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If you ever think to animate that, I can help you out. ^_^ You'd just have to send me the story and character discription, and it mite take a while, but It's only a suggestion. So, no need to jump to it, but I could like do a chapter at a time.

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biggrinThankz for the offer! I'll try to get the story to you, or whatz iz gotz so farz! X3
smileSo heres chapter 2...........................................................................................................................:3


Chapter 2; "I'm one of them.............."


" cold......................... want my blanketzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz............................................." I mumbled sheepishly as I slept. " Okay..... maby I can get on the ..................X-Box....................... Why's my bed so freakn' hard?!" As I woke I found myself in a flushed state. My head seemed to spin with exhoustion. But when I looked around , A flurry of colors rushed at me. I blurrily stumbled on the hard , mud sodden earth. " Where am I?" I said rather shakily.But as I looked around, I seemed to be surrounded with coniferouse and deciduouse trees in late fall. It was, as I saw, bright in the night sky .As I was about to explore, I cought a glimps of moonlight reflecting on something blue." A puddle?" I said as I staggered towards the mysteriouse pool of water.............................................. but what I saw chilled me to the bone. " Wha...... what the hell is t-that thing?! Oh my god! Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!"
as I looked into the pool, I saw a creature that looked like me, but it wasn't human. " I'm a Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurry!" I screamed as I realized exactly what I was staring at. "But if that's me................. I must be in the furry world." I muttered. I figured that I was also in a forest some where in this weird world, so, since I got bored, I explored the part of the forest that I was in. "Wha' are ye' doin' in here runt, or will I ha' ta' beat the answer out o' ya'?" I spun around to where I Heard the voice. Just behind me, a tall musculer, grey wolf furry loomed in the trees just above where I was standing. "Big mistake pig mouth!"I retorted. and, since he had insisted on being such a brat, "I'll show you who's beating the crap out of who!" I cried as I kicked him squarley in the chest. He growled and let out a ferociouse raor that seemed to deafn the whole forest. " Die you freak!" he screiched  as he drove his claws into my shouldier. Then,(he,he,he,he,he.....), I accidedentaly bit his fluffy tail because he had me in a head-lock. " Wha' the hell!" he screamed as he tried to fling me into a tree. " Iaintlettin'gojerk-face!"I shouted through tuffets of silver-grey fur. And I wasn't joking either. He flung me into a tree 17 times and I wouldn't budge,but that was only because my fangs were stuck in his fur. I finaly came loose when he decied to untangle my sharp, bloody-white colored teeth out of the wet patches of silver-grey fur on his tail. Then I escaped another "flinging into the trees" by running as fast as I could to get away from the nutty furry. But that was only the begining of my many battles to come.


-- Edited by Scorchpaw on Sunday 10th of January 2010 10:44:48 PM

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your quick at writing! witch is good . . I like the story!

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Thankz! :3

Chapter 3: The prince and the Patheticley Poor girl.

ic: Scorchpaw had been in the forest for hours before she finally managed to get    out.
"God that took forever!"scorchpaw laughed as she came to a town.
No one was awake and all was silent. She could only hear the beating of her heart.
"Is anyone here?"scorchpaw called out.There was no reply.She felt alone in this strange town.She saw a tree and climbed into a hollow hole and hid there.As she(I) fell asleep, the town woke up. every one was bustling around and buissying themselves. Furry knights surrounded the area as a carrage came by. The person inside was the dark furry prince, at the age of 18. He did his daily strole around town. People avoided him and bowed deeply. As the people and knights buissied themselves, he saw a foot sticking out of the tree I was in. As I slept, I could hear the stomping of hoofs. I woke up and looked out side the tree to find every thing and every body staring up at me.And just looking at me right next to my sleeping place was the prince. We looked at each other and did the classical thing-we both screamed at each other at the same exact time! I immediatly bolted out of the tree and ran in my skinny green jeans and skinny brown t-shirt. Every body was shocked to see me react like that. The knights scrambled into action and started chasing me like mad clanging in the junk pile of armor that they wore. The prince hopped onto one of the royal gaurd horses and I was on the run like some crazy banshee. I didn't see a wall in front of me- wich was really stupid- an crashed into it! I fell on the ground knocked out as the royal gaurd and the prince along with the towns people watched me be dragged be over to the prince. I quickly woke up and did the one thing possible, I shouted"WHOA!Dude,chill out!"and everbody stared at me like I was not even human.Didn't they speak plain english? "What is your name?"The dark furry prince asked me as I was hauled off to the castle with him and we were carried by hoarses.(WOOT!LIMO!) and then we entered the castle. I wasn't really suprised, considering I've seen this type of stuff since I was two years old."Anyways,my name is Scorchpaw,but Scorchie will do just fine."I said, merly looking at the gaurds. The weirdo prince kept eyeing me. "Do I look funny? Or is it that you wanna send me to da' dungeon? Trust me dude, I know how to fight lots better than those fony ballony knights of yours."I said. He kept eyeing me and said."No not at all...... will you be my first lady?"he said with those weird and crazy lovy-dovy eyes."WHOA!What?!"I said with a lot more shock. He was a wolf furry-that was for sure-but I was only 13 years old!"Will you be my first lady?"he asked again, this time spreading...WINGS?! I looked at him with more shock.This guy was a DRAGON WOLF FURRY?!"Uhhhh...................."I said, my cheeks getting red. What was I supposed to do?! I mean,come on, you don't just walk up to somebody you've never met who's younger than you and ask to get married! I decided he was a weirdo, so I asked to leave. He thought I only did that cause' I wanted to think about it. Yeah right! I would SO not get married!The next day, after I had slept comfortabley in an inn, I woke up to find the news-paper on my bed. I looked it over.Boy was I shocked."GIRL TO BE MARRIED TO THE PRINCE?! BETROTHED AND ENGAGED?! OH NO HE DIDN"T! HE DID NOT!"I cried as I read the artical.The other people in the town were too buissy looking for'the mysteriouse bride-to-be'. I went out of the old musty inn wearing a beautifully woven silky purple and green cloak that the inn keeper had so kindly loaned me. People marvled at the picture of me in the news-paper. They talked to me and asked if I'd seen'miss-run-away' and didn't look under my hood to find out who I was. I went to the entrance gate of the town and the gaurds let me out, having no idea that the bride to be was escaping from the prince.I trecked throught the forest, knowing he could easily have spotted me. I was glad to be rid of him. He had a chill of ambition as well as Dakrke magic, but I thought that was just greed. I trecked through the thick pines and came to an old village with many people. It was the after noon, and I had had enough of walking for hours on end with out stopping. When I walked into the village, people stared at my beautifull silk clothing as it shimmers in the rays that immited from the sun.  I had never felt so alone. I explored the town and the shops, carefully looking into each persons eyes. As sunset drew near a golden wolf furry cupped his hand over my mouth and dragged me into an alley way."Hi there. Gimme yer' money and you won't get hurt."He said with a smirk.




Hope that wasn't too dramatic! I IZ A DRAMAQUEEN! ^.^"


chapter 4: Escaping into another trap


I had made it out of the town or village, whatever that place was, and was free of the whimpy and really weird prince. The good news was I wasn't getting married. The bad news was that every body noticed that I had left the town. They searched for me and found no trace. Neither did the prince, who was in a bad mood. He had let his bride to be escape-his one chance of becoming the ruler of this wreched town. Dark clouds were over the kingdom as he stared out his window. He,Silas, had let the face he'd been hoping to look at forever when he ruled this wreched place escape his clutches! He went over to the gate keeper as rain drizzled out of the thickley dark clouds that surrounded them."Did you or the last gate-keeper on duty let a younge girl walk out of this gate at any time?!"He thundered as lightning struck the sky. His fur bristled as traces of his darke magic flowed through him, sending charges of static electricity through his body. His beautiful blue and purple silk cloak clung to him like a shimmering soaked star. His black pelt was soaked to the brim with rain. "y-yes sir, at exactley 5:30am this morning." stammered the shivering antelope knight gate keeper furry as he shivered in his rusting armor."What was the person wearing when you let them out?!"Silas said with less rage.The muddy earth below shimmered and dampened as the static electricity he was giving off coursed through his boots. The wooden gate with iron hinges clanked and creaked feebly as the rain rusted the iron hinges,wich became more unstable to the giant wooden door. "A Green and purple silk cloak yer' magesty, and she w-was wearing black pants with a b-black shirt, baggypants, and a skinny shirt with baggy sleeves sir." The gate keeper replied.Silas stiffined. He saw movement in the forest path ahead of the gate, the dampened soil of the road showing like a dark brown river of mud. A furry was coming, with a bundle of rags. He came up to them, tartiley sighing as he dropped the bag in front of the prince.The job he'd been requested to do had been easy. Just catch the escapy, bag im' an' bring im' back. "Came wit yer' request sire."he snorted. He had the statraturer of a strong wolf furry, his massive muscles bulging. But he knew he was no match fer' prince Silas, with his dumb spells.Out of the bag tumbled a Dragon furry, his wings firmly tied to his hind legs."I've got a request for you to fill out."Silas snarled at the the dragon furry. "If you complete it, your crimes shall be pardoned and you will be set fre. But should you fail... you will be fed to the dogs. Understood?"The dragon furry nodded. The rain had betun to soak his golden black pelt. "I want you to retrieve a runaway."Silas said as he gave the Escape a picture of her. The prince provided him with a horse, food, and money."Now go and get her!"he cried as the dragon furry set off. His steed was a black one with Darke magic flowing from its pelt. He rode off, knowing that Silas would kill him if he didn't find her. The sky had began to fade to black and was a beautiful golden red by the time he reached the next town. It was full of people who were bustling at night. Then he saw a strange girl being hastled by a Golden pelted Cat tom furry who had her up agianst a wall. He tethered his black stallion to a post at an inn and ran over, a switchblade in his hand. people took no notice as he attacked the furry, at least not untell they saw him flash out a blade. They now noticed the strange girl being hastled too. "No! I don't have any money and if I did I wouldn't give it to a jerk like you!"I yelled as the Golden furry had me leaned up against a wall in an alley way. "Aww, come on, don't be so harsh."he said, drawing out his black claws that had the stench of blood on them.I tried to move, but he had me pinned against the wall, his strength out matching mine.This guy was crazy! I was not going to give him any money, and I was not gonna be a damsel in distress.Then I saw a weird dragon furry with a golden-black pelt come at the other furry. He charged through, his switch blade knife ripping flesh as it tore at the creep's arm. The guy was being carried away by two hyena furry knights that were happy to get him off to the dungeon. The villagers went back to their buissness, paying no mind to what had happened."Thanks, I would have been mugged hadn't it been for you."I said, smiling at my savior. Then he grasped my arm and pulled me into a near by tavern. He sat us down at a table and ordered a whiskey. I told him I was 100% sober, and ordered a root Beer. Soda does me better than the smell of whiskey ever did. I sat there and we talked a bit. He was drunk, and he told me a lot of things. I gasped at the last thing I heard before he became unconciouse from drinking so much whiskey."And this guy? You know, Silas? He asked me to find this run away, her name was ......Scorchpaw.Pretty stupid huh?he,he told me to find her so I could not have to go back to the dungeon..haha....stupid prince...I'm 18 years old...da...da...da,da,da,da,da......"And then he just fell asleep, tired and drunk.Dude,You don't just get drunk and say"hi, I have to kidnap you"and then doze off like it was nothing. I carried the drunk dummy to the inn that was accross from the tavern. I had made sure that we had seperate rooms, but that crazy manager had other ideas. "here's yer' room!he happily called."See you two in the mornin'!" and then he left me in a room with a two person bed, a desk and a couple of chairs with a table. Was this guy nuts?! "Dude, this is crazy..."I bleerily mumbled as I placed the dragon furry on the bed, then I took a blanket and rested on the floor, with a pillow of course. My captor woke up and was back to attention. What was he doing here?! Where did the girl go?! He thought, finding it strange for him to be in Paul and Ann's inn. He had been in the tavern when he last saw the furry. He looked around and found her on the floor. She was snug and asleep, not stirring or snoring like other guests did. He looked at her, and she seemed familiar. A emralt green and purple sash with a cloak of the same colors...black pants and a black shirt...he fished a picture out of his pocket that Silas had given to him when he had set off. It was a picture of her! Her age was down at the dog-eared left hand corner of the parchment. She was only 13 years old?! When he looked at her, she looked like she was 16! He lay back on the bed, too tired for a ride back to the palace. What was he supposed to do? He hadn't expected it to be this easy!(Neither did I at the moment)How could she just walk into his paws like that?! How could it be so easy?!



ooc;Wow! THat was reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaally long!












-- Edited by Scorchpaw on Saturday 30th of January 2010 02:33:04 AM

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wow good story ^^


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Thanks! Although it is old and needs a bit of improvement, I might make more chapters in fan fic

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ReLLY GOOD STORY! :)

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Thanks! I made another staory called warrior cats-thae animals unlocked. You should check it out!

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will do.

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