Warrior Cats: The Four Clans

Make  Up or Fake Up?
- Season 1 [Cinderpelt]
First Date: Littlecloud

Today is Littlecloud's date. Please post comments on what you thought of it, how Littlecloud and Cinderpelt acted, if you liked it, what parts were your favorite, etc.

Cinderpelt mewed in curiosity as she stared at the ShadowClan medicine cat she had nursed back to health. His big eyes were empowering, and she found herslef lost in their boldness. Littlecloud produced a gruff purr of amusement as he leaned in to twine his tail securely with hers. He began leading her into the forest.
"Where are you taking me?" Cinderpelt questioned, smiling.
"To only the most beautiful place in the world to match the most beautiful cat," Littlecloud answered.
Cinderpelt looked down, blushing. Suddenly, they walked out of the fog. Cinderpelt gasped.

There was a perfectly ice blue crystal lake, sparkling like a million diamonds were concealed under its surface, gently reflecting the sun's twisting rays. The delicate roses winding along the lake's border were bursting, blooming, and full, the petals soft and feeble. Cinderpelt wished she could touch one. The whispering breeze tickled her whiskers, and she purred in approval.

Littlelcoud grinned. "Do you like it?"
Cinderpelt sighed. "I love it."
The tom's eyes softened, and he lead her to the lake and let her drink. The water felt cool and quick sliding down her dry throat. She smiled.

The date went on, the cats talking and laughing like they had been going out forever. When it was time to leave, Cinderpelt was sad.
"Goodbye, Littlecloud." Cinderpelt shoved her nose into his fur and breathed in his strong, lucious scent. Littlecoud purred. "Stay beautiful, my love." he responded gently.

And that's the end of the date! Please comment! NO VOTING YET.