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TOPIC: Fight or Flight Fan Fic xD .:Chapter SEVEN PART 2 is Up =]:. March 23rd Sorry for delay!
Duskstar


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RE: Fight or Flight Fan Fic xD .:Chapter FIVE is Up =]:. Feb. 15th
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"Fang's blog, a popular site on the internet has been tracking the Flock's progress since it was put up." is an incomplete sentence :/ If you put a comma after internet, it would work xD

Also, "He turned and the first person he laid eyes on, was Blaike." comma is not needed :3'

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"If he dies, then it will be God's will."

"If that was meant to be comforting, it was not."

"Everyone dies eventually. Once you are born, you begin to die."

"That was not comforting either!"

"It is the way of the Creed. Usually our deaths are violent but quick."

"Old man, are you trying to provoke me?"

-Stolen from a fanfic~-
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Well, thanks. =] I was in sort of a hurry...So my apologies.

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Lol no worries~ Oh, and shoot, I forgot to tell you that it's awesome! XD

Also, I forget when Theo totally attacks Kit, but I do remember lol-ing at that scene :3'

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"If he dies, then it will be God's will."

"If that was meant to be comforting, it was not."

"Everyone dies eventually. Once you are born, you begin to die."

"That was not comforting either!"

"It is the way of the Creed. Usually our deaths are violent but quick."

"Old man, are you trying to provoke me?"

-Stolen from a fanfic~-
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Haha thank you =] There is a moment coming up when that happens =] I've written out so many ideas, and I've changed a few orders of things, just to sort of, I don't know, spice it up a bit I guess =] Thank you again xD

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Goldheart


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Okay guys, on the last page the post has been edited and the full chapter is there! Hope you enjoy!!

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RE: Fight or Flight Fan Fic xD .:Chapter FIVE is Up =]:. Feb. 16th page 3
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I likies! :3 Discrete, neat-OMG run! Haha! Sooooo funny! However, romance-KitxBlaik-that's the part that made my eyes well up in tears! I like how Kit and Blaik are getting along! X3
Can't get enough of awsome story!

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i decided to read this, because i had read the first few paragraphs, and i must say, goldie, i really like your choice of words. some are sort of awkward in cases, but still, your style is very nice. and good job representing them all. something difficult in writing, but you get the job done! [:

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07.08.13

okay, then.
unfortunately loving an idiot
who doesn't love me back.
but i'm not falling.
i just kind of...
am.
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Aww =] Thank you Resta! That makes my heart smile!

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Scorchheart


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Heart smile!:3 I like the way you used personifycation.

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Hey guys! =D I'm working on the next chapter now! Sorry for the delay! But it shall be up tomorrow at some point! Love you guys, and thank you SO much for being interested in it!

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