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TOPIC: Unkown Sunclan- Book 1 ~Mysterious Emeralds~ Chapter Twelve Up!
What should Lilypaw's warrior name be? [12 vote(s)]

Lilyleaf
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Lilyflower
16.7%
Lilypool
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Lilypelt
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Lilypetal
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Other
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Moonstar


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Thanks! ^__^

New chapter possibly tonight!

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Rainpelt


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ohh it sounds really cool! Cant wait to read it!

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                            Chapter One

 Lilykit leapt onto her brother, Thrushkit, clinging to his gingery fur with determination flaring in her bright green eyes. Thrown back by shock, Thrushkit lost his grasp on the soft earth and was flipped onto his back ungracefully, flailing his forepaws into the air trying to shove off his sister. Lilykit purred in amusement and slapped some dirt at him. Thurhskit's eyes narrowed playfully and Lilykit soon was being chased.

"Enough!" Hollyberry wrapped her tail protectively around Thrushkit, as to seize their silliness. Her eyes glared at her two naughty kits. "Why can't you be more like Gingerkit?"

Lilykit made a face. Gingerkit was the polite one, always calm and quiet. Lilykit didn't know how she'd ever become a fierce warrior.

Thrushkit read his sister's thoughts. "Why are you always on her side?"
"Yeah!" Lilykit added. "She's just sleeping in the nursery corner! What's so exciting about that?" And to finish her thought, she meowed: "Warriors can't be lazy like her. She'll never be one!"

Hollyberry's eyes widened. "That was a very cruel thing to say Lilykit." She snapped. Lilykit bowed her head shamefully, guilt gnawing at her heart.

"Sorry Hollyberry." She mewed apologetically.
Hollyberry nodded in thankfulness. She then turned to Thrushkit, raising a thin eyebrow.
Thrushkit sighed. "Sorry Hollyberry."
The protective young mother dipped her head approvingly and curled up beside Gingerkit.

Lilykit glanced at her brother, her eyes flooded with sorrow. However, Thruskit's eyes remained unotuched by any sort of sympothy. Instead, longing power glinted beneath his thick lashes. Lilykit didn't take that into much thought, for she was too tired from playing with him earlier. So she slowly padded over to the corner her mother and Gingerkit were resting, lay down and fell into a deep sleep.

-- Edited by Moonshine at 00:56, 2007-11-08

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Ohh, me like it!!

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Thanks! ^__^
I like writing it too, which is good. :D
I'll do chapter two tomorrow. :p

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Yay!! I love writing! I'll probably start writing one too!

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I think I'll write a porlogue, I forgot to write one! :O

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Prologue

A young apprentice trotted along the forest path cautiously. It was late; much too late for someone his age to be out, especially alone. But he had to see the waterfall in Minnow Springs. Oh, how he longed to actually sink his sharp teeth into the meaty flesh of a soft trout! Even though Minnow Springs held only minnows, which were much too small for a full meal (and much less meaty than a trout I should add) they still reminded him of the delectable taste of a fat fish. Licking his lips, he somehow stumbled into a thicket due to carelessness.

Thorns stabbed his dark gray pelt, and he moaned in pain. His daydream instantly vanished as he glanced up, seeing himself surrounded by long tangles of odd plants and thorns. Carefully, he slowly stood, gasping at the pain his hind leg screamed as he did this simple movement. It ached terribly, and forced his to collaspe once again. Tears clung to his lashes. Suddenly, a flash of movement flickered in the thicket, and the apprentice's attention was immediately captured.

He gazed over the brush which appeared vacant and unowned. But twitching his nose, he caught the scent of cat. Definetly unfriendly too. An intruder! He though angrily. Just as he was about to march right up to the scent, he saw two emerald green eyes flick open in front of him.

Bristlepaw yelped in shock. He couldn't see the odd cat, but the stench was horrendous and uninviting. He slid his paws back, trying to back away dispite the aching pain in his leg. The other cat crouched and began to speak.

"Do not be afraid." He purred. "I am none other than the one who can save you and your clan. Bring me to them, and you will recieve a high position and together we will reign your clan." He bowed his head. "Your powers appear strong, and I am tempted to help you use them to our advantage."

Bristlepaw tensed. He could never agree to anything this cat said.
"I will never let you help me!" He spat, his voice sharper than he intended.

The intruder purred almost threatingly. "Oh, but you will want to, my friend. You will wnat to..." He began stalking towards the helpless apprentice.

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Wow, awesome job. o_o

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Thanku! ^^
I really appreciate these comments guys. :O
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