The first chapter was a bit short, because in the RP there was a small amount of time between what you see at the bottom of this chapter and what'll be at the beginning of the next chapter. But, either way, chapters from now on should be longer than this. If not, they'll be about this long.
Thank you, Bubbly. That's kinda what I'm trying to do- allow people to read the StreamClan RP in a story form. Because you don't wanna have to fish through a 600+ page RP like I am just to figure out the story, moral, plot, etc.
Also, small update- this story will be updated every Saturday, with the exception of this upcoming Saturday. Let's just say you guys got chapter 1 early. ;)
-- Edited by Shadowstorm at 11:23, 2008-09-18
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Something came up. My computer's being a huge dork and I won't be able to get back on until Monday, which is when we'll be getting it fixed. So, I'll post the second chapter RIGHT when I get back on! PROMISE!!! ^-^
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We all have our moments: A moment to cry, a moment to laugh. A moment to be held, a moment to be let go. A moment to be sad for not having what we want, and a moment to be happy with what we got.
Yeah, we all have those moments. And I advise you not to put them to waste.
Monday came and went. Computer's still being a dork. So, let's all say the computer's down until further notice, and if we miss this upcoing Saturday, you'll get all of the chapters I owe when I get back on. Thanks.
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