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Dragonstar


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I get writers block a lot when I write long stories, so I've given up on those. Here I will write short, one post stories. Some may continue off of another but not every story will.

Combination Five

My eyes shot open. I could see. I could see my surroundings. I could also feel. I could feel the wires that were attatched to my body. I could feel heart beating, my lungs moving with every breath I took. I could feel that I was lying down. I could feel my ears moving. I could hear strange noises. Talking. Someone was talking. I looked to my right and saw a strange mechanical being talking to another being that looked just like it. They stood on two legs and had box shaped heads. I tried to listen in on their conversation.
"Combinations 0 through 12 escaped, excluding 5."
The being motioned towards me when it said "5". That must be my name. What a strange name. I thought 5 was a number. I need more information. I need to know why I'm here. Why I know so many things but can't remember anything before waking up. Who were the other numbers? If they escaped, could I?
I tried to move my arms and legs. I noticed something when I tried to move them. A strange feeling in my back and sides. I slowly lifted my head and saw that I had four arms. I looked to the left and noticed two wings, one with feathers and the other had a membrane. I probably had two others just like it on the other side.
I also noticed the colors. My body seemed to be light blue. The feathered wings were orange with black spots, the bottom edges were white. The other wings were purple and the membrane was blue. Red horns seem to protrude from the side of my head. I also had a tail that had short black hairs on it.
I looked over at the mechanical beings again to make sure they hadn't noticed the I had woken up, and then I attempted to rise. I bellowed loudly as pulled all of the cords off of my body. The machines looked over and stared at me for a couple seconds before one of them hit a button on the counter it was standing next to.
The other machine charged me after it picked a strange glowing stick. I snarled as dodged around the stick and grabbed it's head. I twisted the head until it came off. The machine sparked as it collapsed. It landed on the stick and burst into flames. I looked over at the last machine. I t began to back away. I roared and charged it. I rammed into it and and slammed it into a wall.
I burst through the wall and fell on top of the robot. I looked up and noticed a strange bright light in the sky. The word sun appeared in my mind. I checked on the machine and saw that it was cushed. Some parts had fallen off of it. I frowned. I had wanted to get some information off of it, but it looks like I got carried away. At least I was free. But now it looks like I will have to get my answers somewhere else. Maybe from my escaped siblings. I don't know why I thought of them as siblings, but we seem to have come from the same place, so maybe we are.
I roared one last time before flying away.

-- Edited by Blizzardclaw at 03:11, 2009-02-25

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-- Edited by Dragonheart on Tuesday 7th of April 2009 01:36:50 AM

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-- Edited by Dragonstar on Monday 26th of September 2011 12:29:09 AM



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Nice job - your writing has improved a lot since your last story. The only things I found missing were a couple of commas, but they were in such simple places that it was both barely noticable and allowed their absense to not really matter.

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I think I write short stories better than long chapter stories.

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The following story is based off Zoids. Zoids are large mechanical beings that are similar to creatures that may or may not exist. They are built for combat. Humans can control them from inside a ****pit. Zoids live on the planet Zi. 
This story follows one of these great beings.

Siege Tiger

Power surged back into the mighty Zaber Fang. The gears in the saber tooth tiger shaped Zoid began to move again. Raising its head, it let loose a powerful roar.
"Wow! It still works!"
The voice came from inside the Zoid's ****pit. A human was trying to pilot it. The Zaber Fang growled but let the human stay. It might as well see if they can pilot a Zoid. It preformed a quick scan and found three other Zoids. The blue and white snail-like Gustav and two gold Command Wolves. The Gustav was a transport Zoid. An inexperienced human piloting an unarmed Rev Raptor could beat it.
The reawakened Zoid checked the weapons on the Command Wolves. One had a long range rifle while the other had a weaker double barrelled laser gun equipped to their backs. The Zaber Fang checked it's own weapons. All it had was a triple barrell shock cannon attatched to it's chest. It was missing it's double pile bankers. At least it still had it's deadly claws and fangs. The Zoid turned so that it was facing both Command Wolves and then roared it's challenge to the other Zoids.
"Sounds like it wants a fight. What do you guys say?" The Zaber Fang's pilot asked.
"Sounds good boss."
"Yeah, we'll be able to see what we need to repair through a fight." The pilots answered.
"All right. We'll start the fight after that Gustav is moved out of the way."
The Zaber Fang growled. It was used to fighting around obstacles. The pilot already sounded like a bad choice.

The Zaber Fang growled impatiently. It's first target was hiding behind some rocks. It knew it's opponent was there and it could easily take the wolf like Zoid down, but it's pilot was being to cautious. The old Zoid's original pilot would've let it charge after it's opponent.
The long range radar equipped to the Zaber Fang let it know that the other Command Wolf had a clear shot at it. Acting quickly the Zaber Fang used it boosters to jump over the rocks.
The pilot of the Command Wolf was caught by surprise. The larger tiger Zoid jumped onto the wolf Zoid and sunk it's fangs deep into it's leg. The Zaber Fang tried to jump away from the Command Wolf with it's leg still in it's mouth. There was a loud sound as leg came off. The Command Wolf screamed in pain and collapsed on the ground. The tiger Zoid fired a few shots from it's shock cannon to ensure that it's target would not get back up.
The Zaber Fang then turned it's attention to the other Command Wolf. Realizing that it's pilot had not done anything helpful yet, the old Zoid quickly ejected him before charging towards it's next victim. The pilot cried out in surprise and then started cursing at the Zoid that had ejected him.
The tiger Zoid roared as it neared the Command Wolf. The pilot of the other opened fire with the long range rifle, but the Zaber Fang was very experienced. It knew that the long range rifle could only fire straight. The old Zoid began moving to it's right so that every shot would miss.
The human stopped firing and activated the assist boosters on the wolf Zoid. If the Zaber Fang could simle, it would. It lowered it's head and let the Command Wolf run into it. The glass that protected the pilot in the ****pit shattered from the force of the impact. The Zaber Fang had a metal covering on it's head instead of thick glass.
The Command Wolf was launched into the air. It hit the ground with a loud thud. The pilot had been knocked out. The Zaber Fang roared loudly, proud of it's victory. It didn't wait for the humans to come and see the damage. It turned and ran south.
It knew that eventually it would hit a city. It hoped that it was the way that it had left it. The old Zaber Fang had destroyed that city to honor it's friends. Friends that it would probably never see again. To humans, the city was known as it's lair, the Siege Tiger's lair, but to the tiger Zoid, it had a different name. It was known to the Siege Tiger as Inferno's Tomb.

This story will be continued...

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Resurrected I rise, and look to the sky, a gaping hole stare back at me. Light flows out like blood from a wound, then Death's head pokes out. Thousand light years away he be, but I can still see his burning red eyes full of hate and rage. Mouth opens and he roars, unheard do to distance, but I shiver in fear still. Laser blade cuts into stone as I prepare to flee. The Demon War has begun. One against an army, who will win? Not even the Gate Keepers can tell. I look up now to see the hole enlarge. How much I hoped for this not to come.
-Red Dragon

Demon War Part I: The Beginning

The Demon War actually began many years ago, but it did not begin for the humans until now. Why? Because of the Data Beast, the Corruption King. No one dared visit your planet out of fear that he might free himself while they were there. Those UFO sightings all you humans have been seeing are actually mechanical scouts, sent to check up on your planet. There are no reports of any scout going missing or being captured by humans. This is a good thing, but you humans will never understand why.

You were not the first humans to exist. There were others, but they disappeared during the Serpentine Wars. What happened to them is another story I will tell later.

I guess I should introduce myself. I am Eclipse, one of the Demon Princes. There are other Demon Princes. Concussion whom is trapped similarly to the Data Beast, stuck deep underground within a planet. The Red Dragon, trapped in stone. The Kaiser Dragons soul was split so that he had a soul part for every form he had. I was not imprisoned. I fell asleep did not wake for years so that I could not be tricked like the others. There are also the Demon Kings, the Data Beast and the Star Dragon. You already know what happened to the Data Beast. The Star Dragon is imprisoned in a large black hole. He will be freed at the exact time the Data Beast is freed. That is when the Demon War will truly begin for all beings.

Now to tell what happened to cause our troubles. As we continued to create new planets and, occasionally, a new species, we noticed the Data Beast was spending a lot of time with Earth and the humans. We ignored it, that was our greatest mistake. Eventually, he grew tired of taking orders from Death, the Star Dragon, and turned against us. He attempted to corrupt other beings and make them do his bidding. Many managed to resist, but he did get a few to join him. Death eventually trapped him in the core of Earth, but he didnt lose his power. He succeeded in tricking all but me into their own prisons.

Now that we are being freed, we are gathering armies. According to the mysterious Book of Demons, there will only be two sides: The Pure-Ones and the Corrupted. The Pure-Ones are those who are free of corruption. You can probably guess why the other side is called the Corrupted.

That is all for now. More will be explained later



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Nice job - this certainly explains a bit about the RP, and I like the first person style, mostly because I've never successfully been able to pull it off myself. XD

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Not quite all of it though, I'm still missing some important details.

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*w* Shiny~ I wish I could do first person. I manage to switch to third person in the middle of typing and never notice at all~ :c

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First person is easy for me, I don't know why.

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I envy your skills at writing in first person, Blizzardclaw. You should do more. :)
My favorite has to be the one about the Demon War; explains a lot about why there is a war in the first place.
Keep it up!

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