Rosepelt slowly stroked Craterkits fragile fur with her long pink tongue. "Your going to be a great apprentice Craterkit, I see bright things in your future," Craterkit began to shy away, he was unsure about becoming an apprentice, what if he completely messed up? Rosepelt saw the nervous look on her kits face and began stroking him again "Craterkit, dont be nervous, you were born to be great, I know youll succeed!" Craterkit slowly sat up, regaining his confidence when Shadowstar called his name. When Craterkit stayed put Rosepelt nudged him and eventually he was standing in front of Shadowstar. "Craterkit, you are two moons old at last and you have proven your greatness, I believe you will be a great apprentice, your mentor will be Thunderstorm, and may he you lead to greatness. Thunderstorm, I know you will take the knowledge I have passed on to you and pass it on to Craterkit. Craterkit you will now be known as Craterpaw, good will and good luck." If you looked at Craterpaw just then you could see a grin growing on his small face.
Yea, I have MAJOR grammer Issues, I'm working on it though! And I'm glad you thought it was pretty good, f you want to see a picture of shadowstar and Craterpaw on my art rock soon!