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TOPIC: Vanishng Wings/ Darkworld/ Criscyle. *New criscyle chap 1 up. you'll understand what it is.*******


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RE: Vanishng Wings/ Darkwold *******Vanishing wings chap 6 and 7 up because i am weird!!************


okay i made another reAlly short chap!


Chap 7! Im going through these first chaps because you need to get to the chapters between 24 through 45. Thats where the heat starts and ends.

Rau felt a power overwhelming him. Im not letting you out. My business needs to be complete! He almost lost control over his body until he used his force. He flew to the ground and Keiumei and Naiomi where there. Why did you follow me? He growled. You should die now. He lifted one had and a black ball of energy appeared. Suddenly, the ball blew out as he clutched his chest. One of his eyes turned brown and the markings on one half of his face disappeared. Keiumei, Naiomi, Help me. He said as he dropped on the ground. The wings went back into his back. Look the markings! Theyre gone! Naiomi exclaimed. Oh would you look at that. Keiumei said sighing. She plucked a strand of his silver hair before it turned bright blue. Ow what did you do that for?! He yelled instantly. Naiomi glomped him.


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"Well if we don't kill him maybe there will be death and destruction and maybe this realm will be destroyed and the Cykarie Realm (otherwise know as the Sye Realm in the future) will have a waged war with a realm Blackfang named after himself." Ryujini said then paused. The three of them broke out laughing.



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this chat is kinda blood. but i hope it dosen't pas the limit. i'm trying to refrain from the original version and make it site friendly.



Chap 8!! This one is actually very sad. Aww poor Zen! *Pats Zen on the head*

 

 He pushed her away and said something with a low tone. I need to think. HE said as he got up. Zen transformed into Kythe and flew away. What wrong with you Zen, Jeez.

Im sorry but I started to see things. There was this woman with these glass wings, sitting on the stump staring as me with a smile. But when I looked up again she was gone. And the weird thing was when she was there it felt like I was in pain. Worse that the transformation pain. It felt like I was slowly being tortured.  Like if I was being ripped apart piece by piece.

"Eww you dont have to go in that much detail." Kythe sighed and saw somebody flying beside him. Kythe's eyes widened and he turned back into Zen. The wings where gone and he fell to the ground. He was trying to gasp for air. "What happened? I suddenly stopped breathing. I almost died."

"But you didnt. Did you?"

Zen clutched his arm. "Why are you making me have so much pain?"

"Because I am from you future. You can call me Ima." She spoke with a smirk. "The reason why you are in so much pain when Im around is because I will bring you pain in the future. You could say Im the reason for your death."

Zen eyes widened. He coughed up blood and tried to breath. "GO AWAY!" HE yelled. He turned around to see that she was gone. He wiped the blood from his mouth and it left a red smear on his face. Out from the bushes came Naiomi and Keiumei (Zen didnt get very far away from them) and saw Zen as he weakly tried to get up He was breathing heavily and said. "Theres someone trying to kill me."

 Keiumei noticed the blood stained all over him. "What you get in a fight?"

Sort of. He said as he almost fell over "Its getting dark. How bout we rest here." He added as they balanced him. The two nodded as they lay on the floor. They all went to sleep except for Zen. He gritted his teeth and said, "Id know you would show up."

"I did not follow you, you merely summon me." She smiled.

"Why would I call you if Id just end up dying if you stay too long? He said as he put his arms around his chest. His arm started bleeding. Ima shook her head. "In your heart, you want to know who I am. If you keep summoning me youll die." She tilted her to the side.

  A cut appeared on Zen's face that went from his eye to his chin. There where two open wounds in his back where it looks like wings have been ripped out. Blood dripped from his mouth down his chin. "Do you want me to endure this pain any longer?" He said weakly.  Ima merely shook her head and walked off. Zen felt light headed and passed out.

        Zen looked around. He was in a black room.  He heard the rattle of chains. Zen looked behind him to see someone all chained up. The mans eyes opened. "He looks exactly like me!" he said in startle. There where chains on his wings, arms, and legs. Zen felt feathers and looked behind him. There where bright blue wings on him. He looked back at the man and saw that the wing chains broke. The feathers on his wings bursted and fell off. Black dragon wings where spread. The man's hair turned black and his eyes turned white. He smiled. Zen felt a pain rush through him. He saw someone with a claymore that stabbed him in the chest. This man was different. He had ebony hair and blue eyes. Zen said a name. "Drak."

 

Zen woke up screaming. He looked at himself. There were bandages all over him. "Naiomi! Keiumei!" he cried.

"Relax, we're right here." Naiomi sighed.




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"Well if we don't kill him maybe there will be death and destruction and maybe this realm will be destroyed and the Cykarie Realm (otherwise know as the Sye Realm in the future) will have a waged war with a realm Blackfang named after himself." Ryujini said then paused. The three of them broke out laughing.



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RE: Vanishng Wings/ Darkwold *******Vanishing wings chap 8 up!! i've been too lazy to write Darkwolrd************


i got to thinking, why not put up POLL TO SEE WHITCH IS YOUR fav story. didn't like the poll, put one up of the fav character, the system weas messed up. soi want to know who is you fave character. it's for a short story.

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"Well if we don't kill him maybe there will be death and destruction and maybe this realm will be destroyed and the Cykarie Realm (otherwise know as the Sye Realm in the future) will have a waged war with a realm Blackfang named after himself." Ryujini said then paused. The three of them broke out laughing.



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here's the new vanishing wings chap.

Chap 9. Almost near the cool part KYAA!!

"Drak." He mumbled to himself.
"What?" Naiomi said fixing his bandages.
"Nothing." Zen sighed and curled his hand up in a fist. "Why?"
Ima jumped down from a tree. "See? Look Naiomi, I keep getting hurt when shes around." He said pointing to Ima.
"Who? I dont see anyone." Naiomi said looking around. Zen froze at the thought."Y-You cant see her?"
"No. Are you seeing things?" She said as she put her hand on his forehead. A huge rigged wound appeared on his left leg. "Holy crud!" Naiomi put some bandages on the wound.
"You cant see her?" he repeated in shock. It suddenly got silent. Zen looked at Naiomi. She was talking like if she was scared. But the sound completely went. "Getting better at listening are we? She doesnt see me because I choose not to let her see me." She said as she shrugged her shoulders.
Tears streamed down Zens face. "Why? Why do you insist on killing me?" He said shaking.
"Because, you will know in time." She said as she got up. You better get out of here. I sense inhuman. Probably, shadow beings." Ima whispered in his ear. Sound came back and he heard Naiomi in the middle of her conversion. "Who the heck were you talking to?"
"No time. We have to leave."
"Hurry. I sense they are coming for the amulet." Ima said. Shadowy figures appeared from the bushes. "The gates of the Dark Realm have reopened!" Ima said in shock.


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"Well if we don't kill him maybe there will be death and destruction and maybe this realm will be destroyed and the Cykarie Realm (otherwise know as the Sye Realm in the future) will have a waged war with a realm Blackfang named after himself." Ryujini said then paused. The three of them broke out laughing.



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Chap 10. HOLY CRUD!!!!!!!!!! This isnt the cool part. Its coming up next.

"Naiomi! Stand back!" he said to her. "KYTHE!!" he yelled.
"Isn't he supposed to appear?" She said scared. "Something's wrong. I cant turn into Kythe. I'll just have to improvise." He said pulling out his black sword. He sliced a shadow being in half. The creature just grew back together. "Whats wrong? Its not affected. Naiomi get out of here!" Zen yelled. Naiomi ran to a tree and jumped up.
"Good shes safe-" A sharp pain struck Zens chest. He looked down to see a sharp tentacle stabbed right through his chest. Ima looked in shock. "ZEN!!!!" She shouted.
Naiomi looked down to see someone with glass wings. "Is that her?"
Zen's vision became blurry and then black. Zen fell to the ground. "O-Orrii" he said before his eyes closed. "NOOO!!!!!!" Ima screamed. She ran over to Zen. There was a huge open wound in his chest right where the heart was. (Shes ticked) Ima looked up at the shadow beings. "TAL!!!" she yelled. Her pinkish white hair turned a turquoise and her eyes turned red. Her glass wings turned white with feathers. The amulet around her neck turned white. "YOU DIE NOW!!!!" he got up and struck five shadows with her claw gauntlets. She sliced one into pieces. The rest of them fled. Tal was filled with rage. She turned back into Ima. "Zen!" she said with tears flooding down her cheeks. "Why? WHY!?"



no darkwolrd for you! this optional story Vanishing Wings has become mandatory.


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"Well if we don't kill him maybe there will be death and destruction and maybe this realm will be destroyed and the Cykarie Realm (otherwise know as the Sye Realm in the future) will have a waged war with a realm Blackfang named after himself." Ryujini said then paused. The three of them broke out laughing.



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RE: Vanishng Wings/ Darkwold *******atencion alL Vanishing Wings fans! chap 10 is up! new art for the sene ************


here's the art for this scene

blam.jpg picture by biblebuddyfriends

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"Well if we don't kill him maybe there will be death and destruction and maybe this realm will be destroyed and the Cykarie Realm (otherwise know as the Sye Realm in the future) will have a waged war with a realm Blackfang named after himself." Ryujini said then paused. The three of them broke out laughing.



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okay i like this commic because it's funny, cuz kythe is so short minded that he's just funny. he's the youngest guardian.

inter.jpg picture by biblebuddyfriends

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"Well if we don't kill him maybe there will be death and destruction and maybe this realm will be destroyed and the Cykarie Realm (otherwise know as the Sye Realm in the future) will have a waged war with a realm Blackfang named after himself." Ryujini said then paused. The three of them broke out laughing.



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okay you guys probably thought that was the end of Vanishing wings. well it's NOT! IT'S COOL PART TIME!

Chap 11. Poor Orrii. In darkworld its really messed up the way she gets sent back in time. Everything goes down hill from here for Zen. And it only gets worse.

 

Naiomi got down and went near Ima."My name is Orrii. Remember me okay? For we will meet again in the future." Orrii said.  She put her hands of Zen's huge wound and she started to disappear.  The wound started to close up. The other cuts and scars on him disappeared. "Orrii!!" Naiomi shouted. "Don't worry. We will see each other again. But I won't remember you. This is how I'm supposed to die. This is why Zen sent me here. Now I realize. This is how I die." She said. She had completely left.  Naiomi's tears welled up. Zen took a big gasp and opened his eyes slowly. "Orrii" He passed out after saying. She started to cry and hugged Zen.

 
Zen found himself in the black room. He smiled as he heard the breathing of his dark self. The wings on his back spread has he turned around. He felt himself starting to hurt. His bones where reforming. Claws where formed from his fingers. His feet turned beast like. Horns shot from out of his skin from his head. His teeth grew long and sharp. His face became stretched and creature like. He got down on all fours and four hands grew out from his back. He grew two snake headed tails. His wings turned into metal and web like wings. He howled high pitched that the room shattered. The dark Zen smiled and said, "The second set of chains is broken with insanity." He said as the chains on his hands disappeared.

Zen's eye shot open as he got up from the shock. His body ached.  He noticed there were no scars on him. Not even the huge hole in his chest.

Hey kid. Youre finally up.

"R-Rau?!" He nearly jumped. "Where are the others?"

Youre too emotionally unstable. All of your forms except for me have shut down, because of that you where killed. Otherwise, if you did have your power forms, if you died you would turn into a power form.

"But how am I alive?" He said shaking.

Ima killed herself in order to bring you back.

"What?" He said as tears streamed down his cheeks. He sobbed and buried his head in his knees.

"Zen? Hello are you wake?" Naiomi said as she walked in. she saw Zen in the floor laughing. "Z-Zen-?"

Zen started feeling pain run through his body. His arms grew very large claws and thorns. His feet turned wolf like. Metal wings broke from out of his back. His face grew sharp and it turned to a mussel. His eyes turned red and scales grew all over his body. He got down on all fours and four hands grew out from his back. Two tails sprouted and had snake heads on them. "Zen!"

Zen turned to Naiomi who had a frightened expression. The beast smiled slightly and heard a sound. He turned around to see shadow beings form. He growled and attacked the monsters. He bit into one's neck until he could feel musty thick black blood flow in his mouth. He threw it to the others and they fell back. The black blood spilled out of his mouth. Zen heard foot steps and out can someone in black armor. It was wearing a cloak. Zen growled and jumped to it. The dark man merely shot it with a dark blast and Zen fell. Zen got up and his eyes returned to human eyes, but where still red. He screeched but the man shot him again. The scales on his body disappeared to his bare skin. He snarled as he shot claw hooks at the man but the man grabbed the claws and shocked him. Zens hands and feet turned to normal. He howled and bit deeply in the man's arm and almost felt blood trickle down his sharp fangs. The man grabbed his neck and choked him. Zen howled loudly and the man threw him into a tree. His face turned human. Zen's red eyes gleamed with hate. "DIE!!!!" He yelled at he lunged towards the man. The man stabbed him in the heart and Zen coughed and gagged blood. (Sorry for the blood factor but you got to admit its cool.)

 

(In the black room)

Zen cried as the pain got worse. "It hurts!" he screamed.

The dark Zen put his pale hand on Zen's light brown hair. (Yes hes his original self in his mind) Zen looked up to see the dark self smiling. "You've passed the chains of pain and the chains of insanity. Now you need to break the chains of sorrow. I warn you if you do this a new dark road will open, and these dark powers will enter you. And you will find out something you don't want to hear." He said.

"I need the power to be strong. I'm just a kid! I'm not who I am on the outside. That's a different me. Rau and the others are gone. I need you!" He cried. Zen took a hold of the chains and broke them. The dark put his hand on Zen's forehead and a white flash came in the room. The room disappeared and they where falling. The dark held his arms around Zen as they hit the ground.

 

(Real world. Or realm, this is the Sye Realm so they dont live in the normal world. Thats why they are used to magic and stuff.and talk like we do.)

Zen started laughing. His hair turned black and his eyes turned white. Three horns grew from his head. He smiled as he grabbed the sword and broke it. He pulled the shard out from his chest and his hole closed up. He made a black spear out of his dark ball and sliced the mans arm off. He stabbed him and sliced his shoulder in half.  He decimated the man and he landed on the floor. The spear was pointed at the mans face. You dare challenge the guardian of the Black Realm? The Dark Zen smirked.

Naiomi was frightened as she looked away and buried her face in her knees. All she heard what a shrill screech and she looked back to where it was. All that was left was a pile of ashes and a spear covered in black blood stuck in the ground. The spear vanished and the dark Zen turned back to normal. "This is the power I long for." He whispered.
Okay here's a thought. why not put up the origial Vanishing wings story, Criscyle. so i did want to put it up. all i need to know is if you want to read the original version.



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"Well if we don't kill him maybe there will be death and destruction and maybe this realm will be destroyed and the Cykarie Realm (otherwise know as the Sye Realm in the future) will have a waged war with a realm Blackfang named after himself." Ryujini said then paused. The three of them broke out laughing.



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ps by the way the story Criscyle doesn't have Zen, but his original character disighn that i made.

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"Well if we don't kill him maybe there will be death and destruction and maybe this realm will be destroyed and the Cykarie Realm (otherwise know as the Sye Realm in the future) will have a waged war with a realm Blackfang named after himself." Ryujini said then paused. The three of them broke out laughing.



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RE: Vanishng Wings/ Darkwold**Okay it was a pain in the butt to put up but here is my newest, Chap 11, New Criscyle!****


ghere's Criscyle!

    Criscyle

                                                        Chap 1                  

Cray looked out of the window and watched the land of Criscyle. She smiled softly. "This will be the last time Criscyle will exist. Soon it will fade and the realms will rule. No more distant lands of this earth." She sighed with a tear. Cray walked outside and touched the huge willow tree that was in the middle of the castle's garden. She sensed no life at all. "Madam! The callus gates are open. The time for evacuation is now or never!" Her servant said. "Leave me. I shall stay with my world." She said. The servant nodded. Once everyone left she destroyed the gate to the other world and turned around. "Realm seekers. IF you come to create the realms fine. I shall die with my land." She said with a harsh tone. The realm seeker merely sighed. "Dear princess," He smiled as a circle formed around her. It started to light up. "Anything that stays behind does not get destroyed, but becomes part of the realm." He smiled as light blared out from the circle. She tried to scream but she no longer had her voice. She reached out her hand to grab the realm seeker but something dragged her in the circle. She looked up at the sky the clouds turned black and the sky turned white. Black grass appeared and the trees where white. The castle that she was born in had turned into a dark shadow kingdom with a black fire draw bridge. "The willow!" She yelled. He voice allowed her to speak. "Oh that. Ill make sure it's safe." He smiled as a barrier speared over the tree. She finally was engulfed in the circle. "Begin your work to create the realms. This world shall become the Black realm!" He said with victory in his tone.

       Cray woke to see a dungeon. She looked around. "Why do they always follow the kingdom of Criscyle?!" Cray cried.

"T-This is the kingdom of Criscyle?!" A voice was heard from the shadows. It was scared. The voice sounded like if a boy just turned a man. "Where are you!" She turned with fierce eyes. The grey eyes looked sacred. Cray sighed and help out her hand. A boy by the age of 15 crawled out of the shadows slowly. He looked like he hadn't been fed for days and beaten every hour of the day. His glasses looked almost as if they were coming apart. One of the lenses had a huge crack. His ponytail was scraggly and hadn't been brushed for a long time. "Who-who ar-are you?" He sad weak and scared.

"I am Cray T. Hardfell, princess of Criscyle. And you are?"

"Yew Anvil. I am a scholar; I did research about the realm seekers." He said as he flinched when Cray put her hand of his should. She felt cuts and bumps. She had saw bruises on him. "I am someone who is good. I won't hit you." She said as she put her hand his cheek. It felt rough and bruised. "I can get us out of here." She said. She felt like if she was talking to her little brother Weaild, who had died when she was 7.  "Yew, I promise I will get you to safety." Cray heard a noise from the guard. The cell door opened. "The Realm Seeker would like to see you Princess Cray. As for you pathetic whelp, more torture." He laughed and savored the word 'torture'. The word almost burned her lips as she repeated it. She could never imagine what he was going through. "I'm so sorry." She mouthed. He nodded as the guard took him away by force.


okay there where realms. and worlds. That world that was taken over was the Di World. it was near the Dark Wolrd. yes Dark Wrold. that is the name of Darkworld. you'll figure out why i called it that.

 



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"Well if we don't kill him maybe there will be death and destruction and maybe this realm will be destroyed and the Cykarie Realm (otherwise know as the Sye Realm in the future) will have a waged war with a realm Blackfang named after himself." Ryujini said then paused. The three of them broke out laughing.

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