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Warriors:The four clans. (Chapter 3 up.Still working on chapter 4)


I too have started a fanfic of my own.

Note:In my fan-fic,she-cat medicine cats are aloud to have kits and a mate,but only on the condition that their mate or some other cat is a medicine cat.That way the clan cats could still be cared for while the medicine cat(she-cats only) could care for they're kits.

Allegiances

Waterclan
Leader Falconstar -blue-grey(with darker
stripes)tom,yellow eyes.
Deputy Flamerain -ginger tom striped with
black.
Medicine cat(s) Spottedclaw -grey tom with spotted
paws,ears and tail.Scar on muzzle.
Raintail -striped black and blue she-
cat,blue paws and tail,scar on left eye.
Warriors(Toms and she-cats without kits)
Darktree -long-haired black tom,former Leafclan warrior.
Apprentice,Snakepaw
Dewfoot -small pale grey tom with black
patch around left eye.

Blueheart -golden and black striped tom,blue eyes.
Apprentice,Sunpaw
Fox-ear -white she-cat with jet black
ears.
Apprentice,Webpaw
Vaporfur -blue-grey she-cat with three black spots on for-
ehead.
Apprentice,Moonpaw
Lynxflight -white she-cat spotted with grey,former Snowcl-
an warrior.
Apprentice,Ashpaw
Apprentices(Six moons or older,in training to become a warrior)
Snakepaw -sleek black tom with white stripe along back,
former Leafclan apprentice.
Moonpaw -dark blue-grey she-cat with black ears,toes and
three black spots on thigh.
Sunpaw -golden she-cat with black ears,toes and
three black spots on thigh.
Ashpaw -grey tom with pale gray paws,former kittypet.
Webpaw -pale blue she-cat with darker paws,former kittypet.
Queens(Expecting or nursing kits)
Pebblestream -tortoiseshell she-cat with grey eyes.
Belle -brown she-cat with dappled coat.
Daypelt -creme colored she-cat striped with gold.
Elders(Retired warriors and queens)
Owlwing -battle-scarred smoky grey tom with red eyes.
Pinefeather -dark green-yellow she-cat with darker
spots.
Cloudriver -very pale gray tom with torn ears and red eyes,
former deputy.oldest tom of clan.
Stonerigde -strong grey she-cat,often mistaken as a male,oldest she-cat of clan.



Leafclan
Leader Venomstar -red-brown she-cat with darker barely vi-
sible stripes.
Deputy Leafheart -dark green-yellow tom with brighter spots.
Apprentice,Bearpaw
Medecine cat(s) Sharptooth -white tom with brown stripes
and abnormaly large teeth.
Warriors(Toms and she-cats without kits)
Nightwing -black she-cat with blue eyes and tail.
Apprentice,Thornpaw
Raventail -black tom with grey eyes and tail.
Apprentice,Stonepaw
Hawkclaw -brown she-cat tinged with gold aroun-
d her muzzle.
Apprentice,Fernpaw
Brightmask -pale ginger tom with pale blue eyes.
Apprentice,Ivypaw
Rose-eyes -siamese she-cat with unsual pinkish eyes.
Morningmoon -white tom with dark blue eyes
Apprentice,Starpaw
Apprentices(Six moons or older,in training to become a warrior)
Bearpaw -brown tom with white chest.
Thornpaw -orange-red she-cat with one black ear,black
paws and black tail-tip.
Starpaw -gray she-cat speckled with white.
Stonepaw -white tom speckled with gray.
Ivypaw -blind tortoise-shell she-cat.
Queens
(Expecting or nursing kits)
Wildsand -white she-cat with ginger spots and paws.
Tigertail -ginger she-cat striped with brown and patch around right eye.
Ringpelt -grey she-cat with white rings around tail and
paws.
Grassfur -green-yellow she-cat with white paws and ch-
est.
Elders(Retired warriors and queens)
Torntree -slim brown she-cat with twisted paw.



Breezepaw
Leader Fogstar -white she-cat with blue-gray stripes.
Apprentice,Mountainpaw
Deputy Fernflight -grey she-cat with brown mar-
kings on back that form a wing-
like shape.
Medecine cat(s) Leopardspirit -golden she-cat with darker spots.
Cloudscar -battle-scared white tom with ging-
er colored eyes.
Warriors(Toms and she-cats without kits)
Songbreeze -very pretty grey she-cat with dark
-er stripes and has pale green eyes.
Apprentice,Onyxpaw
Blackheart -brown tom with black,heart-shaped
marking on chest and black claws.
Sparrowmark -cream colored tom with dark brown
stripes.(In winter,his pelt changes
to a pale grey color with black stripes)
Apprentice,Rockpaw
Poppytail -cream colored she-cat with unsually long tail
and claws.
Apprentice,Mistpaw
Bloodgaze -black tom with peircing red eyes and stripes.
Lightburst -small,very pale ginger tom with purple eyes.
Apprentice,Shadowpaw
Apprentices(Six moons or older,in training to become a warrior)
Shadowpaw -long-haired dark gray tom with black stripes.
Mistpaw -pale grey she-cat tinged with silver around her muzzle.
Rockpaw -brown tom with darker stripes and one green
eye,one blue.
Mountainpaw -grey colored tom with brown mask around eyes
and rings around paws.
Onyxpaw -smoky grey she-cat with pale grey
underbelly.
Queens(Expecting or nursing kits)
Frostsong -very pale blue tabby with black paws.
Cinderfoot -grey she-cat with gorse colored paws.
Elders(Retired warriors and queens)
Onetree -long-haired ginger tom with one blind eye.
Darkwhisker -black she-cat with very long tail.





Snowclan
Leader Ripstar -brown tom with darker stripes.

Deputy Coldstripe -ginger she-cat with black and white
stripes.
Apprentice,Tearpaw
Medecine cat(s) Cinderleaf -tortoise-shell she-cat with silver
eyes.
Warriors(Toms and she-cats without kits)
Silversnow -silver tabby she-cat with blue eyes.
Apprentice,Dawnpaw
Sandgaze -white tom striped with grey and has
pale yellow eyes.
Apprentice,Vinepaw
Brokensky -cream colored tom with dark blue eyes
and one white forepaw.
Apprentice,Riverpaw
Shadowpool -long-haired black tom with dark brown
eyes.
Apprentice,Silentpaw
Leafspot -tortoise-shell she-cat with spots shaped like
leaves.
Firewood -ginger tom with dark brown stripes.
Apprentices(Six moons or older,training to become a warrior)
Tearpaw -ginger-brown tom with white stripes.
Silentpaw -skinny grey tom with very short tail.
Riverpaw -pale grey she-cat with very long tail.
Vinepaw -pale blue-grey she-cat with green eyes.
Dawnpaw -cream colored she-cat.
Queens(Expecting or nursing kits)
Iceshadow -black tabby with white underbelly.
Racoonclaw -grey long-haired she-cat with black rings
around claws.
Berryfur -redish tabby with quite short claws.
Elders(Retired warriors and queens)
Snowfall -white tom with twisted tail.
Squirreltail -brown she-cat with very fluffy tail.
Lostface -white she-cat(with darker flecks),one side
of face completely scared.
Ravenmoon -black tom with white paws.


I forgot to put this XD:
Cats outside clans


Sparkle -pale purpleish kittypet she-cat with grey paws.

Patch -dark grey kittypet tom speckled with black.

Danger -ginger loner tom who barks instead of
meows.

Cloudy -white kittypet she-cat,former Breezeclan warrior
that goes by the name of Cloudstorm.

Others friends of cats

Booster -very fast male Boston terrier with abnormally long tail.

Twilight -female Golden Retriever with speckles on ears.

Vixey -female fox that lives in a den near Fourstones.




Warriors
The four clans
Prologue

Night had fallen and only the sound of crickets chirping was heard.
A bright yet shadowy figure swooped across the fields.Then more
suddenly appeared,of all the colors.A ginger tom striped with black
flicked it's tail as a sign of battle.The felines launched themselves
into a fierce battle with other cats.Blood spilled on the stones and
ground as one of them cried for help.

"What are you doing in Waterclan territory?"Asked Flamerain,pin-
ning another one to the ground.

"Your territory?"Hissed a greenish tom."I'm afraid you are mistaken,
the Cloudtree belongs to Leafclan."

He lashed his claws,scaring the ginger tom's face as he let out a
yelp of pain.The two toms rolled to the edge of a small cliff when
suddenly,one more Leafclan cat joined the fight.A golden tom with
striking blue eyes came to rescue the flame colored cat.Then
two more Waterclan cats came to help Flamerain.The Leafclan
deputy was greatly outnumbered and called his clan to retreat.

"This is not over yet," He yelled."Retreat!"

Is voice was full of defiance.A she-cat with jet black ears stood up
and shouted loud enough for the whole forest to hear.

"That's right,run away like the cowards you are!"






The moon was high in the sky and the leaf-fall season wind was
blowing silently.A blue-gray tom stood on the peak of a silver
rock,his eyes focused on Silverpelt.His fur brissled when he heard
the sound of russling leaves behing him.He unsheated his claws and
sniffed the air,ready to battle whatever was waiting to attack.His fur then
lay flat when a gray tom with spotted paws emerged from the shadows.

"Spottedclaw." He sighed,relieved to see no danger around.

"Falconstar," The tom replied."Blueheart had been severely injured
in battle.He cannot leave camp for a moon."

It was nothing but bad news for the Waterclan leader,yet he intended to
be strong no matter what.

"We are in need of apprentices," He pointed out."So me can make new wa-
rriors and be a stronger clan.We can't protect our kits properly without them."

For a few moments,silence reigned.The Waterclan leader let out a sigh of
pain and agony.A star then lighted up the dark sky and nearly made the tom
spring to his feet.The cat by his side then broke the silence with soft-spoken
words.

"Vaporfur gave birth to two kits."Said the gray tom,hoping to chear up his
leader's heart.Another star shone trough the dark clouds.

"A message from Starclan?"Asked Falconstar.

"Yes,it is," The medecine cat sighed."The moon and the ash from a flame,
the sun and a fang from a snake with no name.A small web might suffice,
to heal the toughest wounds that will come in the clans future fights." He said.
"Lead by the stars,guided by the moon,shall they save every cats lives from
peril."

"How could that be possible?" Questioned the puzzled tom.

"I don't know," Replied Spottedclaw "But that is what they tell me."

Falconstar was deep in thought. What do they mean by this?Could Starclan
be trying to tell us that we would all soon die?Is there no hero among us?

The tom was very confused with what the cat beside him just recited.He could
not believe that these things could make his clan stronger.A chilly breeze
whipped the felines fur like branches in a storm.The toms shaked not of
fear,but because it was quite cold.Fallen leaves danced in the sky gracefuly
,twisting and turning.

"Leaf-fall has come." Falconstar sighed.




Chapter l
Six moons later

"Wake up mother!" Shouted two kits,one a dark blue-gray and the
other golden yellow.

"Alright,i'm coming." Yawned a blue-gray she-cat with black spots on
her forehead.A golden yellow tom was stretching it's legs on the other
side of the clearing.The kits ran towards him and jumped on his back.
When they soon calmed down,he gave them both an affectionate lick
between the ears.

"So your finally ready to become apprentices,right my kits?" He said,
with a look of pride in his eyes.

"Yup,and weir going to be the greatest warriors ever!" Said Moonkit.
Moonkit and Sunkit were both ready to train as hard their new mentors
would push them.But they would have to hunt down a mouse before
the ceremony to prove that their ready.

"You will have to leave soon my dears," Said the she-cat named Vaporfur.
"You have to come back with a mouse before moonhigh or else you will
never become an apprentice."

The kits were so excited that they couldn't hold themselves in place.Then
another cat joined their conversation.It was the clan leader,Falconstar.He
was very proud that his grandkits were ready to train.

"Your mother is right," Falconstar wispered."I will announce the others of your
departure once Dewfoot and Flamerain return from the dawn patrol."

A familiar scent swept trough the fields.The kits lifted their noses up in the
air and suddenly ran towards a shadow near the entrance to camp.They
came out of the entrance tunnel followed by two other cats.

"These two are amazing!" Said Flamerain,a ginger tom with black stripes.

"Yes,I think they'll do fine during the test." Said a grey tom.

Falconstar climbed on top of a large silver stone.He was about to announce
the news when a sudden growl was heard,coming from the entrance.Flamerain
and Blueheart ran towards the sound and entered the forest.After a few heart-
beats they walked into the clearing,followed by two cats and a kit.

"They were resting near the abandoned fox den." Flamerain claimed.

Falconstar approched the cats with precaution,afraid that they would attack.
But he soon calmed down when he realised that they were all worn out and tired.

"Did they attack you?" Falconstar replied.

"No," That voice came from Blueheart this time."They begged us to take them
to you."

"What?" Said Falconstar,with a perplexe look on his face.

Moonkit and Sunkit were playing happily with some other kits,ignoring the conver-
sation.Sunkit was running happily,chasing her sister with excitement.As her sister
turned around,Sunkit jumped over her and ran into the stranger kit.His gaze met
with her's as Sunkit was backing away from him.

"Hi,i'm Snakekit," Said the tom. "What's your name?"

Moonkit was watching the whole thing as her sister was trying to speak.Moonkit
approached them and decided to answer the question for her sister.

"Her name is Sunkit," The she-kit said. "And i'm Moonkit."

"Pleasure to meet you Sunkit,and you too Moonkit." Snakekit replied. "What
lovely names you have."

"T-thank you S-Snakekit" Said Sunkit.

Both sisters were very shy,but after a moment they would soon warm up to any
stranger.Their conversation was soon interrupted by Lynxflight,a white she-cat with
gray spots.

"Stay away from them Snakekit," She hissed."They could hurt you."

She put her paw in front of them,making sure that the she-kits wouldn't hurt her
son.But Vaporfur went to defend their sides.

"I assure you,my kits won't hurt him." Vaporfur said calmly.

"Why have you come here?" That was Falconstar,questionning the black tom in
front of him.

"We need a place to stay," The tom replied."We have been exiled from our clan
for our kit is a half-blood."

Falconstar stared at the kit for a few moments,and he knew that he would regret it
if he sent the helpless kit and his parents away.They were exhausted and most
probably starved to death.

"Tell us,hold old is your kit?" Asked Falconstar.

Everyone seemed shocked at that question,especially Flamerain.After a few
moments of hesitation,the she-cat finally spoke.

"He is six moons old," She said hesitantly. "No more,no less."

The Waterclan leader looked satisfied with her answer.He was willing to make him
an apprentice of Waterclan.

"Very well then,you may stay." He said,still staring at Snakekit.

Nearly the whole clan seemed shocked about his compassion towards them.
Snakekit smiled at Sunkit,who turned her head around shyly(sp?).Moonkit pushed
the golden she-kit towards him with a mischievious smile on her face,muttering a
few words to her.

"Go ask him Sunkit," She whispered. "He just might accept."

Lynxflight watched the kits amusingly as she approached her son.She whispered
a few comforting words into Snakekit's ear,knowing that he was quite nervous around
she-cats.Sunkit and Snakekit were now face to face,only a few tail-lengths away from
each other.

"Would you like to hunt with us for the test?" The golden she-kit asked.

"Of course,I would love to." He said nervously.

Then Falconstar climbed on top of the silver rock,letting out a yowl.The three kits trotted
to the foot of the rock.

"As you all know,we have three new members in our clan.One of them is ready to become
an apprentice.So he will join me,Sunkit and Moonkit in the forest."He announced.

He jumped off the stone and landed right in front of Lynxflight and Darktree.

"That is,if you allow us to." He continued.

The two cats looked at eachother for a few heart beats,and nodded accordingly.

"Yes Falconstar," Replied Darktree."He may go with you."

"Very well then," He said,turning towards the kits."Come,all three of you.We must leave."

The kits dashed to the entrance,happily running.Falconstar soon left as well,sniffing the air for any danger.


-- Edited by Starpaw at 18:37, 2007-12-24

-- Edited by Starpaw at 18:37, 2007-12-24

-- Edited by Starpaw at 01:03, 2008-01-21

-- Edited by Starcloud at 00:25, 2008-03-06

-- Edited by Starcloud at 00:26, 2008-03-06

-- Edited by Starcloud at 20:21, 2008-03-06

-- Edited by Starcloud at 18:35, 2008-03-15

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We all have our moments:
A moment to cry, a moment to laugh.
A moment to be held, a moment to be let go.
A moment to be sad for not having what we want,
and a moment to be happy with what we got.

Yeah, we all have those moments.
And I advise you not to put them to waste.
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Moonpaw's fanfic


Awesome! I can't wait. ^^

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I looooove the names! can't wait!
Aww, you took all of the names i was gonna use. XDDDD oh wellz. XD

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WindClan Apprentice

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Thanks! It's really appreciated!

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We all have our moments:
A moment to cry, a moment to laugh.
A moment to be held, a moment to be let go.
A moment to be sad for not having what we want,
and a moment to be happy with what we got.

Yeah, we all have those moments.
And I advise you not to put them to waste.
:aww:


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very well done! =3

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I thank Scarclaw for the AWESOME pic you drew me and i am glad and happy that i am going to put in ma sig. =3(now i can have people see you AWESOME art work!!!!

Pictures removed for exceeding size limit.

and thank you Flamepelt!!


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Fantastic Story! I skimmed/read due to the size, but I like it. :)

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Chapter ll

The forest was quiet and peaceful.A soft breeze blew slowly into the fields nearby.
A little mouse was quietly nibbling a few berries when suddenly,a shadow past by.The
mouse lifted it's head up,nervously sniffing the dew filled air.A twig cracked and
the sound of it echoed trough the woods.It's ears lifted quickly as a rustling noise
was heard.Slowly,the little creature moved closer to the bushes,for if something
were to attack him,he would run for cover.Everything was silent again and the mouse
continued to chew on the red,jewel-like fruit.A strange scent swept trough the forest,wich
alarmed the mouse once again.A few moments later,the mouse ran into the wide fields
because he was being chased by a felinic figure.The cat then picked up the pace,
trying to snatch it's prey.It's whiskers twitched to the smell of mud.It slowed down being
careful not to trip and fall,but so did the mouse.They both hopped on top of the large
stones as they approached the river.As they came closer to it,the rocks became a bit
more slippery.Or more like they became more dangerous to walk on.The cat tripped
and stumbled down a small hill and fell into the river.But luckily,it swam to the ridge
and shaked all the water off her fur.The mouse fled quickly to it's den.The cat was soon joined
by several others,all with worried expressions on their faces.

"Moonkit!" Shouted a golden she-kit."You know very well that the river is very dangerous at
this time of the year!."

Moonkit was shivering slightly,but the cool wind somehow warmed her up.

"I know that!" She replied bitterly."I'm not like that mouse-brained Grasspaw!."

"Moonkit,you must be respectful towards Grasspaw.She was a fine apprentice" Said a blue-
gray tom,with a sad look on his face.

"I'm sorry grandfather.It's just that it was kind of stupid what she did;risking her life for a fox kit."
Moonkit said,having a hint of sorrow in her voice.

Falconstar glanced at his grand-daughter for a few moments and finally broke the silence
with comforting words.

"She only saved it because she wanted to give it a chance.You remember what she always said,
right?" Asked the Waterclan leader.

"Yes,all life has value." Replied Moonkit. "I'll never forget those words.She was such a wise
cat.I miss her so much."

The cats walked towards four large stones.Above them was a giant oak tree.It's leave swayed
to the silent wind.All cats that live in the forest call it the Element Tree.It contained the spirits
and was named after the first wild cats to roam these plains:Water,Leaf,Snow and
Breeze.They were the founders of all four clans and they made the warrior code success-
fully.The cats ran towards the large tree.It was even more impressive from up close.The kits
then changed direction,all on high alert for any ennemies or prey.Sunkit spotted a mouse
not far from where they were,and so crept up on it.She pounced and landed right on top of it,
gave a quick nip on the neck and padded happily towards her grandfather.

"Wow Sunkit!That was some leap!" Meowed Snakekit,padding up to the bright colored she-cat.

Sunkit walked proudly towards the others,with the mouse dangling in her mouth,her expression
full of pride.It was her first prey,and she caught it in one shot.Her sister,Moonkit,was also
quite impressed about how she was able to keep her balance.Falconstar then spoke up,annou-
cing something quite a bit unsual.

"Alright children,we must go to the trees near the twoleg place.I want you to meet someone.Es-
pecially you Moonkit."

"But why especially me?" Then asked Moonkit. "I told you grand-father:I will not go with you
anywhere not unless you tell me where we're going."

"Can't you listen to Falconstar for once?" Sighed Sunkit,her head hung low from all the exhaustion.

"Fine," She hissed. "But this is the last time i'm going on some adventure with you grand-father."

Falconstar chuckled.Moonkit was always so stubborn,but still very kind.She never really liked
going too far from camp,mostly because she's never been farther then the lake.It was her first
time.But she was also worried for Snakekit.He was just a new member of the clan and he didn't
know anything about they're territorie.She knew that he would be very uncomfortable being
in this land unknown to him,but he seemed as if he had been here for moons.And so they
went.It was not long till they reached the lake,then the pine trees near the twoleg-place.
They stopped at a small clearing surrounded by little bushes full of flowers that were very
unfamilar to the kits.Moonkit got used to the strange place after a few moments,but Snakekit
and Sunkit were still crouching down to the ground.She ran through the trees and bushes,lifting
her head up high,as if she was flying.But a gray figure flashed in front of her.She tripped on a
stone but soon got up and started following it's trail,thinking it was a mouse.The figure picked
up the pace,suddenly realising that it was being followed.Panting hard,the blue-gray she-cat
dashed once more before going into a huge leap,landing straight ontop of that thing.It let out
a yelp of pain,struggling to get free.

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We all have our moments:
A moment to cry, a moment to laugh.
A moment to be held, a moment to be let go.
A moment to be sad for not having what we want,
and a moment to be happy with what we got.

Yeah, we all have those moments.
And I advise you not to put them to waste.
:aww:


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RE: Warriors:The four clans. (Chapter 2 up)


very entrancing great job.
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-- Edited by Lilacpool at 17:04, 2008-03-07

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Wow, I read the whole thing. You write amazingly! Awesome job. Please keep it up!

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@ Moonstar:Thanks! I guess it's because I'm good at grammar. X3
@ Lilacpool:Awww,thanks!

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We all have our moments:
A moment to cry, a moment to laugh.
A moment to be held, a moment to be let go.
A moment to be sad for not having what we want,
and a moment to be happy with what we got.

Yeah, we all have those moments.
And I advise you not to put them to waste.
:aww:
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