Warrior Cats: The Four Clans

Ebonycloud · WindClan Deputy

RE: Through Pain and Popularity Review Topic

Moonstar · RiverClan Leader

Pshhh I bet you're GREAT at humans. =D You coudl trace or at least practice, or do some fan art using cats. Or not do any fan art, I really don't care, though fan art is cool. Still, don't go through too much trouble. xDD
And thanks again. :D

Ebonycloud · WindClan Deputy

I love it so much Moony!!! XD This story is so great!!! I just love the fact we get to see what they were thinking!! I am also once again glad you changed the words =D It would be rather boring to have to read the RP all over again... Reading this Story is just to much fun!!!

Moonstar · RiverClan Leader

Thank yuo so much Ebony! For reading and thoroughly commenting. :)

Twinklepaw · WindClan Apprentice

It's amazing! I love being able to walk in character's shoes(one characters are probably old and beat up, the others, i presume, are designers), and you went past that. Its not just the point of view switches, its the words and the description, because its not huge words, but things that we wouldnt be surprised to find ourselves thinking. it's amazing, and it's definitely inspired me a lot. I can't wait for more!

Moonstar · RiverClan Leader

Wow, Tabby, seriously, I'm so happy I got that reaction from you. Thanks so much. :)

Twinklepaw · WindClan Apprentice

Your welcome. :)
I'd type more, but I cant really describe the great efect the story has. I think one of the reasons its so good is because its basically like teling an everyday story, but its so unique at the same time.

Moonstar · RiverClan Leader

Whoa, thanks so much. :D

Florestadream · RiverClan Warrior

Review Time!

Amazing. Utterly amazing! You went so indeplth through emotions and such, and bended them so it entwined with the RP, but was different. That is truly amazing. It's also very well written. I definietly cannot wait until the next Chapter! You keep the suspense high... I'm usually at the edge of my seat when I'm reaking Through Pain and Popularity! Keep up the great work!

Peace and Love Forever

Kestreleye

Moonstar · RiverClan Leader

Oh my Jonas, you have no idea how much that means to me. Seriously. Especially the way you said it. Thank you. A million times, thanks.
I won't be able t update until next week though. D: Taking a trip and won't be bringing my Pain and Popularity word doc, sawry. :( But then I update prolly! ^^

Thanks so much again. -hugs-