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TOPIC: Forever Moon *chapter three up*


ThunderClan Medicine Cat Apprentice

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oohh!! rogue attack! i love this more and more moons! it gets more suspenceful! :hearts:

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Awww, thanks so much Timbie!! :D I'm so glad that you like it! Oooohh, roguesss! They play a big part in this story.

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Just for notice, I did alot of editing on Chapter Two. it's still in the same post. i just took out the old one and pasted the new one xDD Just for the record.

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Mmk, most of Chapter Three is written so i'm just letting you guys know that it should be up soon! I do have my first day of school tomorrow, though, so don't get your hopes up. I just wanted to let you guys know that i'm not abandoning this, haha. xD

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I cant wait to read it buddy! I would love very much to know what happens to lil' Moonie! XD

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Haaha! Thanks Ebbs! :33 Well, here's Ch. 3!

Chapter Three

Moonpaw gasped. Rogues around RiverClan camp?
                "Do you suppose theyre preparing an attack?" Maplenoses voice was quivering.

Thrushpaw crouched, eyes flaring with determination. "If they were, Id rip their fur off!"

"But what would they possibly gain from an attack?" Whitebird asked. "The scent was rather fresh, but theyve obviously gone now. Wouldnt they have attacked already if theyd been planning to?"

"We should invade their territory and see how much they like it then!" Thrushpaw suggested, an evil glint in his amber eyes.

"Quiet down," Redleaf instructed them calmly. "This is Birchstars ordering. We should report this to him and he will decide what to do about it. Come," he waved his ginger tail. "Lets go back."

The patrol moved swiftly on the way back to camp; it was not soon after that they arrived. Thrushpaw lashed his paws as if he were attacking an enemy. "Hurry, lets tell Birchstar! I cant wait to claw those mangy crow-food eaters flanks off!"

Eyes wide, Moonpaw stared as she saw Redleaf whisper what they had discovered to Birchstar. The respectful leaders fur bristled at the news, and he bounded up onto the high rock.

"Let all the cats old enough to catch their own prey gather before the high rock for a Clan meeting!" He sounded rather worried.

Slowly, cats stumbled out of their cozy dens to sit under the high rock. Moonpaw saw Thinwhisker spitting in annoyance to the other elders at how Birchstars call had interrupted a pleasant sleep. Pantherheart curled up next to Gingerstorm, his plump mate, by the nursery, as to not force the pregnant she-cat to walk long distances with a full belly. Moonpaw pressed her flank against Littlepaws, awaiting the news that she already knew.

Birchstar began. "Redleafs border patrol has brought back some interesting and possibly threatening news." Moonpaw noticed cats around her reposition themselves, anxious. Their leader continued. "Whitebird has scented rogues on the RiverClan border." Gasps rose from the Clan. "The scent smelled as if the rogues had been here early dawn."

"Well, we cant let them get away with this!" Thinwhisker spat, lashing her ginger tail.

Murmurs of agreement rippled throughout the crowd.

"Hush," Birchstar ordered. "These rogues pose no threat to us now, so in the meantime there is nothing we need to do."
                Yowls of disapproval echoed about.

"What?" Pantherheart hissed. "Youre letting trespassing rogues go unpunished?"

"This is an outrage!" Maplenose agreed.

"Im going to track down those pieces of fox dung and rip their claws off!" Snakestripe promised, his pelt prickling.

"No one is going to do anything unless I order so!" Birchstar growled fiercely, leaping off of the high rock without giving any of his Clanmates a chance to comment.

Moonpaw shivered at the complaints being tossed about her Clan; her pelt bristled when she sensed the tension pulsing swiftly through the Clan. No cat seemed to be happy with Birchstars decision. Silently, she padded to her den, trying to be rid of them. She didnt think the strategy her leader had ordered them was really that horrible. But what if Birchstar really is making the wrong decision? What will become of RiverClan if rogues rip us to shreds?



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anybody liikeee ittt?? :D

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this is amazing Moonster!
I love the way you go into detail; on how you put a lot of effort into each cat's words. And just making a whole little story on the clan meeting and the rougue attack is truly awesome
keep it up moons!
TIMBA

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darlin',
you're hiding in the closet
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I know you're tryin', real hard
not to turn your head away
pretty darling, face tomorrow
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shfjkshfjsdfh thank you SOO much Timbeenie!! :D [i love making up weird nicknames that will never be used again on the spot x3]
that means a lot!!
the rogue attack isn't just a plain old rogue attack, however... there's a lot of background information you guys don't know yet!

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oohhlala!!
timbereennie... :3

rite moor moonsters! i need to read moreeeee ::dies::
OR ELSE MEE WILLZ KILZZZZ YOUUUUUU!!!

jk :3


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darlin',
you're hiding in the closet
once again, start smiling.
I know you're tryin', real hard
not to turn your head away
pretty darling, face tomorrow
tomorrow's not yesterday. <3

 

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