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TOPIC: Warrior cats-The Animals Unlocked: CHAPTER TWELVE POSTED ON PAGE NINE!
What's your favorite chapter [12 vote(s)]

MAH KITTEH i told ya' I havn't read it yet! D<
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I LIKE EM ALL SO MEH KITTEH! :3
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ShadowClan Warrior

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RE: Warrior cats-the animals unlocked Scorchhearts new story O.O Please do not claw my poor ears off!Chapters 1-5


Thanks! I'm still working on it, but I finay got five chapters! WOOT!

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It's good.

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Thanks Jaggedpine. =)

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i love the story its so good!

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Warrior cats-The Animals Unlocked: ALERT! CHECK OUT PAGE NINE! ENTIRE STORY POSTED THERE! Or what I have so far. =3


Yep! SO, I need some help on this part. There are going to be seven others that turned into kits, and a second group of evil kits that were created by the evil doctor that are exactly like the RP characters we created. I need to get some help with the ones I'm gonna choose to be on my side, and the dark kits names. Please leave a list of ideas below, cuz I really want to be able to get alot of names for who wants to be in the rest of the story.

Current open spots:

Dark Kits: (characters from RPs, with exact discriptions)

names:
1. Shadowshot
2. Flystar
3. Pantherstar
4. Lionblaze
5. open
6. open
7. open
8. open

Metakit: (people from the forums/RP characters)

names:
1.Scorchheart
2.Aurapaw
3.Jaggedpine
4.Twigstorm
5. Pandorapaw
6. open
7. open
8. open

Hollykits:(Good RP characters. Can be any RP character. Only RP characters)

names:
1. Stark
2. Frost
3.Tigerpaw
4.Wetmoon
5.Halosong
6.Ravenfrost
7.Goldenflower
8.Gingerpaw

I just want to know who wants to be in the next part of the story, and what RP characters you guys will let me use. I might use some of mine though. Can you guys also leave a pic with the person ya' want in the story? It would help a lot with the discriptions. =3




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RE: Warrior cats-the animals unlocked Scorchhearts new story O.O Please do not claw my poor ears off!Chapters 1-5


Here's the missing part to chapter five. This'll be before the characters introduce themselves and the descriptions are explained, since the list isn't quite full yet.=3

chapter five cont:

The sound of gunfire rang out through the street as the man pulled the trigger, and evil grin crossing his face like a sick cartoon character. But the bullet had only grazed my shoulder. I may have transformed, but I hadn't forgotten my life and what I knew. Thhe guy dropped the gun luaghing and pointing at me, thinking he'd killed me. I was in shock from the loud bang the silver pistole had made, and the other kits were staring with wide eyes. But the gun had rolled over, and it was next to me.

I picked up the heavey weapon, and its size took up nearly all of my tiny and stubby arms. I raised it up, gasping with the effort to aim at the man, who had stopped laughing, and was holding his hands up with an alarmed look on his face. "Asta la bye bye... freak!" I sqeaked at him in fury. The shot rang out as I managed to squeeze the trigger of the large gun, and the man fell over, blood leaking out of his forehead. I had shot him, and the shot had hit.

I stared at him with a look of shock that only flickered across my face for a mere second before I turned on the other men. "That's right. Get lost or yer dead freaks." I sqeaked at them in a cold and peircing little voice, that seemed to now boom through the street. They stared at me with scared eyes, and ran into the truck, driving off and screaming like banchees. I knew I would have pulled that trigger if they hadn't made a run for it. And so did the other kits that were around me.

I turned to the others, and then heard the screaching of tires as they looked at me yet again with terror. The van was coming back! "Well don't just stand there, run for it!"I cried to the others as we fled the alleged crime scene, not looking back. I heard sirins as we ran, thinking of the cops. We turned and ran into the forest that was oh so close, and kept running, stumbling over our tiny legs with the effort, a black kit leading the way next to me.

After hours of running through the cold and never ending forest, we all stopped in a small and secluded looking clearing.

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Chapter 6

We had fallen asleep in the clearing, and as the first of the sun's rays shined on the tiny clumps of colored fur that was us, a new day started. Little did we know that we would be meeting something that could change our very lives.

I was the first to wake that morning, stretching my stubby paws and yawning. I looked around with my blank red eyes, and they seemed to grow even more distant with each turning glance. I had hoped that this had all been some nightmare, and that I was snoozing in my bed with my over energetic mother screaming her head off at me. But it was all real.

I stood with my tiny red and black furred body quivering and shaking with the lack of warmth. The others were all huddled with me in a large group ofwhat looked like a patchwork quilt. I squeezed my way through them and stood away from the group, my appearence becoming clearer with each ray of the sun that reached my small and cold body.

I looked exactly like my RP character, Cloudandis. I had black paws, ears, a black tipped tail, red fur, black stripes along my back, and a black stripe that went from my muzzle to my rear end. And even more to my astonishment, I was unemotional. I tried to grin, didn't work. I tried to cry, didn't work. The only difference was that I was a cat. Not a wolf.

My eyes fell upon the others who were silently resting, their tiny chests slowly going up and down with each intaking and releasing of air. I padded back over to the with my stubby legs that looked a bit stronger than they had yesterday. "Hello? C'mon, wake up."I told them in a strangly calm voice. They all hopped up with startled expressions on their faces, and then we all sat in a type of circle. We sat in silence for a few moments, until one of the kits spoke up. "Hi. Who are-" but before she could finish speaking, a group of cat jumped out at us. We didn't know who they were at first until they spoke up.

"What are you doing in Shadowclan territory?!" hissed a black tabby, his peicing blue eys staring at us with a cold look. "You mean Thunderclan territory!" another cat hissed, his muscles showing through his brown stripped fur. "Oh Brambleclaw, stop it! They're on the border of Shadowclan and Thunderclan!" hissed another cat with A red flaming pelt. "Hold yer' tongue Squerrelflight!" hissed the black tabby, who was now eyeing us with a twisted grin on his face. We all stared at eachother with confusion. These were the cats from the books!

"Like you've much to speak about!"spat squerrelflight with anger flashing in her emerald green eyes. Suddenly, all three of the cats leapt for us. We all dodged and started running, the three behind our tails. We were fast for our small size. "Catch them before they head to Riverclan!"Screamed Brambleclaw, who was nearly ready to catch me by the scruff. We were getting exhausted. SUddenly, I spotted the lake. I started leading the others towards it. THere was a boat, and we were going to catch it.

More and more cats appeared, and so did their leaders, all of them wondering why these cats were tresspassing. THey saw us and started yelling at me, trying to get me to stop in order to stop the other kit. We saw another patrol chasing a second group of kits, with a small black kit leading the way. I hopped into the small boat at the lake with my group of kits who had jumped in at the same time. The boat was now crossing over the lake, thanks to some of the cats crashing into it. It was being propelled to the other side of the lake, and the cats were heading there too.

I heard one of the cats shout, "Wha-? All of the clans are out her, fer cryin out loud!"he was right. All of the clan cats were chasing us! "Get to the other side of the lake!" Firestar yowled to his cats as they closed in on our boat. we jumped out and streaked under their legs, and were heading through Riverclan territory, and back into Shadowclan. "Remember the books?! There's an abandoned cottage here, and a camp that we can go into!" I called back to my group of kits as we tore through the forest. THe cats had heard us, and didn't know our vocabulary, so they all started trying to find a way around us.

The cats were far behind us as we stopped at the abandoned two-leg place, my stubby legs shaking with over usage. We all went inside and I lead them slowly up the stairway up into the top floor. An old, moth eaten matteress lay on the flor with a torn up blanket on top of it. We all huddled under the blanket, and went to sleep just like that.

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Warrior cats-The Animals Unlocked!Chapters 1-7 up! Requesting help with chapter 8! Check page two for details!


Chapter 7
We all woke up the next day after sleeping for an extra seven hours. I yawned and stretched, my small size not helping me with trying to get the large and torn up blanket off of my small bidy. Some of the others didnt want to get up, and they grumbled with the effort of trying to keep the blanket over themselves. "Wow, this place is weird! I cant beleive were actauly here!" one of the kit squealed in delight. "Well, were cats, er kits, and we need breakfast, and from what the books in the second series of warrior cats said, there's plenty of prey to go around in this house."I sleepily mewed.

"But..weve never tasted a dead mouse and things like that." another one mewed in protest. "I cant say much, but we have to eat if we want to live. ANd from the looks of it, you guys were in the slumms like I was" I repleid in my calm and unenotional voice, knowing that some of these kits might recognize me from the RP my character was in. "Im gonna catch some food."I added to the kits as the rest of them bleerily got up and started walking around, tripping over their stubby legs.

I came back with a large rabbit in my mouth, my chest heaving with each breath as I tried to take it over to the others. It would feed all of us with its large size. "How could you have caught that and not ended up dead? Its impossible!" a kit cried as I brought it over. "Not even a drop of blood is on your pelt!" she reminded me of Souki. "Well, it saw me and tried to run away when it fell down the stairs and broke its neck."I calmly replied. "It was hard to get this huge thing all the way back up here with out fallin down the dtairs."

The others reluctantly went over to the dead rabbits body, each taking a tiny nibble of the still warm flesh. Surprised looks came across their faces as I too took a bite."Wow, this is good! I didn't know bunnehs tasted like this!" one of them squealed. She reminded me of Mossflower. I took a few more bites, and soon, we were all litteraly inhaling the rabbits flesh as we nibbled away at it.

Now there was just an ear left, and I and another kit stared at eachother. All of the other kits were stuffed with rabbit meat, and were excitedly watching who would get the last bit. I sat down and stared at the other kit with a blank look on my face."Ya wanna share it?" I asked him calmly. But before he could answer, another kit leapt into the room and leapt at the rabbit ear, and started running off with it. My group of kits started bursting with laughter, staring at me and the other kit as we chased the black kit around the room, trying to get the ear back.


After much running and jumping, I had the ear in tiny mouth, and the other two kits were staring at eachother with exhaustion. They saw the ear and now I was getting chased around! I jumped ontop of the mattress as they chased me and I bounced straight out the window, leaving the ear there. All the other kits ran up to the window seal to find me on the other one that was on the floor below them!

"What the?! Are you okay?!"one of the kits shouted down to me as I sat there. The black kit was nibbling on the ear we had fought over. "Fine. How'd I get down here?"I called up. Suddenly, the window seel gave way and I feel into, or ontop of the branch of a nearby tree. The other kts were still staring at me when I looked down. I saw two cats coming towards the house. They were Firestar and Brambleclaw! The other kits had sat back on the bed, trying to think of what to do. Except for the black kit. He had just dissapeared.

I fell out of the tree as Firestar and Brambleclaw were coming closer to the house, and ended up softly landing on Brambleclaw's head! Brambleclaw looked up at me and I looked down. Firestar was just comin closer about to nab me, and then I skerted of back towards the house. I saw a few more Thunderclan cats right on my tail as I went in shouting"We've been found!"

The other kits started scrambling about the house, trying to find a place to hide. I ran up the stairs and they his in anyplace they could find, and one tried out a mouse hole! Brambleclaw,Firetar,Squerrelflight,Leafpool, and Spiderleg entered the house and started searching for us. I was hiding on the staircase, when one of them saw me. He leapt at me, trying to get ahold on my scruff, and I fell off of the stairs. Thinking silently"Ah well. My ma doesn't have to pay funeral bills til she finds me" and suddenly, I landed on Spiderleg. He turned and tried to catch me, and missed me. All of the other kits were already running outside too!

We streaked out of the house with the Thunderclan cats a few tail lengths away, and went straight into Riverclan territiry. I saw Mothwing drinking at the river and leapt over her with the rest of the kits as we tore through the forest, trying to find a way to escape this madness. Suddenly, we all came to a halt as we noticed yet another cat in front of us. Leopardstar. "How the-?"she cried as we crashed into her. We all ran off as soon as we got up, some of us appologizing to her.

As we ran, we looked back to find that we now had TWO patrols on our tails, and they were just a few foxlengths away. How we had gotten into such a mess still remains a question in my mind. We all saw the Shadowclan border, and only half of us stayed together. One half ran back into Riverclan, while I and three others ran into Shadowclan.  Realizing where we had gone, the others soon caught up. I saw an abandoned fox den and leapt in with the others close behind. We all hid there until we were sure that they had left us, and then started talking.

"That was? And he was?!" a kit astoundedly cried as the others listened. "Those were the very cats from the second series books." one of then answered in a sure voice. "But how??!" another one said. It was mid day. "We don't have much stamina. Let's take a nap before anything else."I told them. And yet again, we fell asleep.




-- Edited by Scorchheart on Monday 8th of March 2010 12:03:28 PM

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Chapter 8

I was the first to wake up in the abandoned fox den, only to find a cat staring at me and the rest of the kits. I slowly backed away, the others sleeping and taking o notice of the large cat. And yet as I took a closer look, I noticed that the cat was just looking in...with his eyes closed. He was asleep. I sighed with relief. The other kits just kept sleeping with their chests slowly heaving up and down like a water bed. I looked the cat that had intruded over. His body was ice cold, and he didn't notice a small mew in his ear that I gave him, trying to see if he was alive. I walked to the outside of the fox den and then turned away. He was dead, and half of his body was missing. The ground was splattered with blood, and the cat's empty eyes kept staring at me like a ghost's.

I walked back into the den, waking the others up. It was late afternoon, and soon it would be dusk. I wasn't about to sleep around a cat's carcass, so I lead them out as we headed for a better place to sleep. We were all exhausted from all of the running around we had done, and our small, stubby legs were too tired to carry us any further. I saw a small, den like space underneath a tree, and the roots were showing. It looked deep enough to hide us and let us out, so we all climbed into it. We had a lot of energy from sleeping so much, and half of the other kits were bouncing all over the place just trying to get rid of the energy.

I looked outside of our little den and spied a group of cats moving the dead cat's body away for vigil. They carried him off to their camp, where ever that was. I checked out our surroundings an guessed we were in Thunderclan territory. That meant we would probably be running from Brambleclaw and another patrol. The others and I all sat quietly. We fell asleep late that night, and with calm thoughts and dreams in our heads too.

The others and I woke up early the next morning, careful to not make too much noise. I decided to scout since some of them were still sleepy. I wanted to make sure a hunting patrol hadn't spotted us. The others stumbled around, yawning or listening to their stomachs growl. I decided to try my luck by looking for another already dead rabbit, or mabe a dead bird. Sure enough, I saw some Thunderclan warriors taking in some large looking voles and other prey, so I snuck up on them. While they weren't looking I slowly nabbed a fat looking vole and started to walk away.

I got back to the others who were waiting for me to bring the vole in. We started in, and when we finished, the only thing left were the bones. Pretty soon, we would be good at that type of thing, with a little more training. Introductions were also needed. "So, I'm guessing you guys are also from the forums?" the others nodded. "I'm Scorchheart. Although, I think they kinda got meh appearence mixed up."I told them.

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This is awesome!

You could use Flystar on the dark kit's side too!


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