let a younge girl walk out of this gate at any time?!"He thundered as lightning struck the sky. His fur bristled as traces of his darke magic flowed through him, sending charges of static electricity through his body. His beautiful blue and purple silk cloak clung to him like a shimmering soaked star. His black pelt was soaked to the brim with rain. "y-yes sir, at exactley 5:30am this morning." stammered the shivering antelope knight gate keeper furry as he shivered in his rusting armor.
"What was the person wearing when you let them out?!"Silas said with less rage.The muddy earth below shimmered and dampened as the static electricity he was giving off coursed through his boots. The wooden gate with iron hinges clanked and creaked feebly as the rain rusted the iron hinges,wich became more unstable to the giant wooden door. "A Green and purple silk cloak yer' magesty, and she w-was wearing black pants with a b-black shirt, baggypants, and a skinny shirt with baggy sleeves sir." The gate keeper replied.
Silas stiffined. He saw movement in the forest path ahead of the gate, the dampened soil of the road showing like a dark brown river of mud. A furry was coming, with a bundle of rags. He came up to them, tartiley sighing as he dropped the bag in front of the prince.The job he'd been requested to do had been easy. Just catch the escapy, bag im' an' bring im' back. "Came wit yer' request sire."he snorted. He had the statraturer of a strong wolf furry, his massive muscles bulging. But he knew he was no match fer' prince Silas, with his dumb spells.
Out of the bag tumbled a Dragon furry, his wings firmly tied to his hind legs."I've got a request for you to fill out."Silas snarled at the the dragon furry. "If you complete it, your crimes shall be pardoned and you will be set fre. But should you fail... you will be fed to the dogs. Understood?"The dragon furry nodded. The rain had betun to soak his golden black pelt. "I want you to retrieve a runaway."Silas said as he gave the Escape a picture of her. The prince provided him with a horse, food, and money."Now go and get her!"he cried as the dragon furry set off. His steed was a black one with Darke magic flowing from its pelt. He rode off, knowing that Silas would kill him if he didn't find her.
The sky had began to fade to black and was a beautiful golden red by the time he reached the next town. It was full of people who were bustling at night. Then he saw a strange girl being hastled by a Golden pelted Cat tom furry who had her up agianst a wall. He tethered his black stallion to a post at an inn and ran over, a switchblade in his hand. people took no notice as he attacked the furry, at least not untell they saw him flash out a blade. They now noticed the strange girl being hastled too. "No! I don't have any money and if I did I wouldn't give it to a jerk like you!"I yelled as the Golden furry had me leaned up against a wall in an alley way. "Aww, come on, don't be so harsh."he said, drawing out his black claws that had the stench of blood on them.I tried to move, but he had me pinned against the wall, his strength out matching mine.
This guy was crazy! I was not going to give him any money, and I was not gonna be a damsel in distress.Then I saw a weird dragon furry with a golden-black pelt come at the other furry. He charged through, his switch blade knife ripping flesh as it tore at the creep's arm. The guy was being carried away by two hyena furry knights that were happy to get him off to the dungeon.
The villagers went back to their buissness, paying no mind to what had happened."Thanks, I would have been mugged hadn't it been for you."I said, smiling at my savior. Then he grasped my arm and pulled me into a near by tavern. He sat us down at a table and ordered a whiskey. I told him I was 100% sober, and ordered a root Beer. Soda does me better than the smell of whiskey ever did. I sat there and we talked a bit.
He was drunk, and he told me a lot of things. I gasped at the last thing I heard before he became unconciouse from drinking so much whiskey."And this guy? You know, Silas? He asked me to find this run away, her name was ......Scorchpaw.Pretty stupid huh?he,he told me to find her so I could not have to go back to the dungeon..haha....stupid prince...I'm 18 years old...da...da...da,da,da,da,da......"And then he just fell asleep, tired and drunk.
Dude,You don't just get drunk and say"hi, I have to kidnap you"and then doze off like it was nothing. I carried the drunk dummy to the inn that was accross from the tavern. I had made sure that we had seperate rooms, but that crazy manager had other ideas. "here's yer' room!he happily called."See you two in the mornin'!" and then he left me in a room with a two person bed, a desk and a couple of chairs with a table. Was this guy nuts?! "Dude, this is crazy..."I bleerily mumbled as I placed the dragon furry on the bed, then I took a blanket and rested on the floor, with a pillow of course.
My captor woke up and was back to attention. What was he doing here?! Where did the girl go?! He thought, finding it strange for him to be in Paul and Ann's inn. He had been in the tavern when he last saw the furry. He looked around and found her on the floor. She was snug and asleep, not stirring or snoring like other guests did. He looked at her, and she seemed familiar. A emralt green and purple sash with a cloak of the same colors...black pants and a black shirt...he fished a picture out of his pocket that Silas had given to him when he had set off. It was a picture of her!
Her age was down at the dog-eared left hand corner of the parchment. She was only 13 years old?! When he looked at her, she looked like she was 16! He lay back on the bed, too tired for a ride back to the palace. What was he supposed to do? He hadn't expected it to be this easy!(Neither did I at the moment)How could she just walk into his paws like that?! How could it be so easy?!
ooc;Wow! THat was reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaally long!
-- Edited by Scorchheart on Friday 12th of February 2010 02:35:04 AM
-- Edited by Scorchheart on Sunday 21st of February 2010 07:45:20 AM
-- Edited by Scorchheart on Tuesday 23rd of February 2010 02:02:14 PM
Chapter 5: A bad morning, and a suspiciouse start.
The dragon furrywoke up the next morning, to find himself in a bed at the inn. He tried to remember what happened. "Right... the run away..." he muttered as what had happened last night flashed back into his mind. He had saved this girl who was getting mugged, got drunk-wierdo- and had found him self in the same room as the girl he'd saved who happened to be the one that had a bounty on her head.
He looked around the dull ,damp , and musty room to find no one else there...Where was she?! Silas's words rang in his ears: "Should you fail.... I'll have you fed to the dogs! Understand?!" the sneering face of Silas seemed to be frozen in hi mind. How was he supposed to find her or pay for the rent?! He had very little money-curtousey of Silas- and very little to trade.
He went to the dank window and brushed off the dust with his grubby paws and looked out side. It was the crack of dawn, the magic hour. Then he heard a breif and soft knocking on the door."Come in..."He said rather shakily. And as he said it, the run away entered the room with a bag full of food and supplies. "Hi. Nice to see you awake."I said with a smile. He may have been older, and totaly unsober-I do not aprove-but I wanted to help this wierdo. After all, I owed him one. "Say, could you help me fix breakfast? You look thin, and next time, don't drink so much whine."I said to him as he stared at me with a confuzzled look on his face.
He went over and picked out what I had bought as what he thought was a good breakfast. He had a worried feeling in his deep blue eyes. "Are you worried about the rent? Dude, I already payed the manager. I requested for separate rooms, but he didn't have the same idea." I said, rather un- old fashioned like since I wasn't from this place of crazy and phony baloney knights."Oh, by the way, my name..er' nickname, is Scorchpaw."I extended a hand for him to shake. He shook it like a timid rabbit.
"What's the matter?Dude, you can tell me, and don't hold back, cause I'll find out sooner or later."I said rather tartly. What was with this guy?He looked like a kitten could kill him if it purred. The he turned around and accidentaly tripped over the table-Dude, are ya' still drunk?!- and fell flat on his face.-face plant!-I immediatley helped him up, only to find his face covered in splinters."you have to watch what your doin' or you face is gonna look like ripped up hamburger."I said to him as I lay him on the bed and got out a first aid kit which I had conventionality kept with me. I gently took the splinters out of his face with a pair of tweezers and while he was silently screaming-his face was red-
I washed the blood off of his face. He looked rather, well... he looked neater when I had finished patching him up. He looked at me with those deep blue eyes, as if he might hug me-do NOT pop my personal space bubble dude- and ended up doing it anyways. He was sobbing on my shoulder- no I've got cooties!- and it was almost as if he were a small frightened child. He looked strong and looked like he'd never cry-SO doesn't suit you dude- and yet his eyes told another story.
"Whao, it's okay, don't cry....it just doesn't seem to suit you..."I said, seeing his wings spread out."Don't even--"Too late. He folded them over us and we were pitched into a black abyss. His eyes seemed to glow withe emotion. He unwrapped his wings and turned away from me, hs face crimson with sincere embarrassment. We left the inn, paying for the service twice-donno why- and he saddled up onto his horse, asking me to come with him. Suspicion rose in me as I saw where he was headed-back to the Wolf Furry prince's palace. What was going on?
Chapter 6: Dull and wrong, Glittering and strong.
I had rather easily parted seperate ways with the rather troublesome dragon furry who watched my every move.The inn keepers were happy to see us off that morning, their shining faces brimming with -aren't-they-a-cute-couple-? looks as I walked away. The dragon furry had a horse, which I wasn't very jealouse of considering you got saddle sores from riding them. It seemed that every body was talking about how I looked like royalty, and that I glittered. I just ignored them untell one guy got smart with me. Boy, he was just dull and wrong, any body was if they ticked me off. He said"She might look all perty, but she's really just a whimp." My fur bristled as I turned to glare at the furry who had ever so bluntley stated that. He was a brown and black bison furry who looked like he could kill with a stare-atleast to the towns folk anyways."What did you say, hill billy?!" I sparked rather tentativeley. He was not gonna get away with saying that. You don't just walk up and say"Hi whimp" and not expect the person to beat you to the ground, wich is exactley what happened. He threw a couple of punches at me, hitting me twice. People gasped expecting me to cry and surrender. But as in all fairy tails, I was stupid enought to get back up. He threw another punch at me, but I grabbed his fist and started crushing it. Apparentley, this guy was the law breaker who got away with stuff cause he was strong. Not around me.I punched him in the stumach, and he rocked on the ground in pai. But then, he pulled out a pistole, and held it up to my face. The crowd gasped and several furry towns folk screamed, all of which were women. He shot at me. The bad news for him was that he didn't have any bullets. The good news for me was that I got to kick his butt. I slammed him on the ground with one swift blow to the face. He lay on the ground, panting, and two furry knights took him off and hauled him off to the dungeon. People cheered with glee, having the criminal of the town gone. I stood truimphantley as people called out the words"Glittering and Strong! Dull and Wrong! Glittering and strong! Dull and wrong!" I had proved that you should never judge a person by their looks. What I didn't know was that the dragon furry had been watching the whole time. And he was scared out of his wits.He knew it wouldn't have been that easy. Why had't she done that with the mugger though? Did he have a protective charme or something?And how was a 13 year old girl so strong?He thought over how to capture her. But the immage of her cruching the other furries hand had frozen still in his mind, and so was her expression.Like a Tiger that had found it's hut, and was killing it. Her hood fell off and he saw a stream of beautifull brown-light gold hair pour out. Then she slipped her hood back on and went back to the inn. Her face... It had been dark brown with light brown that trced from her muzzle to her neck, and she had black stripes along her neck and Black ears. No one else had that type of pelt. No one. He decided to go back to the inn and talk to her. He saw her tial sticking out of the entrance to it.Her tail had Black stripes and a huge amount of fur. It also had dark brown streaks on it. She turned around to see him staring at her. And boy, I was shocked to see that he had come back. I placed my gloves on the clerks counter, and my black paws showed in the sunlight. He seemed surprised to see my face. I removed my hood, only to find him even more shocked."Hi, I thought you had to leave? Or did you decide to travel with me?"I asked him in a sweet silky voice. He meerly took another glance at me and nodded a yes. I didn't care if the dummy was out to get me, cause I betted that the prince was holding something over him. "Say...you said a lot of things in the bar when you were drunk, and I know you're out to get me. But don't you think I can match that phony balony price?"I said, still smiling. He looked even more shocked like "I TOLD YOU THAT?!" in a sort of way. He looked ashamed of himself. And his eyes had a hurt look int them. I gently put my arm around the confuzzled fuss ball and sighed,"Dude, you can stick with me. I will protect you, but that's only cuz you look like you couldn't fight off a little kitten with those paws of yours."I purred, hoping he would cheer up. He did, and he laughed,"haha! A kitten?! You kiddi' me?!" and he smiled for the first time since I had met him. We were unaware of a knight that belonged to Silas who was listening closely. He had heard what he thought he'd never hear. A rebbelion against the prince. He immediatley got on his steed and speed off, knowing his boss would wanna hear this.
-- Edited by Scorchpaw on Monday 1st of February 2010 11:27:22 PM
-- Edited by Scorchheart on Tuesday 23rd of February 2010 02:05:01 PM
