Warrior Cats: The Four Clans

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Chap 3, The Beginning of the End

Atrith walked outside and noticed two people waiting by the army of shadow beings. "Who are you guys?" Atrith spoke looking at them. "Hey look its the boy in the cell! I never thought he had blonde hair, it's quite rare in the realms."
"Well not for my realm. Almost everybody has blonde hair." He said then remembered what he was going to say. "Oh my name is Atrith, your's?" He asked.
"Renna"
"Ryujini"
Atrith stared at the twins as they both answered at the same time. "Well since we are on a mission to stop Blackfang we must go." Renna said fixing her sleeves. "Um okay. How long would it take to get there?" He asked looking at them. "At least a few weeks I guess." Ryujini answered calmly. Atrith sighed. Why did I have to get stuck on this mission? I could have stayed and be with my fiancée. Atrith thought and sighed.





Chap 4, End of the Blonde Haired Boy




Atrith trudged for several hours. "My Feet Hurt!" He whined. "Would you like some cheese to go with that wine?" Renna growled at him then sighed in exhaustion. "How bout' we rest here for an hour or two. Then continue?" Ryujini suggested. "Good idea." Atrith said falling on his butt. Everyone dropped their weapons and sat down. "Ah how long have we been walking? My feet are sore." Atrith said putting his sword on the ground. "Let's see. 18 hours. With breaks." Ryujini sighed lying down."We can't rest for too long. Just a bit to regain our energy then go out again." Renna said sitting down.
"Okay, okay." Atrith said munching a piece of bread.
"So, Atrith, do you have any combat experience?" Ryujini said lifting his head up.
"Only a bit. I was front row, the dead men. But I made it through Blackfangs army right to himself. Then he nearly killed me." He said then taking another bite.
"Oh so you where supposedly the dead wait they use then they let the real men go out and kill them. How sad is it when a dead man shows up some of the best warriors." Renna chuckled taking a sip of water out from her canteen.
"Well it is kind of. I just want this Blackfang guy dead. Then maybe peace will return to the realms." Atrith sighed finishing his bread then closing his eyes. He put his head in his hand.
"Well if we don't kill him maybe there will be death and destruction and maybe his realm will be destroyed and the Cykarie Realm (otherwise know as the Sye Realm in the future) will have a waged war with a realm Blackfang named after himself." Ryujini said then paused. The three of them broke out laughing. "What a laugh. We will kill him the return to our normal lives. I hope we will end this." Atrith laughed a bit then smiled. After a few minutes then got back up and started out on the road once more. They reached a huge ominous castle with signs on the flags with a fang symbol in black. "Yep this is the place. Alright men! Let's head to the throne room! CHARGE!!!!!" Atrith yelled as they ran into the castle killing Blackfang's minions. They had soon came to the throne room and saw Blackfang sitting no the huge spiked throne. Blackfang smiled. "I was expecting my master to send you here. You're not the first to try to kill me. My mater even tried to kill me himself. He failed though heheheh." He said getting up. He pulled out a long scythe looking blade that glowed. He slashed it in the air and the next thing Atrith knew the shadow beings where dead. He was shocked as he looked back at Blackfang. He pulled out his silver sword and ran to him. "DIE!!!" he yelled swinging his sword. Blackfang had caught the sword and broke it in half. Atrith shot blue bolts of ice out from his fingers. Blackfang blocked them with his blade. He walked up to Atrith grabbing him by the collar. "Don't have fantasies about glory, this is a lesson to tell you stop daydreaming about glory and look at life." Blackfang smiled then got closer to his ear. "Don't worry, you'll end painless." With that Blackfang shoved the blade into Atriths stomach. He spewed blood then Blackfang took his blade out and watched as Atrith crumbled. "ATRITH!!!!" Renna yelled as she ran to him. Blackfang grabbed her neck and threw her to the wall. Ryujini shot a lighting bolt at Blackfang. He reflected it and the bolt his Ryujini sending him into the wall as well. Blackfang smiled as he grabbed Atriths body and ordered the servants to take the two others and bring them down to the dungeon. Blackfang carried the body down into a cave where a black wall stood. The body was chained to the wall with white chains. "This is just the beginning Hero." Blackfang smiled.






Chap 5, The Anew of a Dark Hero



A figure morphed out from the wall covered in a dark goop. A silver collar with a black amulet was around his neck. He breathed heavily as Blackfang looked down at him. "Welcome to the realm new servant." Blackfang sneered as the man looked up. He growled at him then sprang. The servants grabbed his arms and held him back. "It seems this man still has a hate for me. Maybe I couldn't create a new being from that body without any recall of his old life. But this is interesting." He smirked as the man tried to break free. "Go give him some armor. And a weapon. He'll need it." Blackfang glared as the man was taken away. He turned his head to the body at the wall when the servants left. "You may be useful, and dangerous. I may have to kill you later on. But I can tell you'll make an excellent apprentice. The man put on his dark armor and sighed. He got up and went to Blackfang. "You shall call me Drak. Nothing more, nothing less." He growled as him ready to shoot a dark blast at him. Drak turned around and looked at the body on the wall. "Who is this body?" He said examining it. "No-one you'll be worrying about." Blackfang said. Drak looked back at Blackfang with a harsh glare. "You better be right." He growled. He walked out from the secret cave and into the dungeon. He looked at cell that the twins where in. "Dont touch the prisoners! They are dangerous they are." The cell watcher said startled. Drak looked at him. "Relax; I will make good use of them." He frowned. He opened up the cell and walked in. "Come with me." He said as Renna and Ryujini got up and followed. "Who the heck is this guy?" Ryujini whispered. A dark blast shot near his ear and he froze. Drak glared at him. "My name is Drak, nothing more, nothing less." He growled. "Okay." Ryujini whimpered. "Say Drak, did you know what happened to a prisoner who might have nearly died or anything?" Renna asked.
"Well what does he look like?" Drak asked looking over his shoulder at them. His red eyes softened when he looked at her.
"He is 15 I think, has dirty blonde hair and blue eyes." She said thinking.
Drak stopped dead in his tracks. "No I don't know him, but I will find out soon." He said harshly. They reached the outside. "Okay I have to tie you two," he said looking at post and sighed. "This is stupid but, a post." He sighed then took their chain and tied them to the post. "No food or water for one week." He sighed then walked away. He threw open the doors and stormed into the throne room. "Blackfang I need to know the meaning of this!" he yelled getting up in Blackfangs face.
"What meaning?" Blackfang said.
Drak glared at him. "The two prisoners say they know that boy who is chained up on the wall. Who is he?" He said grabbing Blackfangs neck and holding him up in the air. "Honestly I don't know, but my master sent him to try to kill me. He's turning a bitoff."
"What do you mean?"
"I need you to assemble a group to kill him."
"Well do, what type of group are you looking for?"
"A powerful group."
"How bout the prisoners?" Drak pointed outside the window.
"Sure, but put these collars on them, these are like your's." Blackfang said pulling out two collars with black stones for the amulet.
Drak took them and walked down to the post they were tied to. He put the collars around their necks and untied them. "Good day for you, you get to kill Darkthorn with me." Drak smiled harshly with a hint of bittersweet in his tone. One half of his brain was telling him to just walk out from here, the other half was thinking, KILL
Draks other side was also being controlled by Blackfang. "Lets get ready and go to kill him." He smiled. The twins nodded.


Chap 6, The Chaos Starts



They wandered for a week and came upon the grate city that Darkthorn had control of. Drak signaled for them to go in the back way in the sewers. They dropped down in the sewers and walked forward. The three elite walked for hours till they found an opening. Drak kicked it open and jumped in. Ryujini lit a fireball to light the way. They where now under the palace gardens. Renna opened up a circle witch led them in the gardens. The hid in the shadows and switched from shadow to shadow and soon came to a back passage that led to the throne room. The barged in. "We've been sent by Blackfang to kill you Darkthorn." Drak growled. They ran to him. "What is this madness!? I thought Blackfang was slain by an army!"
"Blackfang can't be stopped." He said making two four sided blades appear in his hands. His skin turned deep shadow black. His hair turned white and eyes bright pale blue. His ears grew long. He was halfway Dark Elf. He slashed many times destroying everything in sight. "You better be ready for your death." He smiled with his sharp white teeth shown. He stabbed Darkthorn in the heart. "Remember The Day." He smiled then turned around. He returned to normal and fell over. Renna and Ryujini grabbed him and slung him over their shoulders. They walked for several weeks with day passing. Drak looked at his hands. He was a murderer. The blood of Darkthorns cold still body had stained him. With that final kill his heart turned to stone. He chuckled. "Would you like traveling side-by-side with a murderer?" He smiled. The twins looked at him with concern. "You snapped." Renna said.
"So what If snap? It will make me better at fighting, with no ties bringing me down I can kill anyone, even you two without a care." He laughed.
Renna looked at Ryujini. Ryujinis face was so angry and frustration. He got up and slapped him across the face. "You tell me that killing someone makes you feel good? What kind of sick person are you?! You are the opposite of the person we went with to kill Blackfang! I would trade you with Atrith any day!" He broke out. Drak eyes widened. The memory came back to him, his life, his fiancé, and his travel with the twins. "Ryujini. Im sorry, I forgot, about me." Drak said with tears. He looked up. He grabbed him and hugged him tight. Ryujini sighed and patted his head. "Okay, okay you can let go now." He sighed. Drak released him and sighed in relief. Well I cant go back to my old life. I guess I'll be serving Blackfang forever." He sighed with a tear rolling down his cheek. Renna got up and wiped the tear away. "Well at least you have us." She smiled. Drak couldn't help but smile too.



Chap 7, Yep Down Hill From Here. *Looks down cliff*



They reached Blackfang's castle and walked in the courtyard. Drak sighed then told the twins to wait there. He walked down into the secret cave with the black wall. There he stood looking at his old body. He gritted his teeth. "Blackfang" He growled. He felt a presence approach and he turned around to see Blackfang. "So youve figured out the great mystery to this body, or, your body. Too bad I own you. That collar signifies that you are mine." He smiled.
"I'm sick and tired of you! I want you to die!" He aid turning into his Dark Elf form. "Your flesh is forfeit!" He yelled slashing his blades. He grabbed Blackfang and threw him through the roof of the cave. He flew up through the hole and up into the courtyard. "I've just had about enough of you Drak." Blackfang growled as he pulled out his scythe-like blade. Drak made his four bladed blades appear. The slashed them around destroying everything. Drak slashed Blackfangs leg off. Blackfang smiled. "What are you smiling at?" Drak said angrily. Blackfang grabs the amulet Drak was wearing and started to shock him. He yelled returning back to normal and fell over. "I'll make sure that you and your twin friends forget everything from the start." He smiled as Drak passed out.





Chap 8, After The Ten Long Forgetful Years






Atrith,
That name was lost ten years ago. Memories are faint useless dreams now. Drak woke from the brackets on a cot. There he spied the twins. They had scars on their faces from long hard ten years. "Alright we need to go to Blackfang. He has a mission for us." Drak said rubbing his neck then they got up. Renna yawned and Ryujini rubbed his eyes.
They walked into the throne room to see Blackfang, the new ruler of the Nightmare Realm. "Ah Drak I've been waiting for you. I need you to do a long and perilous task for me. To prove your worth."
"And what is this task?"
"I need you to go to every Realm to see which ones I can take over and which ones are too powerful for now."
"I'll do it." Drak said looking strait into Blackfangs eyes. The group walked out and was led to the border of the city. "Alright lets get to the realm gates." He sighed as they started walking. It took seven weeks to finally arrive at the realm gates. There where portals by the millions. "So which one do we go in?" Ryujini said excitedly. He noticed a small looking portal by his right. This one." He pointed to the realm gate. Renna sighed yes and Ryujini was too happy to respond. They stepped in the portal and stepped on grass. Drak looked around. "Where are we?" Ryujini asked. "We are in the Tryiss Realm." Drak said. "This place seems familiar." He said looking around. "Well lets get going." Drak said.
They reached a small town by the third night. The three were wearing black cloaks. Drak jumped into a shadow with the twins following him. He signaled to go to the next shadow. "Alright, this realm is pathetic, good for Blackfang to take over." He whispered as a town guard came up behind them. "Look what we have here, a realm enemy." He laughed. Drak got up and walked up to the guard and grabbed his collar. His blood red eyes gleamed through the hood shadows. The guard collapsed dead. The twins stared at the dead guard body smiling. Ryujini looked around to see sword pointed at their necks. "I think we got caught." Ryujini said sheepishly. "You think? Oh well, time for fire Renna." Drak smiled. Renna nodded as the cloaks fell to the stone ground and they were gone. The three appeared on a roof. "Don't try to stop us, you'll get burned." He smiled. Renna and Ryujini started shooting fire from their finger tips and burning the homes and people. Drak heard a very familiar scream for help. He turned around to see a woman with long with long silky brown hair and bright blue eyes. He jumped down and caught the woman as she fell. Youll be safer not in this realm.
He smiled sweetly and almost angelic like. He helped her up. His smiled turned to a glare that looked more demonic like. "Get out of here, now." He said almost sounding like death itself. He transformed into his Dark Elf stage and black fire lit up on him. He smiled with teeth bearing. "Run while you have your life." He said laughing with a deep creature death like voice. He turned around walking up to the town and destroying it. His skin started to peel off and into bones. Two large horns grew on his shoulders. His bones turned a deep ebony ash black. His teeth where angel white and so was his hair. His eyes were glowing red and the only place there was skin. His armor was made of pure light and his dark bone wings had silver webbings. "What type of monstrosity is that sis?" Ryujini asked looking at what used to be Drak. "I think that's Draks full dark form." Renna said scared. He started ripping the realm dwellers apart. He found a wooden stake and took it. It turned into a black metal with a flag. The flag had a symbol of a black bone. He smiled then turned around to see the twins. Their faces were horrified to see what Drak had turned into. His eyes widened. He looked down at his monster like boned hands. His body was in fire with black flames. He was a complete Dark Elf. Tears streamed down the bones of his face. They turned black and fell to the ground turning into dust. He took a step. The skin was retuning to him slowly. Drak fell to his knees and looked at them. "I'm sorry." He said with the tears flooding down his cheeks. He fell over and the twins jumped down. "DRAK!" Rena yelled jumping down and taking his arm. Skin slowly grew on his bone arms. His hair returned back to raven black and his dark ebony skin turned a pale ashy white.





Chap 9, Days Of Dark Memories


Renna looked at the woman staring at them. "Who-who are you and why are you here?" He asked. "You will know who we are when you tell us who you are." Ryujini smiled handsome-like. "I am Nyra Tenala. I was engaged to a hero." She said with a tear rolling down her cheek. "And who is this hero?" Renna asked.
"He died ten years ago. He almost defeated an army of shadow-beings and their leader. His name is Atrith."
Renna and Ryujini looked at each other. "We never heard of him." The both said in confusion. "We are elites from Blackfang. We came to finish the job that we started ten years ago. And then move on and take over another Realm as we did before."
"Oh well then" She said starting to cry. "I guess we lost to the Nightmare Realm. We have no more hope. You three just happen to come and destroy our realm at our most horrible time. I'm sorry." She said then fell on her knees and broke out crying. Drak opened his eyes and got up. He flinched in the pain and walked over to Nyra. "I'm sorry but we are doing this by force. If we don't do what Blackfang tells us he might kill us off." He sighed and lifted her head up. "I'll tell Blackfang that this realm can't be taken over. In the memory of Atrith." He smiled softly. Nyras eyes widened. "Sorry you just looked like Atrith for a second, but you can never be him. He has dirty blonde hair and blue eyes. The soldiers said they couldn't find his body. Well he might still be living but I don't know that." She smiled painfully. "I'm so sorry." He said with tears falling. He forced out a smiled. "You don't have to smile." She laughed while crying. "Hey Renna, something seems familiar about this girl. And her fiancé." Ryujini whispered. Renna nodded examining them. "If you ever find Atrith, tell him, I love him." She said smiling.
"I'll do that." He smiled back. "Let's go guys, there's nothing more to see here." Drak said turning to the twins. The nodded and walked off. Nyra watched as they were leave. Her eyes widened. There as the sun was rising she saw Drak as Atrith. "Atrith" She said putting her hands on her mouth then started crying again. "I'm glad I got to see you one last time." She said turning around and walked to the church and taking a Bible and was reading it.
Drak turned his head around. "I hope she will see Atrith again." Ryujini sighed. "I think she already did." He smiled then turned his head back to the road.

aww. i'm sorry word broke. \: it's a good story so far.

hey guies what i'm starting this back up again!