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Roughwhisker


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                           Gingerwater Clan
This clan was mentoned in Stormclan roleplay (Lightwing made up) and now this is i guess what you could call an inside look of that clan so enjoy plz!!
                           Gingerwater clan:
Leader: Poisenstar: black/brownish tom
Deputy: Hopperfang:  long-haired white tom
Medicene cat: Crystalwind: Crystal blue/white she cat
                                                 Apprentice: Rubypaw: Redish she-cat
Warriors:
Pinepelt: Brown tom with green blotches
         Apprentice: Roughpaw: light brown tabby she cat with dark blue eyes
Windshin:black tom, formerly a loner-died
Gorgetail:brown she-cat with white patches
                           Apprentcie: Talonpaw: colors of a bald eagel tom
Queens: Camopelt: brown,tan,sanish color she-cat mother ofWindshine's kits
(cloverkit: green she-cat, Blazekit: black tom)
                           The new discovery 

Chapter 1
My dear it is nice to see you again!! meowed Roughpaw's mom, a queen of Ginger water clan."It's nice to see you to mom,i mean windtalon" Hmp it's okay you can call me mom hear my darling. replied Windtalon
Is that my little girl i hear!?meowed Roughpaw's father
"Dad!! Gingerpelt it's so glad to see you to!!"
So how have you been Roughpaw!?
"Good dad!!"
So how is yo-..........your mother says you need to get going now... i will see you later okay.
"Okay dad, mom it was nice seeing you guys bye!" she meowed
Roughpaw stepped out of the Cave covered by a waterfall.
"Hmm..... i wonder if  me and my mentor can practice fighting skills today" she thought. She padded into camp to go and find Pinepelt, her mentor and older brother.  "Pinepelt can we do fight training today please!!!??" she asked her mentor "Hmm.. okay Roughpaw c'mon lets go to bluewater" He guided his apprenitce to bluewater. "Man i love this place we have a very good veiw of the river colide hear!!" she mumbled "Okay now try to jump on me claw me soflty okay" "okay Pinepelt" Roughpaw got in crouch passion and leaped but right when she was going to jump on Pinepelt he doged her. "Oww.. i thought yo-" "An enemy dosent let his rival just jump on them try again!"
So she got in crouch passion and moved twords him but he doged and when he did she jumped back and leaped on him bringing him down. "hey, w get off... You did very good" So the two cats kept on practicing until the sun was setting."That was a great practice thank you Pinepelt!!" Roughpaw said while going to the appentice's den.Roughpaw dreams fadded and it became a vison of some sort she heard these two cats say, she new they were both toms but couldnt tell who the cats were, How could!? You killed Windshine how Could you!?!?!? , IT was for his own good!!
Then all of a sudden they started to fight, blood was spilled and a lot of it to.
"Ya!!!!" she yowled "Be quite fox-dung!" meowed Rubypaw
"Sorry" Roughpaw mumbled She look up where the crack in the cave was and thought  Why me starclan........ why did you send me this!?


-- Edited by Roughpaw at 00:34, 2008-01-27

-- Edited by Roughpaw at 11:53, 2008-01-30

-- Edited by Roughwhisker at 22:57, 2008-02-22

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So, there is a ginger water clan right? wouldn't the words be together like Gingerwaterclan? just asking! Good job though! U might want to make it a tad longer,

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yea i spelled it worng XD and well i know it should but it was the first part but more of it will be longer

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Okie dokie! can't wait!

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^^ ya!

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Chapter 2
Roughpaw woke up and padded out of the den. "Wow i guess what happend was real. that dream did happen it really got sent to me!!"
Oh Starclan i am not a medicne cat why did you send me this if you know i am not!!?? Am i sopposed to tell someone this!?
"Are you okay Roughpaw" asked Pinepelt "Oh...uh Pinepelt i am fine"replied Roughpaw
"I was wondering if you wanted to go on dawn patrol with me" he asked
"Sure i would love to go on Dawn patrol!!"she meowed in exitment
Pinepelt leaded Roughpaw to the borders to start the dawn patrol."Hey while we are doing dawn patrol... you can tell me why you were acting so scared when i talked to you this morning."
"Oh.. uh that i had a bad dream thats all"
He looked at her like she wasnt telling the truth "Okay Roughpaw if thats what you say so." he replied and went a little ahead of him
Roughpaw it's okay if you wanted to tell him your dream, he wasnt one of those cats!
Roughpaw heard some cat talk to her in her mind Wha- who told me that!?
she thought, hopeing to get a replie but she dint get one Was that a messege from starclan!? I wonder...
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Time went by and the two cats went back to camp and to their suprise
most of their clan had been in a circle sournding something. Roughpaw ran to see what they were looking at she was hoping that it wasnt the cat that died in her dream.But when she looked it was. Windshine was dead.

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Wow. Good story. ^-^

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thank yuo!!! finally someone commented on obne of my topics thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 hey we also have another competion Wetleaf wants to also become Deputy too

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and thank you Flamepelt!!
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Heheeheheeee.... Fine then. Three way competition!

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YUPS!!! if i fail to do so i want to try and become a medicne cat tose are ma two things i want to be!

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I thank Scarclaw for the AWESOME pic you drew me and i am glad and happy that i am going to put in ma sig. =3(now i can have people see you AWESOME art work!!!!

Pictures removed for exceeding size limit.

and thank you Flamepelt!!
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