Warrior Cats: The Four Clans

Dredgeheart · RiverClan Warrior

RE: The Four Clans |[Classic RP, open to all. Started! :DD]|

Paintedleaf · WindClan Warrior

ooc: lol same here. My school vocabulary is waaayyy better especially when Im writing essays, but in Rps and talking outside its crap XD

ic: Serenesound lifted her head when she saw a new, but familiar pelt make it's way into camp. It was Silverfrost, and by the way his cheeks looked he had a prety good day herb collecting. Her first reaction was to greet him and start a conversation but the medicine cat's mouth looked full and she didn't want to bother him just yet. Instead Serenesound sat up and began licking her pelt clean.

Dredgeheart · RiverClan Warrior

OOC~ However, when I turn in writing, they say it's so good that it can't be an eith grader's work :(
Accused of plagiarism?

Silverfrost dropped his herbs in his den, taking a few moments to arrange them in his favorite order--alphabetically. Though for some reason, he had been unable to tell one herb from another.. seemingly as if a gale had swept his skills as a medicine cat away. He just shrugged the feelings off and just decided to leave the herbs be; he could come back later and arrange them. He left his den.

-- Edited by Dredgeheart on Friday 1st of April 2011 12:20:25 AM

Paintedleaf · WindClan Warrior

ooc: Hmmm sounds like a compliment but at the same time they could be suspcious of plagiarism. I had a teacher in middle school that would look up your work on the computer if it was a really good and if she found a couple things that sounded like it was copied she would have this giant conversation about it with you.

Ic: Serenesound took quick but long licks to groom her pelt. She didn't want it to be too clean because when it did get dirty again it would look even dirtier than usual. After a few more swipes she cleaned off her paw then looked up just in time to see Silverfrost. She flicked her tail at him in greeting and walked the rest of the way intil she was a couple mouse-lengths from the spikey furred cat. "Hello Silverfrost. How are you doing today?" Her sweet and soothing voice flowed with ease out of her mouth, and with a friendly smile to the medicine cat she sat down and wrapped her tail gently around her paws, waiting for him to speak.

Dredgeheart · RiverClan Warrior

Same here.. -.-
Even my English teacher asked if it was really my writing, and she replied with "it's almost professional-like," when I said it's mine.

Silverfrost looked at Serenesound, startled by her presence as he had not known she was there. "Oh, hello," he said,his voice rather brisk compared to her sweet tone. "I was just out collecting herbs--and hunting. Not very successful on the hunting," Silverfrost admitted, giving his chest a good lick or two. "What about you?" he asked, stretching and laying down in the warm sun.

Paintedleaf · WindClan Warrior

Ooc: ya it sucks, but all teachers are gonna be suspicious with stuff like that.

ic: Serenesound couldn't help but imagine Silverfrost hunting and gave a twitch in her whiskers. Although Silverfrost should know how to hunt she had never seen him actually do it so she always pictured him stumbling whenever he would get close to some prey, but it wasn't her place to judge since she never saw him. She snapped back into the conversation when she heard the tom's voice ask a question. "Oh, I was just laying around watching the camp like I normally do. Same old same old." She watched Silverfrost lie down and decided to do the same, but lay on her back instead. "I hope this gathering ends quickly. I don't want to be sitting around all night listening to the same thing over and over again."

Jaggedpine · ThunderClan Deputy

Ooc: My writing teacher apparently thinks our class should be merely working on basics with grammar and stuff, so when I use writing tricks and things to actually make the writing good, she changes it! It ticks me off!!!

Ic: Browntail padded off toward camp. He and Lilyspirit had missed the squirrel, and he was sort-of beating himself up about it again. "If I had leaped a heartbeat sooner," he growled to himself. He kept going, still mumbling about missing the stupid squirrel. He ducked into the camp and made his way to the fresh-kill pile. His hunting party hadn't stocked it, so he officially thought it was his fault. He sighed deeply and lay down in the sun, letting it warm the dark fur on his back. His tail rested on the ground, curled around next to his head, and the tip was flicking slightly. It raised his spirits a little, and he felt some good life come back into his lithe body.

Dredgeheart · RiverClan Warrior

Silverfrost shrugged. "I don't see the deal with gatherings anyway," he sighed. "It's pretty much the same exact thing each time, others accusing others of prey stealing, 'we're short on food', et cetera.." he added along with that, but he realized her whiskers twitch when he had mentioned himself hunting. He brushed his tail alone Serenesound's face. "I'm a great hunter, actually. You just don't understand the stress I've been going through the past few days."
Silverfrost rolled onto his back as well, though he was just making his pelt dirtier, and he had spent all morning cleaning.

-- Edited by Dredgeheart on Friday 1st of April 2011 12:53:59 AM

Jaggedpine · ThunderClan Deputy

Browntail stood again and stretched. He felt better, so he decided to go talk to someone, since being bored was the last thing he wanted to be doing. Maybe he'd go see if Silverfrost had returned to camp yet. He padded over to the medicine cat den and stood at the entrance. He was always hesitant to go into the den, he always felt like it was too sophisticated for him. He listened carefully until he heard voices, the voices of Serenesound and Silverfrost. Good, he's back, he thought. The tom sighed, wondering if he should A) Barge in on their conversation, pretending like he didn't know anything was going on, or B) Scram.

Paintedleaf · WindClan Warrior

Feeling Silverfrost's tail along her face Serenesound wrinkled her nose and smiled. "I didn't think you would see that little twitch in my whiskers." she gave a soft, small purr and finally sneezed a little. "You stressing over things? No way. I had no idea medicine cats could even be stressed." her bright eyes showed her enjoyment with the conversation but she ended up focusing her attention on a new scent. "Browntail." She meowed softly andd stretched then laid on her stomach again to see the other cat.