Warrior Cats: The Four Clans

Goldheart · ThunderClan Warrior

Goldheart's Writing. ||Chapter 3! 9-1 Second updat today!||

Goldheart · ThunderClan Warrior

RE: Goldheart's Writing. ||Prologue UP. Name in Progress. 8-31||

Ebonycloud · WindClan Deputy

*Tackleglomp!* Hurray! Goldie is writing a story! XD I loves it when you writes storiez ^w^ There must be fanart >=D I shall be making them! Mwahahaha! I love this story already and when its far enough along i shall make you a fanart, hows that sound?

Rustfur · Rogue

YAY GOLDY! I LOVE IT! it's really good! i want to read more!

Goldheart · ThunderClan Warrior

D'awwww!!!!! Please Ebbs??? =] That would be amazing!!! (quick reply has been cutting my posts off...grrr.) I love you and thank you! And thank YOU Rusty! I love both of you so much!

-- Edited by Goldheart on Tuesday 1st of September 2009 02:50:18 AM

Goldheart · ThunderClan Warrior

"Sootfur, how is she doing?" the young she-cat heard someone whisper. She kept her eyes closed as tight as she could. Where was she?

"She'll be fine, she should wake up any day now." She heard a deep voiced tom mumble. How long had she been out? Where was she? Who were these cats? "Little one? Are you awake?" She heard the soft smooth voice of the first cat that had spoken. It was perfect, it sounded like a calm stream lightly passing over pebbles in the brook. She opened one eye, and quickly clamped it shut again. It was so bright. She forced both her eyes open and saw a tall, sturdy she-cat standing in front of her. She scrambled to her feet, and looked the she cat over. She was a soft sand color, with a mixture of brown, and bright bright amber eyes. She spoke again, "You've been out for a few days now. We found you after you fell into our camp." The she cat tilted her head and smiled.

How could she not trust this she cat. She looked at the tom standing next to her as he spoke, "I'm Sootfur, this is Leafstar."

She again looked from either cat. They were looking at her as if she was supposed to introduce herself next. She opened her mouth to say her name, but she couldn't remember. "I'm, um..." Her paws kneaded the ground and she giggled nervously.

"Do you remember?" The one called Sootfur asked.

The young she cat shook her head, embarrassed. "Its okay," Leafstar said, "Sootfur said you had quite a fall, I'm sure you're memory is simply lodged right now. We'll give you a name, do you remember where you came from?"

Again, the young cat shook her head. Leafstar nodded. "You can stay here for as long as need be, and if your memory comes back, and you would like to go back to where you came from, then you can."

"Ebonypaw! I told you to stay out of here!" Sootfur abruptly said. The new cat whipped her head to the right and saw a young dark tom crouching in the den entrance.

"I'm just trying to help!" The young tom said as his whiskers twitched with irritation with the scornful look Sootfur was giving him.

Leafstar chuckled, "This," She twitched her tail, at the tom, "Is Ebonypaw, he's been checking in on you for the past few days."

The she cat watched him. He sat up boldly and licked his chest, as if trying to make himself seem bolder than he was. She giggled.

Leafstar stood. "I'm sure Ebonypaw will tell you all about the ways of the Clan so we won't have to." She said, with a light in her eyes. She stood and walked out and flicked Ebonypaw on the ear as she went, "We're holding her naming ceremony at mid day, so you can tell her all about apprentices, and warriors, whatever you can." She smiled at the excitement in the young toms eyes, and walked off.

He sat back down, and watched the young she cat.

To be honest, she felt rather small in his gaze, it hit her again that she had no idea who she was or where she came from. The young tom smiled at her, "So, you're staying with us now. You'll love it. Clan life is exciting. You may want to sit down though, there's a lot to tell!"

He padded over to her and sat down, she curled up a little ways away from him. Still not sure who these cats were. She looked down at her fur and saw that there were mud stains everywhere. Her fur looked brown! So she began to lick herself as Ebonypaw began rambling.

"There are warriors and apprentices in a clan. And the leader, deputy, and medicine cat. Oh, and the elders, but they're always grumpy and telling you to do things for them. But anyway, you're about to have a naming ceremony, where they will give you a name and it will end in 'paw' so show that you are an apprentice. And then, you'll be assigned a mentor. Who will teach you the ways of the code and how to hunt and fight!"

She looked up, "Hunt and fight?" She asked nervously.

"Yeah! It's the best part!" Chided Ebonypaw, "We hunt for food for the clan, so that we can eat, over there," he flicked his tail, "Is the fresh kill pile. You have to bring food back before you can eat. But you're mentor will tell you that. Our leader is Leafstar, she has nine lives, well eight now, because there was a battle, but I was just a kit so I didn't get to be in it."

And Ebonypaw continued explaining the ways of the camp while the young she cat weighed on every word that he said. When he was finished, she felt really superior now. Like she knew everything. Her mind was clouded with all this knew knowledge and she couldn't wait to put it to use! She stood and stretched. "Could you show me around the camp?" She asked excitedly, she was starting to get ansty. She wanted to know everything there was to know about this clan. Her new family. They made there way out of the den.

Leafstar sat with Sootfur and they discussed the new arrival of the young she cat. "I think she'll be a great addition to our clan." Leafstar spoke. And Sootfur nodded in agreement.

"We were needing a few extra hands anyway." Leafstar nodded at what Sootfur said. She began grooming her fur, when she noticed Sootfur's mouth drop, "What are you looking at?" Sootfur didn't say a word. Leafstar followed his gaze and her mouth dropped too.

It was the new she cat, making her way out of the medicine den, and her fur, shone like the sun.

Ebonycloud · WindClan Deputy

RE: Goldheart's Writing. ||Prologue UP. AND Chapter 1! 8-31||

Rustfur · Rogue

COOL!!! NCE STORY I WANT TO READ MORE! i wonder if i could be in there, but then again nobody knows what rust's personality is. i'm gunna plan to make a past for him. yesh HIM.

Goldheart · ThunderClan Warrior

Ebbs: Alright =] Thank you again! I'm so excited to see them!!!

Rusty: You should certainly make a bio! I would LOVE to know more about Rustfur!!

"Sootfur, we don't even know if she's a threat or not." Leafstar protested as Sootfur dragged her into her den.

"But we don't know if she can be trusted either." The gray, black tom hissed, as he watched Ebonypaw show her the freshkill pile right outside the den. He looked back to his leader, "We thought Lionfang could be trusted too!"

The leader's fur stood on end and she hissed as that name was spoken. "She's not going to be like him! She doesn't even know who she is!"

"She could be lying!"

"Sootfur, I trust your judgement but not this time! I looked into her eyes and I KNOW what I saw. She's telling the truth."

"Leafstar, do you realize how much she looks like-"

"Don't say that name again!" She spat at him. "I'm the leader of this clan and I make the decision! SHE STAYS."

Sootfur didn't bother to protest. He narrowed his eyes. "Fine, but I'm not going to trust her." With that he stormed out of the den.

"And this is where we sleep!" Ebonypaw exclaimed. The golden she cat walked into the den. It was like a little burrow in the ground, The entrance went almost straight down, and into a little canal, where it came out to a den.

"Wow!" She breathed. Everything was so perfect here.

"Come on! I'll show you the warriors." She sped up right after him, and they exited the den just in time to see Sootfur storming our of the leaders den, and to what Ebonypaw told her was the medicine cat den.

"Don't worry, thats usual behavior for Sootfur. Him and Leafstar are always arguing. But, they've known each other since they were born! What else could you expect? Come on!" He took off and she quickly followed. He flicked his tail to another dean much like the Apprentices' "That, is the warriors den."

The yound she cat noticed a few warriors sitting outside, and their mouths dropped. She shrunk back but Ebonypaw stood tall and brave beside her.

"This is my new friend. She's the cat that dropped into our clan, Leafstar is letting her stay!" The young golden cat watched two of the warriors give her wary stares but heard a tom speak up from behind them.

"Hello, it's nice to have a new addition to our clan." She whipped around and saw a huge tom with deep brown fur and bright green eyes. "I am the deputy of this clan, Darkmeadow. You're ceremony is about to start." He flicked is tail to where Leafstar came out of her den and jumped onto a rock to show her authority.

Most of the cats gave her stares that made her feel rather unwelcomed, while others smiled at her. She stood beside Ebonypaw.

"Let all cats, young and old, gather here, for a clan meeting." Leafstar waited till all of the cats were settled, and she spoke again. "As many of you know, a young she cat fell into our camp a few days ago, and as most of you know, she's now awake and running around the camp like any apprentice should." Her eyes danced with laughter as she looked down on Ebonypaw and his friend. "I've asked her to join the clan if she wishes, she doesn't remember much about her past at all, Sootfur says it was due to the fall, so we will be giving her a name." She paused, as if she expected objections. Her eyes rested on the golden she cat, "Would you step forward?"

Her eyes flashed to Ebonypaw as he nudged her forward with his nose. She stood before Leafstar, her heart beating so incredibaly loudly, she was sure the entire world could hear it, and her legs were shaking.

"From this day forth you will be known as, Goldpaw. Goldpaw, you've chosen to join Stormclan, and we know that you will do whatever is needed to be loyal, and true to your clan." She licked the young she cats forehead, and she listened as everyone cheered her name. Her heart overflowed with joy as everyone accepted her. "You will need a mentor, and I see no one better suited for it than," She paused, and then said, "Darkmeadow." The crowd cheered, he was obviously a favorite.

Darkmeadow stepped up to Goldpaw and licked her on the forehead, and she licked his shoulder like Ebonypaw told her too. "Welcome to the clan Goldpaw." Darkmeadow told her. She smiled, Goldpaw. She thought. I could get used to that.

As the ceremony took place, eyes from above looked down. And a large tom watched. His mouth stretched into a menacing grin. "Perfect."

Ebonycloud · WindClan Deputy

RE: Goldheart's Writing. ||Chapter 2! 9-1||