OOC; Okie dokie then! Can do ;D I hope this one will last... Retelling Myths lasted for a while but i want this one to work like the original. Hopefully it will turn out to be just as fun! XD
ooc: Yes! the 2nd and 3rd tries weren't as good as the originial... but this is different. Instead of a regular cat life, they turn into humans :DD interesting twist, i'll definitely have fun!
OOC; Alright everyone, we can jsut about get ready to start. Since we have most of the spots filled it may be alright to just go now ^^ Also i changed Hawkpaw's age to 9 moons and 16 years cause we dont want a ton of 17 year olds ;D
Hawkpaw's eyes fluttered open slowly as he managed to get a look at where he was. The smells that hit his nose made him flinch and pull back. His eyes flew open as he saw the harsh world of the two leg place. A hiss escaped his mouth but it didnt sound right. Glancing down he managed to catch sight of something that should not have been there. His once noramlly white furred paws were now pink skinned two leg paws with spindly digits instead of claw. Hawkpaw reared back in suprise and tried to let out a wail but it came out as a harsh two leg yell. "Help!" He shouted as he glanced around with his golden eyes. He was in a back alley somewhere deep inside two leg territory. Around him were the crumpled bodies of with two legs. The apprentice pulled back in fear and tried to hide in the shadow of a dumpster. His eyes glinted in the dark filled with fear as the others began to move and wake.
-- Edited by Ebonycloud on Thursday 13th of May 2010 10:47:57 PM
Cat Apperance- Name: Swiftpaw Age- 9 moons Apperance: light brown she-cat with white spltches all over her fur. Her eyes are a light green with a hint of yellow when hit by sunlight. Cat Lineage: C) Whisperstone and Onyxclaw - b) Frostfur and Gorsewind
Human Apperance- Name: Taylor Loch Gender: Female Age: 16 years old Apperance: Taylor has light brown hair with short bangs in the front and long loose hair in the back. Personality: I dont know yet..... Other:
Name: Alexis Sanner Gender: F Age: (Makes this to be between 13 and 19) 16 Apperance: Alexis has brown silky hair and greyish-blue eyes. Likes to keep her up in a ponytail. She likes skinny jeans and t-shirts. Personality: She is outgoing and funny, the jokester of her family. She loves music and is a thinker of sorts. She is a dare-devil Other: (Optional)
Name: Halopaw Age- 9 moons Apperance: Soft light-brown fur with a fluffy tail. Her eyes are greyish-blue. Cat Lineage: C) Whisperstone and Onyxclaw - c) Umbercloud and Specklepelt
-- Edited by Onyxfeather on Thursday 13th of May 2010 10:50:55 PM
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He looks around the room Innocently overlooks the truth Shouldn't a light go on? Doesn't he know I've had him memorized for so long?
He sees everything black and white Never let nobody see him cry I don't let nobody see me wishing he was mine
ooc: welcome Paint! :D Nice to have you on the crew!
Tigerpaw felt as if a suction cup just grabbed hold onto him, and spun him around billions of times. At last when he landed, he felt dizzy and unsteady. He shook his head. Why did everything seem so much smaller now? His eyes darted back and forth. Everything seemed different. A bug buzzed by him, and Tigerpaw tried to use his tail to swipe it away, but instead, nothing happened. He looked back to find these rags of stuff on his...? What in the name of StarClan! He though. Where am I?
Hawkpaw shook and shivered as another two leg awoke, his face pulled back in suprise as he looked around. "Stay back two leg!" Hawkpaw hissed, but the hiss still refused to sound right. He glanced around again only to find the world he was in still wouldnt change back to the patrol he had just been on. His mentor Talltail had been teaching him about some battle move as the patroled Windclan's border when he had seen a flash of light. NOw he was here and he was constricted by a two leg's body and rags. This had to be a bad dream. It was only a nightmare.
Sparrowpaw woke up, sitting up suddenly as if waking up from a nightmare. Then she realized that sitting up felt strange, it went in the wrong direction. She looked around quickly, eyes darting all over the place, resting on the harsh edges of what could only be Twoleg territory, and other Twolegs around her. She flinched visibly, letting out a soft cry before scooting back on four legs to a large trash bin. "This has to be a nightmare," she murmured softly, fearfully. "It can't be anything else. Where's Hawkpaw?"
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"If he dies, then it will be God's will."
"If that was meant to be comforting, it was not."
"Everyone dies eventually. Once you are born, you begin to die."
"That was not comforting either!"
"It is the way of the Creed. Usually our deaths are violent but quick."