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Through Pain and Popularity
By Moonstar

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This is a story based on the Roleplay, Surviving Junior High. The only user characters I will be using are Nathan (Ebonycloud's character) and Ariel (my character). So to bring you up to date, Ariel's basically the most popular, most beautiful girl in school. She's in eighth grade, Nathan's in ninth, but I'll get the profiles up soon enough so that you can know more about all the characters.
I am aiming for my audience to feel really connected with these characters. Please comment thoroughly on everybody, diss the evil characters you hate (feel free to hate), support the couples you love (feel free to love), and pelase tell me which parts you like and what you think will happen and stuff! Please do not just say, "That was good. I liked it." Tell me about what you liked so I can improve! Rant over.


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-- Edited by Moonstar at 10:05, 2008-08-01

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Nathan

If you looked her from bear paw boots to brunette curls, youd see a very beautiful, popular teenager with loads of friends, tons of admirers, and buckets of gossip. From her skinny jeans to her black, stylish vest covering a white short-sleeved tee to her thick eyelashes painted with mascara, she was a popular. Of course, she must be friendly, sweet, and giving.

Wrong.

                I gulped as I stared at Ariel, swishing my raven hair out of my eyes. I have a shaggy, messy cut that some girls find quite eye-catching. Personally, I dont care what others think of me. I only like my hair to hang in my eyes because Im very timid and feel more invisible that way.

My dark blue eyes couldnt pull away from the gorgeous teen. Sure, every boy in school would agree she was hot and extremely attractive; I couldnt deny my own feelings about her. But underneath that outer layer of stunning features was a sticky, slimy, back-stabbing undercoat that had a strong attitude, and I was one of the only ones who truly saw the monster for what it was.

Ariels bubbly, bubblegum-haired friend bobbed around her, Dimetras gleaming emerald eyes sparkling with enthusiasm. When Travis passed them and waved, not a single popular lifted a finger in greeting. In fact, it was as if everybody who walked by them was a tree outside a car window, the popular crowd being the car of course. Its like, you see the trees, but you dont. You know theyre there, but theyre just trees, whats to give thought to?

Pretty much during my whole ninth grade experience, Ive been less than a tree. Ive been a shrub, which is about the least significant level on the popularity bar. There are trees with blossoms, like Janessa Lowes, who was friends with the populars, there were regular trees like Amber Hugh, who meant absolutely nothing to the populars, then there were shrubs, like Nathan Denning me-, who didnt even exist in their world.  But dont show me pity. Im used to it.

I combed my raven hair out of my eyes with my pale fingers. Ariel passed me, oblivious to the amber eyed boy standing there, watching her every footstep, her every blink, her every breath. Now, dont call this obsessive, just call this life. Please dont tell me youve never thought about the most popular person in your school. Please. I will cry. Carrying on, I longed to control her movement, to sweep her hair out of its style so that it flowed behind her like a waterfall, so that I could be the trout hopping out of the stream, curling my arms around her waist

I daydream like this on a regular basis, yet I refuse counseling. But its hard to help yourself with Ariel. Imagine ice cream. Yummy, right? Now imagine ice cream with fluffy marshmallows, squirts of whipped cream, and an oversized handful of gummy bears.  Scrumptious. That would be Ariel. If only well, never mind. You dont really need to hear my story.

Okay. Fine. But you asked for it. Ill tell you when something noteworthy occurs.

Author's Note: You might as well know that it switches Point's Of View every chapter. The titles of the chapter is the new POV.



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Ariel

                In my world, there's only one star- the Sun. Orbiting the sun, there are different planets. They all stand for different hassles and beauties, school, boys, friends, all that glam. Yeah, obviously the Sun (star) is me. Not that you know that I wasnt fully asleep during Science when we learned about the planets, let me start you off by saying that I dont need to tell you anything about me. Im popular. You should already know everything about me (even the patterns on my underwear, lets hope, or preferably didnt hope, you overheard me spilling it to Keith! I cant keep secrets from him.). If you dont, sorry, but you dont deserve to be reading this.

Anyways, onto my school life.  After storming into the locker room, I recklessly opened my gym locker, retrieving my sweat shorts and the gray Dolphins t-shirt (the Deerfield Dolphins, they call us. Please dont comment.). I slipped off my bear paw boots and heaved on some worn out sneakers with black and pink double laces. I fluffed up my hair in the mirror and set out for the gym floor.

Believe me, I thought this was going to be a normal day too.

So I take my regular spot on the gym floor, ready for stretching in fourth period, my gym period, sitting behind the raven-haired boy I never take notice in. Dimetra and I are basically gabbing our brains out, as usual, and I dont take that as a bad trait. We socialize. Well, apparently the raven-haired boy does not like socializing. He whipped around and faced us, staring me straight in the eyes with these beautiful, deep brown eyes.

"Be quiet, okay? Im tired of getting earfuls of your constant gossip. Look, nobody cares. So shut up about the school hotties and go wash a car."

That terrified me. Wash a car? This guy had good insults. (That left me with nightmares for a week after. Seriously, all I could imagine was dipping my hands into soapy water and scrubbing a filthy, cheap convertible.)

Well then. He could be that way. Still, I mostly thought, how dare he? Being Ariella Marie Rensella, I never get any kind of backtalk, insults or anything I mean, Im Ariel. Im popular. Youre not. Get used to it. That was always the way my life worked until Raven showed up.  And somehow, when I gazed into his chocolate brown eyes, I couldnt think. I couldnt even talk.

"What's the matter, babe? Cat got your tongue?"

Bubbling with anger, overfilling with rage, I opened my mouth, preparing a harsh reply. But I couldn't. All that came out was a meek, stuttering, "N-no.".

"Nice. I guess it left a claw." He turned around, leaving me gawking. This was insane. The burning hatred in his eyes overwhelmed me. For the rest of fourth period, all  could think of was Raven. His angelic smile, his deep brown eyes (even if they did burn their hatred for me), his raven black hair strewn over his eyes. I didn't like him, but I liked him... and if that doesnt make sense to you, go wash your own car.



-- Edited by Moonstar at 07:37, 2008-07-31

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Nathan

I stared at the gorgeous teen that I used to be afraid of. Psh, some popular. Couldn't even get the words out of her mouth. I shook my head, snickering, as I followed the teachers stretches casually, glancing every now and then back at the priceless reaction plastered on Ariel's face. That's what cameras are for, man. As we evolved into the butterfly, Ariel was still motionless. So motionless and spaced out, in fact, Dimetra scooted over to some other insane girl with a huge ego. I smiled to myself, glad I had put her in that state.

For the rest of the period, she didn't say a word. Not one. Nor did her eyes sparkle for even just a second like they usually do. I would know, I stare into hers for long periods of time. They're beautiful.

I know what you're thinking. You're thinking, "If you like her so much, why are you teasing her, dumb butt?" Though the insult could be quite better, I will answer calmly: I'm a dude. Seriously, thats the explanation for all. Sometimes when dudes like chicks, they act strange or tease them. Dont ask me, ask my mom (she made me, after all). Or God. God knows all.

I stared mindlessly at her through the rest of gym. Ms. Lolasser dismissed us a bit early, so I let myself get stuck in the flock of girls and flood of young men bolting to their locker rooms. I quickly changed back into my baggy pants and tight t-shirt, running a damp hand through my hair, messing it up. Who cares? Hair is hair. As far as I'm concerned, hair only looks bad when egged.

I was secretly walking behind her in the halls, watching her curvy figure as it strut through the hallway. Still, I could tell by the way she moved her hips that something was troubling her (so I stare at her hips. So what? Dont you guys stare at your crushs butt?). I admired her confident walk and the way her arms swayed back and forth, clutching several books in each. Her hair flipped around in back of her, styled in some sort of insane do that I cant really describe. If only she knew that just leaving her hair down was enough to drive my hormones insane, because it just made it easier for it to fly in the wind.

I followed her all the way to the lunch tables, where she sat down at her popular ones, totally out of it. Her gorgeous amber eyes were spacey, and I could tell (being an expert on her of course) that she had no clue what her friends were gossiping about. Well then, good for her. Now if only the little princess would stay that way. No, seriously.

But what happened next is a blur. It shocked me right down to the very bone, the very hormone. Ariel stood up. No, thats not the shocking part. She began to walk towards me, towards Nathan Denning, ninth grader, black-haired scrawny teen with pale skin and deep brown eyes. And she spoke to me.

"Why do you hate me so much?" Were the velvety words that escaped from her lips.



-- Edited by Moonstar at 09:04, 2008-07-31

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Ariel

When I approached the unpopular, I wasnt acting insane just for the heck of it. I was truly concerned about whatever I did to make him despise me. I have no idea why it even bothered me... it just did. And since it was the only thing that was hogging my mind in gym class, I felt I had to talk to him about it.

So after I helped myself to todays special (and believe me, there's nothing special about it) and a can of Cola, I gave myself permission to strut right up to Raven himself and ask, "Why do you hate me so much?" It was a decent question, I mean; seriously, I had a right to wonder. I stared at him. Girl, this guy had eyes of chocolate. I kinda wanted to eat them... but that's just plain disgusting so of course I shook that out of my head.

I flipped my brunette hair over my shoulder and searched his gaze for an answer.

"Babe lost the cat, finally?" he said, smirking.

Not that I didnt mind being called babe (especially by him, thank you very much), but the fact that his beautiful, edible eyes were burning with hatred and amusement was heartbreaking. All I wanted was to know why. Because I actually cared. Somehow he was special to me... much more special than today's lunch special, let me give you that.

I bit my lip. My heart fluttered with nervousness, wary of his next insult. I sighed. "Please, just tell me how it started!"

He looked up; I could tell by the way his dark chocolate eyes swirled that he was a little shocked. He straightened his posture.
                "Well, let's see," he began calmly, but his voice had an edge. "There was that time when I asked you to be my gym partner, and you laughed right in my face and dashed away with your annoying bubblegum friend in a giggling fit. I've grown quite wary of you ever since, and you're not exactly my favorite person if you get what I'm saying."

Oh yes, I got what he was saying. I didn't even remember the time I had ever done that. Was I seriously that evil, awful and cruel? Apparently so. My amber eyes widened, my eyebrows arching over to give a worried look. I was now desperate. I didn't want to be enemies with him.

"Seriously, can we just start over?" I cried in the teasing silence.

His eyes met mine, chocolate meshing with amber. Again, he seemed surprised. Then, much to my relief, he stood up, adjusted his shirt, and walked over to me.

"I suppose it was a while ago..." he said, scuffing his sneakers against the ground. "So I guess." He smiled the cutest smile ever (and trust me, I've seen that before) and thrust out his pale hand. My mouth was slightly open, eyes dazed, as I locked hands, slowly shaking up and down, utterly silent.

Silent, but meant to be.



-- Edited by Moonstar at 10:04, 2008-08-01

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