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Moonstar


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Welcome to Mooneh's Poetry thread!
This is my poetry thread. My poems are usually about crushes, jealousy, and all that jazz because I need to vent about all that stuff.

Rules:
1. No spamming.
2. No flaming.
3. No advertising.
4. Please critique to the best of your ability without going overboard.
5. Please COMMENT! I hate it when people read something and don't comment on it. So please do!

-- Edited by Moonstar on Sunday 20th of December 2009 12:50:23 AM

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Poems
Check out my poems!

Confessions
I feel the burning stares against my face
Nervousness boiling from my cheeks from the taste
Hoping Im pretty enough to deserve your gaze
Lost in this impossible phase

Provide me directions to the pit of your stubborn heart
Sparingly cracking, shattering apart
I read your actions, you love me too
So why dont you do whats best for you?

I suppose I ought to vanish, just walk away
Youre not going to hurt me, not today
But its too late, I sob alone
Too many chances Ive already blown

I dont deserve you; youre the last thing I desire
But when it comes to necessities, you are the fire
The taunting flames licking me closer with ease
Then snapping me away, shoving me to my knees

But youll never drift past the immature side
Sacrificing popularity and taking me as your bride
Although we'll never go further, one fact will always remain
You are my fire, and I am your rain


Comparisons
Slide that darn smile off your face
It may be meant for her,
but I'm the one noting your actions.

Let me admire the grin you flash her
She may enjoy it,
but I'm addicted to it.

Allow me to slip my hand in yours
Her eyes may be shiny,
but mine are glowing.

Force my lips against your own
She may like you,
but I love you.


Scars
The taste is bitter and lonely on my tongue
Having to experience such pain so young
And while my hearts throbbing
Sobbing, sobbing

Was it a lie, I doubt it
Either way I hope hes happy about it
I thought I was being clever and cunning
Running, running

Away from the hurt
Away from the sting
Away from every phrase, touch or thing
Aching, aching

Another scar on my punctured heart
Too many wounds from the start
But God is breathing down my neck
Healing, healing

And the marks of hurt begin to fade
This feeling Id never trade
I have a new heart with a new soul
Getting over you is my goal
And through it all
Through the piercing thorn
My living healers are there when I am torn
Comforting, consoling
My pain is rolling
Away
In replace is confidence
This scratch will not stay


You'll Never See
In the beginning
All is dreamy
Nothing mangled, nothing steamy
Because you loved me
Or so I thought
A fib that was much too easily bought

For if you loved me
Or if I meant
What you said I did before the torment
Then it wouldnt have mattered
To me or to you
And opinions would be something we could quickly subdue

In the middle
Its all too quiet
But my hearts guilty of causing the riot
Because you became hers
As the months scuttled by
A fact I wish that I could deny

I know you like her
But under the surface
Youre wondering if shes really all worth it
Because love for the one
You truly adore
Is not found in her, but your crush before

In the end
Its your poor loss
Another stab, another toss
Of questions
But youll never see
What would have happened if youd chosen me.


Irreplacable
The painful jealousy inside me has never been so throbbing
And his actions towards her can still leave me sobbing
Cringing at every sparkle in the eye
Every discrete, nervous blush from the girl or the guy
Leaves me broken into pieces that are too small to see
Being consumed by the waking monster within me

I didn't think I could take any more affection
Staring at the tender eyes in my lonely reflection
Seeing them walking through the halls hand in hand
Is an event too often that I can barely stand
The envious, pale tears drip in private

Now that you're a couple, I don't want to face it
All the phrases we exchanged, I just want to erase it
And alone in my room, devoured by thoughts
Discouraging ones that leave me distraught
Quite firmly, I don't approve

Grazing from the sidelines, it takes self control
To avoid myself from erupting because interrupting is my goal
They're chortling joyfully, the new relationship is perfect
I sure hope so because he is definitely not worth it
But then why is my adoration untamable?

And she can hold him all she wants
Make the kisses wetter
But I know deep inside
He's wondering why she isn't better.


Young Love
Glancing secretly at him
Catching his gaze every now and then
Blushing
Quickly turning away
Longing
Wanting

His tender eyes full of laughter
Cant stop gazing, cant stop adoring
Giggling
Softly craving love
Longing
Wanting

He flips his hair out of his eyes
My heart pounds fiercely
Wondering
Is he good for me?
Longing
Wanting

His gentle stare I feel
I get a fast glimpse of his gaze
Fretting
Do I look alright?
Longing
Wanting
Trusting fate to do its best
Hoping
Pleading
Oh, young love


Hurt
So, so dark
That cold remark.
Tearing, fearing, forever loneliness.
I cannot cope with the world of black,
An after-attack.
The constant mope,
The ring of his voice,
The rumble, the tingle,
Only hope.

Slightly saddened, I sit up.
The slope is as steep as his trust.
That liar, I sigh.
Though quite forlorn, I couldve sworn,
It was never much more.
Forgotten, faded,
Only hope.

The fear is heavy,
The vulnerable mope,
Cannot be trusted, cannot cope.
Forbidden fright chills my bones.
He didnt care, he didnt, nope.
His words were careful.
Only hope.

Stripped to the end,
The end of my rope,
Clutching my knees,
I cannot cope.
Tearing, fearing,
Gloomy memories.
The hope has faded.
No more hope.


Fire and Sand
Her matted sandy fur
Brushed against fire
Her emerald eyes burned
With love and desire.

The cold in her breath
The soft in his tone
The drone of the air
Chilled every bone.

His heart ached with pain
Hers thumped with pride
For the trip hed soon take
That meant leaving her side.

He twisted his tail
Up around hers
Comfortably distinguishing
Their soft rumbling purrs.

Scooting close into
His heaving, ginger flank
She recalled the departure ahead
And her beating heart sank.

His eyes grazed over
The eager, lush land
And he snuggled closer
Fire and Sand.


-- Edited by Moonstar at 03:23, 2008-11-26

-- Edited by Moonstar at 20:07, 2008-11-26

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Simplicity

It couldnt have been simpler, a stupid girl and a stubborn guy
The one with the denim skirt made a decision
The one wearing the ineffective belt missing golden opportunities

And the question gnawing at my heart is hollowing
Do you ever miss the future?
Forcing myself to build up confidence Im not ready to face

And just when Im feeling comfortable
Courageous and weightless above the world
My strings of trust snap like brittle candy

Falling is difficult as you flicker through my mind
The tears from my confused eyes descend as freely as my body
The position is hard to tackle

I wish I could land softly in your supportive arms
The simple touch awakening our spirits
And with connected eyes, the reality is visible

But as I glare at the murky sky
Aching against the bone-breaking ground
Realization of your worthless absence has never been crueler

As your beautiful image begins to fade away
The thought is merely heartbreaking
It couldnt have been simpler, a stupid girl and a stubborn guy
The uncertainty leaking from your lies
Simplicity
Thats all it came down to


Another Step Forward
Devoured without chewing
By the foggy memories

Reminiscing the incidents,
Pressing replay continually

Wishing the taste would last forever
My heart burns with admiration

The genuine, lovable grin
Never escaping my mind

Your eyes would never fib
Directly to my face

I hope youre just as cursed as I am
A spell cast that prohibits any thoughts irrelevant of me

Decoding your actions while juggling my emotions
Has never been easier

Today we are friends
Tomorrow something greater


Freeze
The dusty video tapes roll robotically on the little T.V.
The picture so surreal
The scene dramatically unusual
The days you would lean in for a photo on Christmas
Generously giving each other gifts
Chortling together
The times you politely answered my questions
With a sweet voice
When I would innocently ask
I suppose we never truly got along
But the old days flowed so much more smoothly
I know you hate me now
But I genuinely love you
And with my back pressed against the wooden bed
Staring blankly at the flashing videos
It couldnt have been real
The tears stream
As swiftly as an indigo waterfall
Down my rosy cheeks
Chilly from the melting snow outside
I cry
And I think
Back then
Did I ever know?
Did I ever make an attempt at freezing the perfect moment
And thinking
"Right here, right now."



-- Edited by Snow at 07:55, 2008-12-28

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Those are beautiful, Moony! You put such vivid words, and that describes the emotions so well! Keep up the great work! :3

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okay, then.
unfortunately loving an idiot
who doesn't love me back.
but i'm not falling.
i just kind of...
am.
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Thank you SO much, it truly means alot. :)

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those are really cool biggrin

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Thank you so much!! ^^

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Mooneh! I didn't know u had a talent for poems! XD Their GREAT! =D Keep it up!

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darlin',
you're hiding in the closet
once again, start smiling.
I know you're tryin', real hard
not to turn your head away
pretty darling, face tomorrow
tomorrow's not yesterday. <3

 
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Haha, I enjoy writing very much. :P Thank youuu!

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Your welcome! =D Can't wait till u post another poem up XD I keep on spelling poem wrong!!!!!

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darlin',
you're hiding in the closet
once again, start smiling.
I know you're tryin', real hard
not to turn your head away
pretty darling, face tomorrow
tomorrow's not yesterday. <3

 
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