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evaongelion:brother hood.


The swell affect.Its considered to be the most powerful thing in an existent.The power to create life or destroy it. A monstrous creature called unit1 made by man had this power, and insted of helping the human race it saw all the flaws and found man unworthy to live.So he destroyed it.Now Human kind is at an end.A dangerous race of celestial beings called 'Angles' that serve Unit1 attack the city's and refugee camps. In one last attempt to save the human race man made five more celestial beings and called them Evaongelion.

Unit#0:Lilith:the loner and leader
Unit#2:Headbutt: the bronze and weapons master.
Unit#3:Radar: the brain and intelligence.
Unit#4:Nara:the fighter and beauty.
Unit#5:Razz:the shy-guy and tactical expert

These five were made in the image of man and woman and alone they must fight Unit1. Outfitted with the latest armor and weaponry they were prepared for the angels to come, but when thay were ready the angels stopped attacking. the humans put all five into a stasis of sleep and there they wait....Its been 12 years since my teachers tolled me that and here i am 14 doing the same things every day. I just wish something else would happen some thing extraordinary some thig that wold change my life for ever. Hi my name is Katana i live in a old foster home i go to Thachery middle and this is my story.

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i am the rust upon your gears i am the insect in your ears. i hide in side you're fears.i make you cry those salty tears. i am katanapaw!


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not posting any thing yet.

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i am the rust upon your gears i am the insect in your ears. i hide in side you're fears.i make you cry those salty tears. i am katanapaw!


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COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL! 8D Where do you think these things up?!

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idk? its just easy to think of.

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chapter one Part 1: the awakening

katana woke up and bashed the annoying buzzing alarm clock with his atomail arm shattering it in to a plastic mess upon the night stand and pulled the covers back over his head. He gave a sight groan and mumbled under his breath as the foster home nun pulled of the blankets."young man if you don't get up you'll miss the first day of school." he hated going to school he always got bad grades and every one treats him like he is a criminal."but that's the point" he said and sat up in the bead with nothing but boxers on. Katana then got up and stretched a good three minutes then took another five doing exercises.the nun rushed around the room and picked up the mess he called a room, then stopped as she saw the alarm clock." another one.boy you are going to make me broke if you keep doing this." she sweep the mess in to the trash can and walked out of the room mumbling furiously. after popping his back slumped to the bath room and turned on the shower and got in. The hot water woke him up as it hit the bare skin on his back and shot shivers of energy up and through his head. He grabbed a cheap bottle of shampoo witch read 'fantastic' in poorly colored bold letters. He put a big glob on his right hand since the soap would ruin his left mechanical arm and scrubbed it in his thick hair."Why do i even use this stuff? it burns my scalp." but he didn't care. after rinseing off he tund off the water and got out. After drying off he whent to the mirror and brushed his teeth and comed his hair.Then put on his school uniform witch was composed of blue baggy pants, a white button-up shirt and a blue vest that held the schools logo. Katana put on his shoes and bolted out the bedroom door and down the hall to the lunch room. When he got there it was already full of kids in line waiting for a bowl of oatmeal.The smell of the dirty clothes filled the room and it was so bad that he had to put his shirt over his nose. Weaveing his way to the front he was able to snach two slices of stale bread and stuff them in to his mouth. The nun was waiting at the front with his bag "you better hurry up young man i don't pay for you to be late." she had a hard ugly experesion on. Katana just opend the door and grabed his bag on the way out then slamd it behind him. "you dont pay at all you wench!" he shok his head and walked down the cracked side walk. he only took a few steps before he saw a woman in a old broken down car. she looked sick and malnourished but yet held a baby. his anger was replaced by pain. on instinct he pulled his hundred dollers out of his back pocket and held it in front of him. he looked at it for a moment then sighed.this was the money he earnd all summer doing service for random people. Katana hurryed across the street and tapped on the glass.The woman in side hid the baby and retreated into the seat prepareing for her attacker.when she saw Katanas face she carfully rolled rhe rusty window down."W-waht do you want?" He put his left machanical arm through the window and grabed her free arm with his right.She tryed to pull her arm away but Katana had a firm grasp. She was about to screem but before she did katana put the money into her hand. tears started to well up in his eyes but he held them back."here take this money then go to the home across the street and give the nun the money.she'll give you a room with running water and a bed." She did not look at his face but at his arm that held the money in her hand. Katana pulled away and walked down the side walk and around the corner but stopped and looked back to see if she would actualy leave. For wat seemed the longest minute in his life she finely got out and went to the home and gave the nun the money. At first the nun looked surprized at the money but then greedy smile crosed her face and let the woman in. Katana let out his breath that he held and contenued on to school.

-- Edited by Katanapaw on Monday 5th of April 2010 04:35:26 AM

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Nice! Aaaaah! Shampoo BURNS! XD

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Awsome Man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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dohNACHOTACOMAN!

-- Edited by Scorchheart on Tuesday 6th of April 2010 10:24:11 PM

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sorry i haven't posted it kinda hard typeing wen your grounded>-> and WTFH is taconacho man?!

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His name is NACHOTACOMAN! XD Hi guys! SO any ways, hows your planning for the next chapter? Need any help?

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nope im good:)


evaongelion:brotherhood-chapter1-part two
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School was a good five miles away so he had to take every short cut he could find. Over some fences and cars, acros yards and highways. every time his foot hit the ground it sent another swell of pain up his legs in to his head.Running five miles was not his idea of exersize but it keept him fit and not flaby. Three miles down the way a gang poped out and stoped him dead in his tracks."what do you punks want i got to get to school." he was breathing hard and his mouth tasted like blood. The leader of the group was the first to talk."hay school boy youz passin on your turf and youz gona get it." he had a heroic little smerk.Katana eyed him up and down. he looked no more than 12 and his friends looked like the same."how bout i be on my way and this conflict will nver happen." Katana lifted his pack higher on his back. the little punk changed his smerk to a hored frown and pulled a gunout and pointed it "no way!" and pulled the trigger. With a flash and a bang katana took the hit, but on his left arm.The smerk came back to his face but went back down as katana got back up his left sleve torn "That was stupid move kid down im going to have fun beating you." Katana droped his pack and walked slowly at the group. The punk was horrified and shot the gun agen. Before the bullet reached its target Katana waved his hand and caught the lead slug in his hand.The kid this time unloaded the entire magazine on katana.with a cople of ficks of his arm katana coght all eight slugs and droped them on thr ground right in front of him."you better run punk before i realy do something i don't want to do." the kid did just wat he was told and ran with the reast of the gang that droped chains and pipes.Katana just sighed and ripped the sleve of showing his arm that looked like something off of a anime and grabed his pack and started running tward school.

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