O.k. I was bored so i wrote this in my jernal one day. I changed it up a bit, but I hope yall like it!
* "Cutie Pie! Cutie pie! Lunch!!!" Cutie Pie's owner called. "uhh," thought Cutie Pie. "I don't want to eat dry kitty food! I wanna taste a mouse!" Instead of heading toward her food bowl, Cutie went the oppisite direction, through the cat flap and out to the garage. She new there was mice there; she once saw one! Cutie Pie waited paitently and soon enough, she could hear the soft scurry of the mouse's feet. Carefully, Cutie put her feet one after another in front of her. Before themouse could smell her, Cutie Pie pounced and bit hard in the mouce's neck. Carring the limp mouse outside, she layed in the grass and gulped down the fresh-prey. After eating and cleaning her paws, Cutie finnaly mewed, "That mouse was good, but I prefer the kitty food!!" *
Thats it! I know I made some minor mistakes. Good and bad comments alllowed to help me improve my writing!
