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TOPIC: Cuts [Silverpaw's Journey] CHAPTER SIX UP!!


RiverClan Warrior

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Okay... *has to fix the quotes and everything*

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07.08.13

okay, then.
unfortunately loving an idiot
who doesn't love me back.
but i'm not falling.
i just kind of...
am.



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It's only short because of the battle that's coming up. :) LEAD THEM, TWIGSTAR! xd

Chapter Five

Ebonypaw, being the oldest of the apprentices, led the group as Goldpaw and Eaglepaw had his left and right flanks. Silverpaw followed in the shadows, her eyes wary of her surrounds. When they came to The giant crystal, they stopped. "Silverpaw," murmured Ebonypaw.

In a flash of white, Silverpaw was next to the group, her eyes fierce and wild. She then commanded to the leader of BraveClan, "What have you done to our Clan?!" All cats fell silent as some looked at Deathstar and others looked at the four apprentices.

"What are you speaking of? And where is the rest of your Clan?" demanded Hornetstar. Eaglepaw set his blind eyes on where he heard Hornetstar's voice and said, "BraveClan has them captured. We journeyed here on our own. Our leader, our mentors... Kits and queens... All gone."

All eyes were laid upon Deathstar. But he had disappeared, as had the rest of BraveClan. "Move!" commanded Silverpaw, running in the direction of the camp of BraveClan. They paws were loud as they head otehr cats following. "Are they trying to stop us?" asked Goldpaw. But Eaglepaw's answer was intruded as Echostar said, "Go to BraveClan camp and see what has happened!"

"This was easier than I thought!" said Ebonypaw, happy that it had gone smoothly. "Not true," said Silverpaw. "BraveClan headed back. They could be slaughtering our Clan. We must hurry!" exclaimed Goldpaw in fear. Silverpaw then looked around and saw nothing but black. Her blue eyes were worried as she looked at Eaglepaw and said, "Eagle, I can't see anything in the trees."

Ebonypaw looked to Goldpaw and asked, "You?" Goldpaw shook her head no and then yowled. They were near BraveClan camp now. Excited, Silverpaw quickened her pace, her blood already pulsing with adrenaline. She smiled, but it seemed more like the showing of her long ivory fangs, sharpened from eating the bones of her prey.

Eaglepaw and the others grinned, too. They all were smiling like her. A smile between happiness and anger. Revenge; hostility between Clans. This was never meant to be. But this was what it was going to be like. And a Battle will be raged. And no one can stop it.

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Up Next will be the Fun part. And this part may be rated PG... HAHAHA. XD



-- Edited by Kestreleye at 05:31, 2008-08-13

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07.08.13

okay, then.
unfortunately loving an idiot
who doesn't love me back.
but i'm not falling.
i just kind of...
am.



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Oh yes, I have always loved the battle scenes.
Hehe, I'MA KICK BRAVECLAN-TUSHY! -does kung-fu kick in air-
>:D
...
Wait a minute...
I was in Braveclan on Goldy's forum...
Oh wow, I just managed to confuse myself...

'They all were smiling like her. A smile between happiness and anger. Revenge; hostility between Clans. This was never meant to be. But this was what it was going to be like. And a Battle will be raged. And no one can stop it.'

Favorite part of this chapter. It has some sort of hidden meaning to it (to me at least xD).

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Lawls. Thank you. I worked hard on taht part. XD Actually, it did take me a few days to think of how to end the chapter. *working on battle now.*

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okay, then.
unfortunately loving an idiot
who doesn't love me back.
but i'm not falling.
i just kind of...
am.



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Booya!
Fight time's coming!! >=3
Twiggers lead like you've never led before!
Twigstar- But I've never led anything before!
Oh well!! XD


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Chapter Six

Battle Scene Part 1

Silverpaw cried out, "Get ready!" to her friends as they lined up among the warriors of IceClan and FireClan. The leaders. Hornetstar and Echostar were in the second row, the apprentices in the third. All the cat's veins were pumping with adrenaline as tehy crouched. The BraveClan warriors and leader were before them, the members of BlizzardClan behind them all.

"You are no match for us," spoke Glassclaw above the murmurs of his Clan-mates and new friends. "Careful, Glassclaw," muttered Darkflight as slowly, the
group advanced. The terrified shriek of a young cat filled their ears. "LET THE KIT GO!" screeched Kestreleye, his amber eyes flaring with anger. No one would dare cross him. But BraveClan.

Coldness was pouring into the cat's veins as the shriek was cut off with a loud gurgle. Goldpaw's eyes went wide as she shrieked, "No! How dare you
slaughter out kits! They are our future!" "Goldpaw!" said Eaglepaw sternly. His ears were turned in the gold-pelted cat's direction. Silverpaw's blood turned
to ice at the sound of that one word. Slaughter. Her heart stopped beating for a second, and everyone noticed.

"Silver?" murmured Falcondance, his eyes pleading. "Snap out of it, Silver." Silverpaw's eyes stared at the warrior's green eyes as she said, "'Revenge,'" in
an oddly dark voice. It was the voice of... another. "'The reincarnation of the other has come to kill his former enemies into extinction. The only to save the
Clan is to fight. Send to four apprentices.'" Silverpaw's eyes suddenly were calmer and more relaxed as she closed her eyes lids and said, "StarClan is right. We must go."

Ebonypaw's ice blue eyes stared at Silverpaw as she spoke in realization. "You're right. Since we're part of that clan, they'll think we're giving up!" Goldpaw was still numb with shock as she slowly let the words sink in. Eaglepaw's posistion was determined as he said, "Yes. We fight." Silverpaw smiled as Goldpaw hissed, "Are you kidding me? We have no chance!"

"Don't be pessimistic, Gold. We have such a chance... we can do this!" Silverpaw exclaimed in an anticipated voice. "This is so... climactic!" said Firepool sarcastically. Falcondance looked at Firepool with a hard stare and said, "You're the one to talk. All you've done is stood there. Oh, so great, oh mighty warrior." Silverpaw giggled at Falcondance's statement. Eaglepaw then looked at the direction of Silverpaw and said, "Let's go."

Silverpaw stoutly nodded and said, "Definietly." "Hornetstar," murmured Falcondance. "Let us through."Hornetstar had heard the plan, and nodded. "Move out of the way, cats," said Echostar, his voice loud in the silence. A path was made for Falcondance and the apprentices. "We have come to give you the last apprentices."

Deathstar's smile was completely full of revenge and bloodthirst, his smile had no room for the happiness that the apprentices brought him. "The prophecy's
ones... Little ones, why don't you tell me your names?" Silverpaw spat in the leader's direction and Ebonypaw hissed. Eaglepaw's ears flatted as he flexed
his claw's; Goldpaw stood tall and noble, like she was the one who was in charge of them all. Deathstar hissed and said, "Make any sudden moves, and your whole clan will be dead."

"Don't you dare!" hissed Ebonypaw, pouncing on Deathstar before he could call out a command. Silverpaw quickly counted the cats of BraveClan and said, "Several cats are missing! What are you doing, Deathstar?!" Deathstar smirked and threw Ebonypaw off of him. "Burning your camp." He laughed as Goldpaw crumpled to the ground. Ebonypaw was horrified and Eaglepaw looked.... furious.

Silverpaw stood there, her face a mask of terror and of pain. Her camp... burned... Her camp mates... dying... "No!" she screamed. "This can't happen! I won't let it!" "Ah, young one, isn't it part of the prophecy?" The apprentices then all stood frozen. "You... know?" whimpered Goldpaw, looking at the leader of BraveClan. "Yes. Roughwhisker, send the one named Lilacpool up." The sound of paws scurrying stopped as Lilacpool stood next to Deathstar, her fur caked in mud and blood.

"Lilacpool! Is Moonbreeze alive?!" asked Eaglepaw. "Y-yes...," whispered Lilacpool. Silverpaw sighed in relief and said, "Thank StarClan..." Then something unexpected happened. An unknown cat crushed Deathstar under it's large body. "Go!" said a stern voice. The apprentices nodded and clawed their way through. It all happened at once, yowls of fury and hurt echoing in the air.

"Twigstar!" called out Goldpaw, despreatly searching for their leader. "Yes?!" came a mocking voice. Twigstar still had enough energy to make fun of this all. It would be okay. Silverpaw followed the golden pelt of her clan-mate in the waves of fur and blood. Death was in the air as a cold, cruel laughter echoed in the air. "Foolish cats! Do you think you can defeat me?!" Deathstar was up again, the large Deputy of BraveClan, Lavastep, battling the large mysterious tom that appeared out of nowhere. "This shall be your last battle!"

-- Edited by Kestreleye at 06:08, 2008-08-14

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07.08.13

okay, then.
unfortunately loving an idiot
who doesn't love me back.
but i'm not falling.
i just kind of...
am.



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Very awsoem!! I love it Kesty!!! XD I shall have a new chapter of mt story up as well =D It shall have your chacter in it =3 Anyway i love this!!! Keep it up!

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Thank you! This story have the most chapters I have ever written. Usually I stop at four. XD

And Wolf, Greenleaf shall make her appearance, soon! I promise!

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okay, then.
unfortunately loving an idiot
who doesn't love me back.
but i'm not falling.
i just kind of...
am.



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Whoa..
This is so awesome!
I can't stop reading!
I must keep reading!
*Dies*

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Live Twigstorm! Live! *shocks with an electric eel* Are you alive?!

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okay, then.
unfortunately loving an idiot
who doesn't love me back.
but i'm not falling.
i just kind of...
am.

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