Warrior Cats: The Four Clans

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The she-cat, Shatterclaw, looked stunned, as well did Craterpaw. Shatterclaw took one final blow to Thunderstorm, leaving him unconscious. She backed off into the woods. Craterpaw could barely stand. His own mentor, kill him? His mother, a rouge? It couldn't be true!

Before Craterpaw could run back to camp and tell Shadowstar what had just happened, Thunderstorm stood. He sneered at Craterpaw, "Dont you tell another cat this, I swear by Starclan you will be moondust by the time I am finished with you!"Craterpaw gave a single nod and crept nervously back to camp with his mentor.

When he returned, Craterpaw dashed off to the apprentices den. All the while, Thunderstorm was watching him closely. Once he was in the safety of the warm den, Floodpaw bounced up to greet Craterpaw.
"Craterpaw! You're back!" She exclaimed. "Gingerhair's just had her kits! Will you come to the nursery with me?"

Craterpaw finally regained control of his body and stopped shaking. With a soft mew of agreement the two apprentices bounded off toward the nursery.

"Good evening Gingerhair!" Mewed Craterpaw, dipping his head respectfully. "Are these your kits?"

Gingerhair nodded and introduced them. "This is Tearkit, for his pelt is as soft as a tear, and this is Hollowkit, for he reminds me greatly of the hollow I played in as a kit."

"These kits will be great additions to our clan!" commented Floodpaw.

Craterpaw heard a rustle in the bushes, making him jump and shiver. Expecting to see Thunderstorm jump out and pin him down, she readied herself for attack. But instead he saw Flowerpaw with her mentor, Thornfur, with fresh kill in their mouths.

"All cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the Great Stone for a clan meeting."

Craterpaw slowly walked to sit underneath the great stone. "Shadowclan, Berrykit has reached the age of five moons, and with leaf-bare approaching, I hope this young she-cat will be of great use to our clan!" Shadowclan mewed there agreement.

"Berrykit, you will now be known as Berrypaw. Your mentor shall be Grayfur, may starclan guide your way!" Craterpaw watched as Berrypaw touched noses with her new mentor and with Shadowstar. As the clan began to chant, she crept off to the apprentices den for a long, awaited sleep.

I am almost done with a new chapter, I think I sent it to moonstar, can u edit it 4 me?

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I'll just post it, sorry for the grammar mess ups people,

When Craterpaw woke he heard his mentor scream his name, startled, he nervously crept up to meet his mentor for a day of training. Today I will teach you a fighting technique, said thunderstorm when they reached the rock of apprentice training You already know how to fight, but you use old tricks that all cats are aware of, it is time I taught you a new one. With a mew of agreement Craterpaw sat and listened to his mentor.

When Craterpaw returned to camp, relieved he wasnt killed, he wandered of to meet Floodpaw. He found her tearing away at a mouse and realized how hungry he was. He grabbed a fat vole and sat next to Floodpaw so they could talk.

Hey Floodpaw! said Craterpaw, trying to sound like his usual self. Hi Craterpaw! How are you? I just heard Berrypaw caught a big squirrel today, on her first day of training! Trying to look completely stunned he gasped. Oh yes, and guess what el Floodpaw? was she even listening? He noticed her nose was tipped up and sniffing the air. He to tried to smell what she was smelling and there was a fresh sent of, of, he couldnt tell, until he heard Floodpaw exclaim Rouges!

He recognized the scent now, getting stronger, and stronger. Without thinking he dashed of towards Shadowstar who was outside her Den eating a small finch. Rouges are coming! Yowled Craterpaw to his leader. Floodpaw and I scented them growing stronger, I believe they will attack! Shadowstar sniffed the air and yelled out Prepare for battle! I want the kits and queens in the nursery now! The clan could now smell the rouge, they followed there leaders instructions and circled the camp.

Why would rouges attack us? asked Craterpaw I am not sure, but I want you to prepare for battle, the time for questions is not now. replied Shadowstar. With a nod of respect towards his leader he stationed himself by Floodpaw to fight.

When the rouges burst out of the trees, he recognized the rouge who claimed to be his mother. The rouge began to look around, Craterpaw took this opportunity to leap on her, with a snarl he took a paw to her ear and another paw to her nose. Craterpaw, oh my how youve grown! You will die rouge, You are not my mother and my loyalty is to my clan! I understand son, at that instant the rouge leapt up and ran into the bushes.